Atte ho tum Barsaat main.....

by Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:09:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2009, 02:40:17 AM »
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Atte ho tum barsaat mai
deewani mujhe banate  ho
Mere bheege badan ko dekh kar
Shrarat se muskurate ho

Kapkapate is jisam ko
Apni bahon ka anchal urdate ho
Dhadkate hue humare dil ko
Apni baato se sehlate ho

Jalati hai man mai ek jawala
Jisko samjh khoob tum jaate ho
Band kar le jo hum apni ankhein
Bas hume hi dekhe jaate ho

Chum kar matha humara
Sir per rakh hath, seene se lagate ho
Sayam apne se, apna maan badate ho
Atte ho tum barsaat main, deewani mujhe banate ho……


Waah Waah Pooja Ji... Behad khoobsurat likha hai! Very romantic! Bahut bahut bahut khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: July 08, 2009, 03:03:51 AM »
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salam sab dosto ko...bas ham sirf itna kehna chahatay hai kay aap sab bahut achia likhtay hai...i just love every bodys shayri..keep it up guys best wishes 4rm sabah arzoo.... love9
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Roja
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«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2009, 03:31:21 AM »
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Atte ho tum barsaat mai
deewani mujhe banate  ho
Mere bheege badan ko dekh kar
Shrarat se muskurate ho

Kapkapate is jisam ko
Apni bahon ka anchal urdate ho
Dhadkate hue humare dil ko
Apni baato se sehlate ho

Jalati hai man mai ek jawala
Jisko samjh khoob tum jaate ho
Band kar le jo hum apni ankhein
Bas hume hi dekhe jaate ho

Chum kar matha humara
Sir per rakh hath, seene se lagate ho
Sayam apne se, apna maan badate ho
Atte ho tum barsaat main, deewani mujhe banate ho……


Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pooja didi... Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #18 on: July 08, 2009, 03:34:18 AM »
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Sabhi ne bahoot aacha likha hai
Ek koshish mere taref se bhi



Dekh mujhe, wo deewani hue jaate hai,
Muskurane se hamare,wo sharma jaate hai,

Intzaar ke baad, jab hum milne aate hai,
Le ke baho mai apni,wo sab bhool jaate hai,

samjhate hai apni jo,wo unke man ki jawala hai,
Ye dekh ke hum,chup chap muskurate hai,

Inderdhanushi rang, BAADAL ke jab wo dekhte hai,
Le ke angdai, wo jhoomne lagte hai,

Band ker ke aankhe,wo hume dekhte rahti hai,
Bhigo ke apne ko,wo hamesha gungunate hai,

ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...
ATTE HO TUM BARSAAT MAIN,DEEWANI MUJHE BABATE HO...


Baadal

Bahut acchi koshish ki hai aapne Baadal ji. Accha laga bahut dino ke baad aapka ye kalam padna Thumbs UP.. Be regular Baadal ji  Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2009, 04:06:26 AM »
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Waah Waah Pooja Ji... Behad khoobsurat likha hai! Very romantic! Bahut bahut bahut khoob! Applause Applause

shukaria Deepti ji
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javedarshad
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«Reply #20 on: July 08, 2009, 01:59:43 PM »
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Nice one puja




javed
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: July 09, 2009, 12:27:58 AM »
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Shukaria Javed ji!!
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #22 on: April 01, 2013, 02:02:02 AM »
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So Nice.
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