Armano ki bebasi...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 03, 2011, 01:16:33 PM
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Dil mein sama jana har baat k baad,
bechain kar jana har raat k baad,

jane kaisi kashish hai terri sanam,
madhosh kar jana har mulaqat k baad,

sawan mein bhigona hath thaam kar,
phir pyasa chhod jana barsaat k baad,

khamosh ho jana tujhse door ho kar,
jaise tanhai ka laut aana baraat k baad,

ankho se chhukar labo ko milana,
phir sang muskurana us jazbaat k baad,

armano ki bebasi badne lagti hai,
jab bhi tujhse door jana terre sath k baad.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 01:19:19 PM »
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soooo... beautiful..
sooo... simple...
yet so effective.....
padhte padhte aankhe bahr aayi......
simply superb....
bht bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 01:21:44 PM »
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Shukriya priya ji...
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 02:04:04 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 03, 2011, 01:16:33 PM

Dil mein sama jana har baat k baad,
bechain kar jana har raat k baad,

jane kaisi kashish hai terri sanam,
madhosh kar jana har mulaqat k baad,

sawan mein bhigona hath thaam kar,
phir pyasa chhod jana barsaat k baad,

khamosh ho jana tujhse door ho kar,
jaise tanhai ka laut aana baraat k baad,

ankho se chhukar labo ko milana,
phir sang muskurana us jazbaat k baad,

armano ki bebasi badne lagti hai,
jab bhi tujhse door jana terre sath k baad.........

Very Sweet .. Very Romantic ... broken Ji !

Very touching ....... dil se daad !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 02:17:02 PM »
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bahut hi khubsoorat ghazal
dil ki gahrai ko chhu gayi
daad kabul kijiye
main is rachna ko apne collection mein samil karne ki ijazat chahati hun .....
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 03:13:58 PM »
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kamaal hai bas kamaal hai ji.
aur kuch nai kah sakta
hats off BBL ji
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 06:03:26 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Brokenbyluv Ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 09:10:05 PM »
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Wah bahut hi romantic Geet ji,lajawab peshkash.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2011, 08:09:38 AM »
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wah realy bahut achhi peshkash
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2011, 10:49:31 AM »
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Sach main Geet di this is one of your
best..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2011, 12:37:32 PM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya naresh ji,tamanna ji,madhu ji,nirala ji,kishan ji,rahim aur hum dum ji,tahe dil se shukriya merri koshish ko  pasand karne k liye..

ek tamanna ji apko beshak ijazat hai ji..shukriya merri ghazal ko is layak smjhne k liye..
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2011, 02:42:00 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI
U HI Likhte Rahiye
Aur Khush  Rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: February 07, 2011, 12:20:16 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji..
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«Reply #13 on: February 07, 2011, 12:29:50 PM »
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waaah geet ji..........apka likha padte waqt hamesha kho hi jata hu

bahot khoob.....bahot hi behtareen lkiha he......

few lines from my side

saya ne bhi choda sath tera hath chut jane ke baad
zalim ishq fir bhi zinda raha dil tut jane ke baad

ye meri taqdir kahu ya kahu apni nakami
ab talak hu zinda sasnsee tut jane ke baad
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«Reply #14 on: February 07, 2011, 12:35:20 PM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya utkarsh ji behad khubsurat lines..thnx..
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