Ashiq Ke Puchne Per Jo Husan Batla De

by Pooja on April 27, 2009, 09:51:34 PM
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Is se bahoot milati julati kavita kabhi Husan-e-shayri mai likhi thi... Ajj bahoot dino baad wo kisi aor site per najar aai (Thanks to Shivani, jis ne Author name Pooja diya us site per)..
Magar apni us kavita ko padte waqat bahoot trutia najar aai so kuch alag se phir se likh rahi hu...

Ashiq Ke Puchne Par Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De
Jo Baat Dil Mai Rakh Kar Muskurane Mai Hai
Wo Raz Phir Kayu Husan Ashiq Ko Batla De!!

Puchte Hai Jab Wo Baat, Baato Baato Mai
Husan Ek Dum Se Jawabo Mai, kaise batla De
Pass Akar Jo Ashiq Husan Ko Bahlaata Hai
Yakin Karo,
husan, Jannat Ke Najaro ko bhi jalana (Jealousy) sikhla De

Le Le Bad Kar Ashiq, Phir Husan Ko Apni Bahon Mai
Sare dil ke Raz, dhadkane, dhadkano ko Suna De
Ankhon Mai Ankhein Milty He Ashiq Samjh Jayega
Husan ek baar Bhir Se, Ashiq ko  Ladkharana sikhla De

Ashiq Ke Puchne Per Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 06:09:10 AM »
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Wah Pooja Ji.. Aapki Yeh Kavita Maine Pahale Bhi Padh Rakhi hai..!! Par Mujhe to Wo Bhi Behad Khubsoorat lagi thi.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Par Phir se Likh kar aapne ise Aur Zyada Sunder aur Pyaar Bhara bana diya Hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 06:14:35 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut Khoob Pooja Didi,
Bahut hi pyaar se bhari hui lines hai.


Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 07:12:35 AM »
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Nice work Pooja...
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 04:10:50 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 28, 2009, 06:09:10 AM
Wah Pooja Ji.. Aapki Yeh Kavita Maine Pahale Bhi Padh Rakhi hai..!! Par Mujhe to Wo Bhi Behad Khubsoorat lagi thi.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Par Phir se Likh kar aapne ise Aur Zyada Sunder aur Pyaar Bhara bana diya Hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Shukaria Mann ji, jawab to shayad ab app agle saal hi likhege DOH

Quote from: k.shael on April 28, 2009, 06:14:35 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut Khoob Pooja Didi,
Bahut hi pyaar se bhari hui lines hai.


Shally.
Thanks Shally!!!Kuch app bhi likh jaati to acha lagta!!!

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 28, 2009, 07:12:35 AM
Nice work Pooja...

Shukaria Sajid, waise apki kalam bhi kuch likhti to acha lagta!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 04:13:57 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 28, 2009, 08:38:37 AM
waah waah Pooja ji bohot achi kavita aapne likhi hai...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhaawnaaon ka sundar samavesh hai..

kuch arz kar rahe hain asha hai aapko aur sabko acha lage..


husn aur aashiq ka rishta suhana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai

kabhi husn ke batane par aashiq khuda bane
aur kabhi aashiq ki khamoshi par husn ko husn badhana hai

kabhi husn ke roothne par aashiq sitam yun sahe
uski hansi dekhne ke lie har karam aazmaana hai

husn aur aashiq ka rishta purana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai


wah wah wah kaya baaat hai, bahoot khoob Kash ji!!! Green bold ki hui do line to bahoot kamaal ki likhi hai apne....

Ashiq ki issi ajmaaish per Husan ka dil atta hai
dekh uski wo bhawna, tan-man Pighal jaata hai
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 04:30:24 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 09:51:34 PM

Is se bahoot milati julati kavita kabhi Husan-e-shayri mai likhi thi... Ajj bahoot dino baad wo kisi aor site per najar aai (Thanks to Shivani, jis ne Author name Pooja diya us site per)..
Magar apni us kavita ko padte waqat bahoot trutia najar aai so kuch alag se phir se likh rahi hu...

Ashiq Ke Puchne Par Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De
Jo Baat Dil Mai Rakh Kar Muskurane Mai Hai
Wo Raz Phir Kayu Husan Ashiq Ko Batla De!!

Puchte Hai Jab Wo Baat, Baato Baato Mai
Husan Ek Dum Se Jawabo Mai, kaise batla De
Pass Akar Jo Ashiq Husan Ko Bahlaata Hai
Yakin Karo,
husan, Jannat Ke Najaro ko bhi jalana (Jealousy) sikhla De

Le Le Bad Kar Ashiq, Phir Husan Ko Apni Bahon Mai
Sare dil ke Raz, dhadkane, dhadkano ko Suna De
Ankhon Mai Ankhein Milty He Ashiq Samjh Jayega
Husan ek baar Bhir Se, Ashiq ko  Ladkharana sikhla De

Ashiq Ke Puchne Per Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De


Mindblowing Pooja ji.. This one is Dam Good. Sachi U r perfect.
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 04:34:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 28, 2009, 04:30:24 PM
Mindblowing Pooja ji.. This one is Dam Good. Sachi U r perfect.


