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as slamu ale kum
apni barbadi ke qisse me btati kisko
me pareshan hun?? ye baat btaun kisko
koi bhi apna nahi aaj ki duniya me suno
jis ko samjha tha apna??? btaun kisko
pyaar chahat wafaye karee jisse
mil saki phirbhi na wafa btau kisko
tuat kar me bikhar gai gham se
dil ki bate hei ye kese btau kisko
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apnakhayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIJ
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2010, 02:15:10 AM » |
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yun to tumne keh dia hume bewafa
kya karte kuch majburiyan thi kar na sake hum wafa
gar ishq tha mujhse to zara aitvaar krti
shayd fir iss tarah na toot kar koi gila karti
tumse jaada mai bikhra mai toota
sambhal na paye aaj tak tera jo haath mere daaman se chhuta
bas rone or shikwa karne ki kabiliyat mujhme nhi
janti ho tum bhi ki patthar dil to mai bhi nahi
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Hameeda ji---- bahot khubsurat likha hai aapne
khus rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2010, 07:06:16 AM » |
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as slamu ale kum
apni barbadi ke qisse me btati kisko
me pareshan hun?? ye baat btaun kisko
koi bhi apna nahi aaj ki duniya me suno
jis ko samjha tha apna??? btaun kisko
pyaar chahat wafaye karee jisse
mil saki phirbhi na wafa btau kisko
tuat kar me bikhar gai gham se
dil ki bate hei ye kese btau kisko
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apnakhayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIJ
wale kum as salam hameeda ji, bahut achhi koshish ki he apne.. yunhi likhte rahiye.. dher saari daad~ |
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2010, 07:54:28 AM » |
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bht achche hamida ji......keep writing
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2010, 08:54:53 AM » |
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KYA BAAT BAAT yun to tumne keh dia hume bewafa
kya karte kuch majburiyan thi kar na sake hum wafa
gar ishq tha mujhse to zara aitvaar krti
shayd fir iss tarah na toot kar koi gila karti
tumse jaada mai bikhra mai toota
sambhal na paye aaj tak tera jo haath mere daaman se chhuta
bas rone or shikwa karne ki kabiliyat mujhme nhi
janti ho tum bhi ki patthar dil to mai bhi nahi
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Hameeda ji---- bahot khubsurat likha hai aapne
khus rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2010, 11:43:14 AM » |
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Hameeda ji Waalekum Assalaam
bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne... bahut badhiya... !
dard aap ko bhi hai lagta hai zakhm koi gehra hai
kuch daag baaki hain uske saanso par ab bhi pehra hai
kya kahun ki dawa ho yaa duaa ho teri is haalat ki
ye dil hota to baat banti ye dil to dard ka sehra hai !
Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2010, 01:51:31 PM » |
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bht khub jawab hai aapka intezaar ji......do keep writing
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2010, 01:57:16 PM » |
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Shukriya Kasak ji... hume nazar mein laane ke liye... Intezar ! bht khub jawab hai aapka intezaar ji......do keep writing
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2010, 04:11:23 AM » |
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as slamu ale kum
apni barbadi ke qisse me btati kisko
me pareshan hun?? ye baat btaun kisko
koi bhi apna nahi aaj ki duniya me suno
jis ko samjha tha apna??? btaun kisko
pyaar chahat wafaye karee jisse
mil saki phirbhi na wafa btau kisko
tuat kar me bikhar gai gham se
dil ki bate hei ye kese btau kisko
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apnakhayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIJ
Good one Ji |
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 01:49:46 AM » |
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as slamu ale kum
Tujhse ho kaar judaa mere saajan
Teri yadon me mei to khoi hun
Tujh ko malum hi nahi sajan
Kitna tadpi kitna royi hun
Pyaar mera kabhi na jana tu
Ban gaya aesa naadan saajan kun
Meri nazre meri surat dekh
Pyaar chehre ka padh na paya kun
Mang le jaan dedun hans kar mei
Baat ye janta nahi he kun
Dhundle pyar sari duniya mei
Na pasakega mere jesa tu
apna khayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIZ
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 04:52:36 AM » |
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wahhhh hameedaji ... wah
kamal likhti hain aap.. ek dam dil se aur ek dam dil ko..
daad kubool karen
khush rahen
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2011, 02:55:27 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Hameeda ji Waalekum Assalaam
bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne... bahut badhiya... !
dard aap ko bhi hai lagta hai zakhm koi gehra hai
kuch daag baaki hain uske saanso par ab bhi pehra hai
kya kahun ki dawa ho yaa duaa ho teri is haalat ki
ye dil hota to baat banti ye dil to dard ka sehra hai !
Intezar !
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2011, 02:57:10 PM » |
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