Aur Tum Aaye ____ {Angel}

by angel4u on September 02, 2009, 03:03:33 AM
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Ye poem kaafi dino pehle likhi hui thi par share nai kar paayi thi, hope you all like it...


Dard Ke Andheron Me SiMatne Lage The,
Sawalonke Bhanwar Me Ghirne Lage The,
Bilakhne Lage The Chandni Ki Kirno Se,
Haarke Zindagi Se Tootne Hi Lage The,
Aur TuM Aaye....

Bhul Gaye The Apne Saaye Ki Pehchaan,
Saansein Bhi Aati Thi NuMaish Ki Tarah,
Katti Thi Raatein Leke KhaMosh Siskiyan,
Thak Ke Maangi Khuda Se Khushiyon Ki Dua,
Aur TuM Aaye....

Jaane Kitni Muskurahatein Chhupi Thi Nazron Mein,
Ashqonke Naqaab Odhe Hue Palkon Ki Kataron Mein,
Ek Dabi Hui Si Khwahish Thi Dilke Kisi Kone Mein,
Bikher De In Khushiyonko Koi Apne DaaMan Mein,
Aur TuM Aaye....

ZakhMon Se Chhalni Tha Mere Wajood Ka Har Ek Kona,
Sochte The Kya Aisa Bhi Koi Farishta Hoga Jo,
ZakhMon Ko Bharke Apni Chahaton Ka MarhaM Lagaye,
Aur TuM Aaye....


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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2009, 03:43:20 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob,really touching,beautiful sharing Angel ji.excellent
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2009, 03:58:25 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai dear tumne...  Clapping Smiley
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2009, 04:51:28 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Angel ji Bohot Umda.. is ne ek purana geet yaad dila diya....

Sooni raahen or kaali raat thi
Apni to parchhaai bhi na saath thi
Har qadam par aaraha tha ye khyaal
Tanha manzil tak pohonchna hai muhaal
Ayese main veeran se ek mod par
Jee uthi main teri surat dekh kar
Ab ye veerana chaman kehlaayega
Ham safar ab ye safar kat jaayega.... Raaste main jee n ab ghabraayega..
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2009, 05:37:01 AM »
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kya baat hai angel ji......

APNEY PARAYE HONE LAGE THEY,
DOST DUSHMAN BAN NE LAGE THEY,
RISHTEY JUTHEY LAGNE LAGE THEY,
GUM HI GUM MILNE LAGE THEY,
AUR TUM AAYE..........

BAHAAREN KHUSHIYAN NAHIN DENE LAGI THI,
RANG FIKE NAZAR AANE LAGE THEY,
MAUSAM BIGDA LAGTA THA,
CHAMAN UJDAA LAGTA THA,
AUR TUM AAYE...........

MOHABBAT KO GUM KA SAAYA SAMAJHNE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KO BUL JAANE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KE GEETON SE CHID AANE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KE NAAM SE NAFRAT AANE LAGI THI,
AUR TUM AAYE............

KHUSHIYON SE DAMAN BARNE LAGA THA,
HAR RANG  ZINDAGI MEIN KHILNE LAGA THA,
MAUSAM MASTI KA LAGNE LAGA THA,
JAB TUMNE MUJHE APNA KAHA THA,
AUR TUM AAYE.............






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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2009, 06:27:09 AM »
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WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy :notworthy:DIL KA HAR KONA CHHU GAYI APKI YE POEM .BAHUT KHUB
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2009, 09:30:02 AM »
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very nice work angel bhut khoob....................
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 02:10:44 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob,really touching,beautiful sharing Angel ji.excellent
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Thanks Madhu
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2009, 02:11:29 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai dear tumne...  Clapping Smiley

Thanks darling Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2009, 02:13:26 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Angel ji Bohot Umda.. is ne ek purana geet yaad dila diya....

Sooni raahen or kaali raat thi
Apni to parchhaai bhi na saath thi
Har qadam par aaraha tha ye khyaal
Tanha manzil tak pohonchna hai muhaal
Ayese main veeran se ek mod par
Jee uthi main teri surat dekh kar
Ab ye veerana chaman kehlaayega
Ham safar ab ye safar kat jaayega.... Raaste main jee n ab ghabraayega..


Behad khoobsurat. Shukriya yahan likhne ke liye. is thread ki ronak badh gayi Usual Smile

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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2009, 02:20:57 PM »
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kya baat hai angel ji......

APNEY PARAYE HONE LAGE THEY,
DOST DUSHMAN BAN NE LAGE THEY,
RISHTEY JUTHEY LAGNE LAGE THEY,
GUM HI GUM MILNE LAGE THEY,
AUR TUM AAYE..........

BAHAAREN KHUSHIYAN NAHIN DENE LAGI THI,
RANG FIKE NAZAR AANE LAGE THEY,
MAUSAM BIGDA LAGTA THA,
CHAMAN UJDAA LAGTA THA,
AUR TUM AAYE...........

MOHABBAT KO GUM KA SAAYA SAMAJHNE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KO BUL JAANE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KE GEETON SE CHID AANE LAGI THI,
MOHABBAT KE NAAM SE NAFRAT AANE LAGI THI,
AUR TUM AAYE............

KHUSHIYON SE DAMAN BARNE LAGA THA,
HAR RANG  ZINDAGI MEIN KHILNE LAGA THA,
MAUSAM MASTI KA LAGNE LAGA THA,
JAB TUMNE MUJHE APNA KAHA THA,
AUR TUM AAYE.............








Thanks Cara...

Nice lines from you too Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2009, 02:22:32 PM »
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good one





javed
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2009, 02:24:19 PM »
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WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy :notworthy:DIL KA HAR KONA CHHU GAYI APKI YE POEM .BAHUT KHUB

Bahut bahut shukriya injured.warrior Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2009, 02:24:52 PM »
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very nice work angel bhut khoob....................

Thank you aslam ji. nice to see you on my thread after quite a long time Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2009, 02:25:44 PM »
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good one





javed

Thanks Javed Ji...
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