Thanks you so much Sophi!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 11:31:29 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 28, 2009, 08:38:37 AM
waah waah Pooja ji bohot achi kavita aapne likhi hai...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhaawnaaon ka sundar samavesh hai..

kuch arz kar rahe hain asha hai aapko aur sabko acha lage..


husn aur aashiq ka rishta suhana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai

kabhi husn ke batane par aashiq khuda bane
aur kabhi aashiq ki khamoshi par husn ko husn badhana hai

kabhi husn ke roothne par aashiq sitam yun sahe
uski hansi dekhne ke lie har karam aazmaana hai

husn aur aashiq ka rishta purana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai

very nice Kaash ji.mindblowing.keep writting.
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 12:58:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 09:51:34 PM

Is se bahoot milati julati kavita kabhi Husan-e-shayri mai likhi thi... Ajj bahoot dino baad wo kisi aor site per najar aai (Thanks to Shivani, jis ne Author name Pooja diya us site per)..
Magar apni us kavita ko padte waqat bahoot trutia najar aai so kuch alag se phir se likh rahi hu...

Ashiq Ke Puchne Par Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De
Jo Baat Dil Mai Rakh Kar Muskurane Mai Hai
Wo Raz Phir Kayu Husan Ashiq Ko Batla De!!

Puchte Hai Jab Wo Baat, Baato Baato Mai
Husan Ek Dum Se Jawabo Mai, kaise batla De
Pass Akar Jo Ashiq Husan Ko Bahlaata Hai
Yakin Karo,
husan, Jannat Ke Najaro ko bhi jalana (Jealousy) sikhla De

Le Le Bad Kar Ashiq, Phir Husan Ko Apni Bahon Mai
Sare dil ke Raz, dhadkane, dhadkano ko Suna De
Ankhon Mai Ankhein Milty He Ashiq Samjh Jayega
Husan ek baar Bhir Se, Ashiq ko  Ladkharana sikhla De

Ashiq Ke Puchne Per Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De


Aahaaa... Wonderful ... lajawab simply good Pooja di  Thumbs UP
(Thanks to Shivani,  tongue3)
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 04:47:43 PM »
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Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2009, 12:16:30 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 09:51:34 PM

Is se bahoot milati julati kavita kabhi Husan-e-shayri mai likhi thi... Ajj bahoot dino baad wo kisi aor site per najar aai (Thanks to Shivani, jis ne Author name Pooja diya us site per)..
Magar apni us kavita ko padte waqat bahoot trutia najar aai so kuch alag se phir se likh rahi hu...

Ashiq Ke Puchne Par Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De
Jo Baat Dil Mai Rakh Kar Muskurane Mai Hai
Wo Raz Phir Kayu Husan Ashiq Ko Batla De!!

Puchte Hai Jab Wo Baat, Baato Baato Mai
Husan Ek Dum Se Jawabo Mai, kaise batla De
Pass Akar Jo Ashiq Husan Ko Bahlaata Hai
Yakin Karo,
husan, Jannat Ke Najaro ko bhi jalana (Jealousy) sikhla De

Le Le Bad Kar Ashiq, Phir Husan Ko Apni Bahon Mai
Sare dil ke Raz, dhadkane, dhadkano ko Suna De
Ankhon Mai Ankhein Milty He Ashiq Samjh Jayega
Husan ek baar Bhir Se, Ashiq ko  Ladkharana sikhla De

Ashiq Ke Puchne Per Jo Husan Batla De
Yakin Karo,
Ashiq Khud Ko Khud Hi Khuda Bana De


Waah...Bohot Khoob Pooja.. Good work !
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2009, 12:17:17 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 28, 2009, 08:38:37 AM
waah waah Pooja ji bohot achi kavita aapne likhi hai...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhaawnaaon ka sundar samavesh hai..

kuch arz kar rahe hain asha hai aapko aur sabko acha lage..


husn aur aashiq ka rishta suhana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai

kabhi husn ke batane par aashiq khuda bane
aur kabhi aashiq ki khamoshi par husn ko husn badhana hai

kabhi husn ke roothne par aashiq sitam yun sahe
uski hansi dekhne ke lie har karam aazmaana hai

husn aur aashiq ka rishta purana hai
kabhi dono ko rooth kabhi khud hi maan jana hai




Very nice reply Kaash Ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 03:48:42 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2009, 12:16:30 PM
Waah...Bohot Khoob Pooja.. Good work !

Thanks Celmira!!!
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