Armaan

by Pooja on January 15, 2010, 05:47:30 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 05, 2010, 05:32:50 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 16, 2010, 04:55:18 AM
kya baat hai   pooja ji.......

DIL KI BAAT KABHI DIL MEIN DABAKE NA RAKHNA
ASAR DHARKAN PAR PADJAAYEGI
DIL KE ARMAAN DHARKAN KO BATAYEGI
DAK DAK KARTA DHARKAN DILRUBA DILRUBA  GAAEYGI..

So sweet cara.. bahoot pyari lines hai.. waise man mai jo lines aai wo dard mai likhne wali aa rahi koshish karati hu Khumar mai jawab de saku..

Dil ki baat, yeh meri haya, batane nahi deti
Atte hai jab wo samne, dil aor ankhon ko koi aor baat sujhai nahi deti
uski ek muskaan mai mil jaati hai mujhe wo zindagi
jis ki haqiqat mai koi surat dikhai nahi deti


sorry dear.. pako jawab dobara likhugi.. apki lines dil mai ghar kar gai.. magar abhi shayad poori tarah khumar mai jawab na ban paaye...
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«Reply #16 on: February 05, 2010, 05:37:00 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 16, 2010, 05:17:21 AM
Simply too good Pooja di and Vicky !

good lines Riyaz and Cara !

Yea Armaan Mere Mann mea Halchal Macha jate hai
Geet Ban kar Mere Dil ki Dhadkan se khel jaate hai
Nahi Sunte yea Meri baat ab tho aisa aalam hai
Kehte kuch Nahi par Sang chalne ka wada kar jaate hai

Divya

Good line s Sophi..

Armaan hai dil ke, khwabo ki nagari mai baste hai
armaan unke liye, ek meethi tadap ban ban hume daste hai
yaadon unki main yah alam hai ki koi hosh nahi
rahe her pal unki bahon main, yahi sapne ab bas man mai palte hai
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«Reply #17 on: February 05, 2010, 05:38:53 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on January 16, 2010, 02:42:31 PM
bahot khoob Pooja ji
n nice lines Vicky bhai and Divya ji

armaan bhare dil ke armaan kya kahte hain
mohabbat ke chaman me phool mahakte rahte hain

Thanks Kassh ji.. bahoot khoob

Mehka hai yah tan man, mehaki mehaki Fiza sari hai
hote hai jab wo sung mere, yeh sari dunia lagti badi pyaari hai tongue3
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«Reply #18 on: February 05, 2010, 08:28:59 PM »
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Mohabbat ke Armaan dil mai jagne lage hain
Kisi se milne ke khawaab ab aane lage hain

Ek chitra uska dil mai,banaane lage hain hum
Kaun hoga kaisa hoga ab sochne lage hain hum

Ye khayaal he mere dil ko lubhaane laga hai
Ay khuda,koi batao mujhko kya hone laga hai

Us-se kab kaise hoga milan sapne dekhne lage hain
Kaise hoga pyar,kalpana k ghode daudne lage hain

Mohabbat ke Armaan dil mai jagne lage hain
Kisi se milne ke khawaab ab aane lage hain
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«Reply #19 on: February 05, 2010, 10:09:57 PM »
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wow goo done koyal!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 06, 2010, 05:41:04 AM »
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Bas aapka aashirwaad he chahiye Pooja-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: Pooja on February 05, 2010, 10:09:57 PM
wow goo done koyal!!
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«Reply #21 on: February 06, 2010, 02:12:58 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 05, 2010, 05:27:09 PM
Itani asaani se husan, Ashiq ki bahon mai nahi ayega
jab tak tadap kar na kare Izhaar, Husan ko yakin kaise ayega

Husan ke iraadein ko, Ishaq ki parwaan, ashiq he pahnayega
iraadein se mila to tera iraada, phir kon is dunia mai hume rok payega....


uuff last line sahi nahi ban paai mujhse,,, sorry Mann ji.. smbhal lijiyega Usual Smile

Bahut Accha Likha Hai Pooja Ji.. Har Line Khubsoorat hai isliye Isme Sorry Ki Gunjaaish Hi Nahi.. chaliye Apna Sorry Wapas Liijiye.. Hehehe  icon_thumleft


Teri Aankhon Ko Humne Apna Ghar Bana Rakha Hai,
Tere Labon Ko Mohabbat Ka,Jaam Bana Rakha Hai....

