Baahon mein basaa kar...

by Ravi_Dave on March 22, 2007, 04:18:18 PM
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Baahon mein basaa kar,
Nazar mein choopa kar,
Apni awaaz se,
Meri dhadakano ko madhosh kardo,

Raahon mein apni chalaa kar,
Dagar apni mehka kar,
Dil ke raaz khhol ke,
Meri roohon ko behosh kardo,

Nighaahon mein mujhe naa sajaa kar,
Magar aanskhon mein hi bahaa kar,
Humare pyaar ke aaghaaz mein,
Meri dheeme nafz mein, josh bhardo!
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2007, 04:05:52 PM »
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Bohot khoob Ravi
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 04:08:40 PM »
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nicely expressed .
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2007, 09:48:04 PM »
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bahoot khoob Ravi.. bahoot dino baad apko padne ka moka milla,, atte raha kare...

Baato baato mai dil le jaate ho
Dekhte ho is tarah jaan le jaate ho

Adato apni se dil ko dharkate ho
Laker bahon mai, sara jahan bhulate ho
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2007, 01:22:16 PM »
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Shukhriya Talat and Ricky!

PoojaJi,
Shukhriya padne ke liye, par abhi exams ka mausam hain to waqt nahi milta, lekin koshish zyaari hain roz aane ki. Aap ke har ek kalaam bohat hi acche aur dil-jasp hote hain, yeh bhi bohat accha likha hain, Bohat Khoob!

Bhoola kar yeh jahaan, humein aur tadpate ho,
Door rehke bhi, paas chale aate ho,

Paani ghum sookh gaya, humari aankhon mein,
Banke khushi, humare anskh-e-sehraa ko barsaate ho,

Deed kisi se nahi kar sakte hum yahaan,
Baske aankhon mein sabke, humse chori chori miljaate ho,

Tasveer tumhari hi humare zehn mein,
'Ravi' (sun) chamakta hain zindagi mein, tab tum undhera dehjaate ho!
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2007, 03:08:02 PM »
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shukaria Ravi ji, Apka kalam main, khushi aor dard dono ka sungam laga!! bahoot acha likha hai!!

man hi man karati hu baatein
dil lki her ek baat kah jaati hu

atte ho jab samne tum mere
muskura kar bas rah jaati hu

dil mai uthate hai kitne armaan
jhuka najar, sanyam (control) kar jaati hu

ek baar le lo bahon mai ab to sajna
yahin her baar kahte kahte, ruk jaati hu
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2007, 04:19:57 PM »
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Very nice again Ravi....and Pooja !!
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2007, 09:49:57 PM »
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Shukhriya Once Agen Talat, and PoojaJi kya baat hain, yeh to sone pe suhaaga hain. Har kalaam ek se badhkar ek hain, Bohat Khoob!

Kehti hain har dhadkan, tu hi iski arzoo hain,
Teri hi hansi, khilti mere labon pe har soo hain,

Jaan teri, mere jaan mein paana leke rooki hain,
Teri adaa ka nasha rooh mein, dil mein basi tu hain,

Baat karni chaud-di mujhse, yeh samaj walo ne,
Kehte hain meri har baat mein, choopi teri hi guftagu hain!
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2007, 09:57:15 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Ravi, bahoot hi acha likha hai apne....

Her baat main ab main hi najar aau
Jahan tak jaaye teri nigah, mai hi tujh main gungunau

Urdati phiru hawa main, ankhon mai tujhe liye
Jo bhi dekhein mujhe, bas teri hi main kahlawaau !!
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2007, 09:33:02 AM »
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ravi..aapne accha likkha hai.
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2007, 11:22:35 AM »
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bahut acche ravi and pooja.....

bahut accha sama bandha hai aap dono ne
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2007, 12:08:49 PM »
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Shukhriya Ankur and Pakeezah Aanchal.

Kya Baat Hain, Khamosh kardiya, Bohat Khoob PoojaJi!

Urdte hain hawaon mein, to sansein milti kum hain,
Jahaan bhi nazar karoo, tasveer sirf mere sanam ki hain,

Baaton mein aate hain woh, kabhi zindagi mein nahi milte hain,
Meri hi hogi koi khatta, jo mile mujhe itne ghum hain,

Berkuhi ke kiste bund karde, yeh humari unse dua hain,
Har pun-ne (Page) pe likhe, humare liye zulm-o-sitam hain,

Do pal zindagi se liye udhaar, chain se do pal sone (Sleep) ko,
Aankhein japki jese, sapna banke aaye phir, mere kaafir sanam hain!
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2007, 12:50:43 PM »
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Bohot khoob Ravi..and Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2007, 08:16:35 PM »
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Shukhriya TalatJi!
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