Baat Chahat Ki

by drpandey on February 04, 2010, 01:29:16 PM
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Usne aik aisi sadaa dee firse,
Aag dariya mein laga dee firse.

Baat chaahat ki udaa dee firse,
Bujhte sholoN ko hawa dee firse.

Rasm duniya ki uthaa dee firse,
Bekhudi had se badha dee firse.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2010, 01:48:54 PM »
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Achha likha hai drp-ji.... Applause Applause Applause

Laut aaya hai zindagi mai koi ajeez firse
Jaise oug aaya hai ankur thooth mai firse


Quote from: drpandey on February 04, 2010, 01:29:16 PM
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Usne aik aisi sadaa dee firse,
Aag dariya mein laga dee firse.

Baat chaahat ki udaa dee firse,
Bujhte sholoN ko hawa dee firse.

Rasm duniya ki uthaa dee firse,
Bekhudi had se badha dee firse.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2010, 06:59:08 PM »
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Wow so nice.very romantic and lovely creation Pandey ji.too good. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2010, 05:05:06 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pandey ji... Man kiya ki aage aur padu... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2010, 05:14:50 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey sahab lajawab sher likhe hain aapne. Main isme kuchh jodta hun:

Hum to pehle hi se qaail the bahut
Aapne dhoom machaa dee phir se
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2010, 05:45:44 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      DRPANDEY JI......

PHOOL BHAG MAIN KHILNE LAGE FIRSE
DO DIL BHAG MAIN MILNE LAGE FIRSE
"BAAT CHAHAT KI" KARNE LAGE FIRSE
DO DHILLON ME AAG LAGNE LAGI FERSE...
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2010, 08:18:54 AM »
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mindblowing pandey ji... Clapping Smiley

good responce cara ji.
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2010, 10:22:03 AM »
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Bahut Khub Pandey Ji ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2010, 12:09:10 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 04, 2010, 01:39:37 PM
bahot khoob likha hai Pandey ji
behad achi panktiyan
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 05, 2010, 10:22:03 AM
Bahut Khub Pandey Ji ApplauseApplause
Quote from: thinkhattk on February 05, 2010, 08:18:54 AM
mindblowing pandey ji... Clapping Smiley

good responce cara ji.
Thank you @kaash Ji, Rishi Bhi & Think Ji your replies matter a lot for me.
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2010, 12:13:13 PM »
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Quote from: cara on February 05, 2010, 05:45:44 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      DRPANDEY JI......

PHOOL BHAG MAIN KHILNE LAGE FIRSE
DO DIL BHAG MAIN MILNE LAGE FIRSE
"BAAT CHAHAT KI" KARNE LAGE FIRSE
DO DHILLON ME AAG LAGNE LAGI FERSE...

Kya khoob analyse kiya hai Thanks Cara Ji..aise reply se behad hausla afzai hoti hai  maim bhi aise hi koshish karunga.
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2010, 12:29:41 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 05, 2010, 05:14:50 AM
Wah wah Pandey sahab lajawab sher likhe hain aapne. Main isme kuchh jodta hun:

Hum to pehle hi se qaail the bahut
Aapne dhoom machaa dee phir se

Riyaj Sahab Adaab arz hai!
Dhoom hamne nahin aapne macha dee hai, sara karishma aap hi ke duvaon ka hai...bas yahi kahunga ki...

Mere Hazrat ne duva dee firse,
Sukhi dariya ko baha dee firse.

 
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2010, 12:33:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 05, 2010, 05:05:06 AM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pandey ji... Man kiya ki aage aur padu... Usual Smile
Thanks Sophi ji aage bhi koshish karunga.
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2010, 12:36:43 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 04, 2010, 08:25:44 PM
Wah Wah Pandey Ji Kya Khub Andaz e Bayan Hai.
Bahut Khoobsurti Se Aapne Lafzon Jorha Hai.
Bhut Hi Khub Janaab. Sach Men Maza Aa Gaya Parhke...

Khair Khush Rahiye....


~Shihab~
Sihab ji Pasand farmaney aur duvaon ke liye behad shukriya..bas nawazis bani rahe aapki.
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2010, 12:49:36 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 04, 2010, 01:48:54 PM
Achha likha hai drp-ji.... Applause Applause Applause

Laut aaya hai zindagi mai koi ajeez firse
Jaise oug aaya hai ankur thooth mai firse


Shukriya Koyal ji behtareen reply thanks a lot...
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2010, 01:35:14 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 04, 2010, 06:59:08 PM
Wow so nice.very romantic and lovely creation Pandey ji.too good. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
So nice of you Madhu Ji Thanks a lot.....
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