Atte ho tum Barsaat main.....

by Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:09:59 PM
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Atte ho tum barsaat mai
deewani mujhe banate  ho
Mere bheege badan ko dekh kar
Shrarat se muskurate ho

Kapkapate is jisam ko
Apni bahon ka anchal urdate ho
Dhadkate hue humare dil ko
Apni baato se sehlate ho

Jalati hai man mai ek jawala
Jisko samjh khoob tum jaate ho
Band kar le jo hum apni ankhein
Bas hume hi dekhe jaate ho

Chum kar matha humara
Sir per rakh hath, seene se lagate ho
Sayam apne se, apna maan badate ho
Atte ho tum barsaat main, deewani mujhe banate ho……
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2008, 09:04:21 AM »
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very nice pooja dear
uffs..... kitna romantic likha h aapne
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CHANDNI RAAT THEE SANNATA THA,
TUM NAHI THEE DIL ME JWARBHATA THA,
EK TAKIYA BAHON ME BHARKAR
BADI MUSHKIL SE WAQT KAATA THAA.
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2008, 09:24:50 AM »
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Bohat acha likha hai pooja dear..

Yuhi jab aapko dekha toh..
Woh barsaat ke din yaad aayee..
Jab mein beeghi hue ruki thi..
Ek tadap mujh mein dekha hai aapne..
Dil toh bohat kuch kahe gayee.
Ankhon mein aapka interzar tha..
Aab bebasi mein khadi thi mein..
Aapne ley liya apne bhaon mein humhe
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mehhekkk
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2008, 01:01:44 PM »
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bahut khub

en bhigi barsaato ke lamhe
kabhi gujre na dil se
hum rahe teri bahoon mein
aur tumhara pyar barasta rahe pal pal.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2008, 03:23:41 PM »
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thanks sagar, honey and Mehekkk..

Rimjhim si barsati yah boondein
jhilmil se khwab dikhati hai
aa jao jo tum aise main
yahi ragini gaati hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2008, 01:34:27 PM »
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Wow... So Romantic...
Excellent Job Pooja di...

And Amazing Replies Sagar, HoneyRose, Mehhekkk...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2008, 02:47:20 PM »
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Thank you Shikha mehek aur pooja dear..

Aaj kuch mann madhosh hai ..
kuch kuch barish ki beeghi beeghi khushboo hai..
Kahin mere dil teri aankhon seh behek na jayee.
Mera dil barish mein bebas na ho jayee...
Atti hai aapki yaad ,beeghi beeghi sapno mein..
Ek ishar kiya hai aap toh samjh gayee..
 
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2008, 06:56:41 PM »
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thansk Shikha!!! nice one again Honey!!!

Bheega hai mosam aor najro main intzaar
aa jao sajna mere, ker le aise main baatein char
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2008, 02:04:57 PM »
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Sabhi ne bahoot aacha likha hai
Ek koshish mere taref se bhi


Dekh mujhe, wo deewani hue jaate hai,
Muskurane se hamare,wo sharma jaate hai,

Intzaar ke baad, jab hum milne aate hai,
Le ke baho mai apni,wo sab bhool jaate hai,

samjhate hai apni jo,wo unke man ki jawala hai,
Ye dekh ke hum,chup chap muskurate hai,

Inderdhanushi rang, BAADAL ke jab wo dekhte hai,
Le ke angdai, wo jhoomne lagte hai,

Band ker ke aankhe,wo hume dekhte rahti hai,
Bhigo ke apne ko,wo hamesha gungunate hai,

ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...
ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...

Baadal
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2008, 09:35:06 PM »
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nice one baadal ji...

barsati is barsaat main jalate kyun ho
pass akar bhi, pass nahi atte kyun ho

bheega badan tera mujhko pagal karta hai
samjh kar bhi nasamjh ban jaate kyun ho

thundi thundi yah hawa, madmasat mujhe banati hai
is masti ko meri, rok kyun jaate tum ho

baras jao is barsaat ki tarah badali ban kar
barsaat ke is mosam mai itna tadpaate kyun ho
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2008, 09:58:50 PM »
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Quote from: Pankhuri2 on January 27, 2008, 09:35:06 PM
nice one baadal ji...

barsati is barsaat main jalate kyun ho
pass akar bhi, pass nahi atte kyun ho

bheega badan tera mujhko pagal karta hai
samjh kar bhi nasamjh ban jaate kyun ho

thundi thundi yah hawa, madmasat mujhe banati hai
is masti ko meri, rok kyun jaate tum ho

baras jao is barsaat ki tarah badali ban kar
barsaat ke is mosam mai itna tadpaate kyun ho

nice one pankhuriji...
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2008, 07:38:18 PM »
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thanks Khwaish ji!!!
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sanya310
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2008, 07:58:02 PM »
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Bohot khoob Pooja n every1 else!! very romanticcc
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2008, 08:05:03 PM »
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thanks Sanya
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 10:33:37 PM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on January 26, 2008, 02:04:57 PM
Sabhi ne bahoot aacha likha hai
Ek koshish mere taref se bhi


Dekh mujhe, wo deewani hue jaate hai,
Muskurane se hamare,wo sharma jaate hai,

Intzaar ke baad, jab hum milne aate hai,
Le ke baho mai apni,wo sab bhool jaate hai,

samjhate hai apni jo,wo unke man ki jawala hai,
Ye dekh ke hum,chup chap muskurate hai,

Inderdhanushi rang, BAADAL ke jab wo dekhte hai,
Le ke angdai, wo jhoomne lagte hai,

Band ker ke aankhe,wo hume dekhte rahti hai,
Bhigo ke apne ko,wo hamesha gungunate hai,

ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...
ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...

Baadal

BAhoot Khoob Baadal ji.. missing you on Yoindia!!
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