AURAT KE RANG

by kanika makhija on March 24, 2012, 06:41:11 AM
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BIWI HAMESHA CHAI PILATI H

SALI HAMESHA DANDA DIKHATI H

SAAS HAMESHA JOOTE KHILATI H

BETI HAMESHA PYAR JATATI H

BEHEN HAMESHA BHAI KO RAJA MANTI H

MAA HAMESHA PALKO ME BITHATI H
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 06:47:03 AM »
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BIWI HAMESH CHAI PILATI H

SALI HAMESHA DHANDA PILATI H

SASS HAMESH JOOTE KHILATI H

BETI HAMESHA PYAR JATATI H

BEHEN HAMESHA BHAI KO RAJA MANTI H

MA HAMESHA PALKO ME BIDHATI H
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2012, 07:01:13 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2012, 11:46:57 AM »
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Kanika ji--
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hope ki aapne bura nhi maana hoga!!

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