Aur Tum Aaye ____ {Angel}

by angel4u on September 02, 2009, 03:03:33 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2009, 07:30:01 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Angel!!!!

Yeh Poetry To Ek Geet Ka Jaisi hai, Jab Chaahe Insaan Isse Guunguna Sakta Hai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wali Poetry Likhi hai Aapne

Bahut Ache Angel!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: September 03, 2009, 01:54:59 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji..

Aapke hi comment ka intezaar tha Usual Smile

Thank you so muchhh Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: September 03, 2009, 02:46:37 PM »
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lajwaab shayari Angel ji

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«Reply #18 on: September 03, 2009, 04:56:08 PM »
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Ye poem kaafi dino pehle likhi hui thi par share nai kar paayi thi, hope you all like it...


Dard Ke Andheron Me SiMatne Lage The,
Sawalonke Bhanwar Me Ghirne Lage The,
Bilakhne Lage The Chandni Ki Kirno Se,
Haarke Zindagi Se Tootne Hi Lage The,
Aur TuM Aaye....

Bhul Gaye The Apne Saaye Ki Pehchaan,
Saansein Bhi Aati Thi NuMaish Ki Tarah,
Katti Thi Raatein Leke KhaMosh Siskiyan,
Thak Ke Maangi Khuda Se Khushiyon Ki Dua,
Aur TuM Aaye....

Jaane Kitni Muskurahatein Chhupi Thi Nazron Mein,
Ashqonke Naqaab Odhe Hue Palkon Ki Kataron Mein,
Ek Dabi Hui Si Khwahish Thi Dilke Kisi Kone Mein,
Bikher De In Khushiyonko Koi Apne DaaMan Mein,
Aur TuM Aaye....

ZakhMon Se Chhalni Tha Mere Wajood Ka Har Ek Kona,
Sochte The Kya Aisa Bhi Koi Farishta Hoga Jo,
ZakhMon Ko Bharke Apni Chahaton Ka MarhaM Lagaye,
Aur TuM Aaye....




Very beautifully written Sweetie...bohot khoob !
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«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2009, 12:54:41 PM »
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lajwaab shayari Angel ji

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Thank you so much grimreaper Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2009, 12:55:35 PM »
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Very beautifully written Sweetie...bohot khoob !

Bahut bahut shukriya Talat. Its nice of you to give a line on each n every post of mine whether it is a sharing or a creation Usual Smile

thank you so much sweetie Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2009, 04:52:50 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww...... Kya Baat hai Angel.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati Bhari aur Mohabbat se Bhari Rachna Likhi hai aapne.. Kamaal Kar Diya.. Bahut Hi Pyaari Peshkash hai aapki... Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Sayyid Bhai & Cara Ji.. aapne Bhi Lajawab Alfaaz Bikhere Hain.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #22 on: September 06, 2009, 12:48:41 PM »
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Thank you so much Mann..

Bahut jaldi nazar pad gyai tumhari mere thread pe... tongue3

thanks for appreciating always dear Usual Smile
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