Tere Husn Pe Luta Doon, Saansen Apne Jism Ki,
Kuch Aisa Apne Dil Me, Armaan Bana Rakha Hai.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #22 on: February 06, 2010, 02:16:20 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 05, 2010, 08:28:59 PM
Mohabbat ke Armaan dil mai jagne lage hain
Kisi se milne ke khawaab ab aane lage hain

Ek chitra uska dil mai,banaane lage hain hum
Kaun hoga kaisa hoga ab sochne lage hain hum

Ye khayaal he mere dil ko lubhaane laga hai
Ay khuda,koi batao mujhko kya hone laga hai

Us-se kab kaise hoga milan sapne dekhne lage hain
Kaise hoga pyar,kalpana k ghode daudne lage hain

Mohabbat ke Armaan dil mai jagne lage hain
Kisi se milne ke khawaab ab aane lage hain

Koyal Ji.. Bahut Pyaara Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause



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«Reply #23 on: February 06, 2010, 02:23:27 PM »
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wah sabhi ne bahot bahot hi achha likha he.... icon_thumleft


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«Reply #24 on: February 06, 2010, 05:03:17 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on February 06, 2010, 02:12:58 PM

Bahut Accha Likha Hai Pooja Ji.. Har Line Khubsoorat hai isliye Isme Sorry Ki Gunjaaish Hi Nahi.. chaliye Apna Sorry Wapas Liijiye.. Hehehe  icon_thumleft


Teri Aankhon Ko Humne Apna Ghar Bana Rakha Hai,
Tere Labon Ko Mohabbat Ka,Jaam Bana Rakha Hai....

Tere Husn Pe Luta Doon, Saansen Apne Jism Ki,
Kuch Aisa Apne Dil Me, Armaan Bana Rakha Hai.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**

Mann ji app to khumar-e-Ishaq king hai... main dard mai likhne wali,.. bahoot mushkil ho jaati hai... koshish karti hu...
In ankhon mai khumar tum se ayya hai
Husan per yeh nikhar tum se ayya hai

na karo is kadar izhaar-e-Muhobbat
Dil ko ajj bahoot pyar tum per ayya hai


hummm phir se baat nahi bani.... last two line.. bas char line poori karne ko likh di sad5
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«Reply #25 on: February 06, 2010, 07:06:57 PM »
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Maan-bhai zarranawaji ka tahe dil se shukriya....,


Quote from: Mann on February 06, 2010, 02:16:20 PM
Koyal Ji.. Bahut Pyaara Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause



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«Reply #26 on: February 08, 2010, 10:55:25 AM »
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Thanks Aakaash-ji....aapne bhi achha likha hai....

Quote from: @kaash on February 07, 2010, 11:49:05 AM
waah kya baat hai,badhia likha hai Pooja ji
aur sabhi ne Riyaaz ji,Mann ji,Sophi ji,Koyal ji
acha likha hai
ek koshish


armaano ke bageeche me armaan ke phool mahakte rahte hain
khumari se beqarari se machalte hi rahte hain
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«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2010, 05:17:23 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 07, 2010, 11:49:05 AM
waah kya baat hai,badhia likha hai Pooja ji
aur sabhi ne Riyaaz ji,Mann ji,Sophi ji,Koyal ji
acha likha hai
ek koshish


armaano ke bageeche me armaan ke phool mahakte rahte hain
khumari se beqarari se machalte hi rahte hain


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaash Bhai.. Aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2010, 05:30:26 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2010, 05:03:17 PM
Mann ji app to khumar-e-Ishaq king hai... main dard mai likhne wali,.. bahoot mushkil ho jaati hai... koshish karti hu...
In ankhon mai khumar tum se ayya hai
Husan per yeh nikhar tum se ayya hai

na karo is kadar izhaar-e-Muhobbat
Dil ko ajj bahoot pyar tum per ayya hai


hummm phir se baat nahi bani.... last two line.. bas char line poori karne ko likh di sad5

Poooja Ji.. Itni Tareef Na Kijiye... ki Hum Khud se Hi Sharma Jayen.. hehehe
Aur Humaare sath to Aapko Ishq Me Likhna Hi Padega.. Aapka Sath Humen Bahut Azeez Hai.. !!!  notworthy

Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat se Bhare Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause



Qaraar Dil Ko Milta Hai, Tere Deedar Ke Baad,
Intzaar Humen Milta Hai, Har Izhaar Ke Baad.....

Yun Na Tadpaaya Karo Apne Deewane Ko E-Sanam,
Dharkane Ruk Jaati Hain Tere Ek Inkaar Ke Baad.....!!!



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«Reply #29 on: February 27, 2010, 04:32:26 PM »
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Yahan Bhi aapke jawab Ka Besabri se Intzaar ho raha hai Pooja Ji.. tongue3



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