Apni najar se keh do

by nandbahu on April 25, 2013, 12:15:50 PM
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Apni najar se keh do
Unhe itni bat samjha do

Taake na hume roj iss terah
Majboor hume na kare bevajah

Arma jag na jaye soye
Langh na jaye kahin seemayein

Khata kuchh na ho jaye humse
Dosh na lagana phir tum humpe

Teer na chalye dil pe har pal
Ghayal kar jati hain har pal

Mujhko sataya na karein hardum
Bekaboo kar jati hai mera bhola man  
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 01:20:12 PM »
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aapne likha acha hai Nanad ji
lekin aap spellings aur rhythm pr ka khyal rakhie

ummeed hai aap bura nhi maani hongi meri baato ka

khus rhie
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2013, 02:12:52 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2013, 03:20:08 PM »
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bohat khoob,..........
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2013, 12:17:38 PM »
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aapne likha acha hai Nanad ji
lekin aap spellings aur rhythm pr ka khyal rakhie

ummeed hai aap bura nhi maani hongi meri baato ka

khus rhie
aate rhie
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thanx sarfira j comments karne ke liye, aapke suugestions par avashya dyan dunga.
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2013, 12:22:17 PM »
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nand ji main bhi sf ji ki baat se sahmat hoon ,, but nice lines likhte raha kijiye janab
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