**~** Baat Ek Raat Ki **~**

by _Vicky_ on March 31, 2012, 08:40:30 AM
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“Baat Ek Raat Ki”… Yeh ek Khubsoorat Khayaal Hai.. Jo aksar Mujhe Tadpa sa jaata Hai.. aisi Koi Raat meri zindgi Me Aayi to Nahi.. Par Phir Bhi ek intzaar sa Zaroor Hai.. bassss isi Intzaar Ko Lafzon Me utaarne Ki koshish Ki Hai.. Ummeed karta hoon aapko meri yeh Pyaar bhari koshish Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Raat Ki Baat Hai, Kamsini Me Doobi Ek Raaz Ki Baat Hai,
Madhoshi Me Doode Lamhon Ki, Shokh Yaadon Ki Baat Hai……!!!



Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....

Khuli Zulfon Se Tapak Rahi Thi Boonde Behak Kar,
Aur  Main Nigaahon Se Apni Inhe Peeta Chala Gaya....

Honth Chalka Rahe The Uske Pyaale Mohabbat Ke,
Main In Pyaalon Me Doob Ke Behakta Chala Gaya....

Khule Aangan Me Chaandni Se Bheega Badan Uska,
Dekh, Kuch Pal To Jiya, Phir Uspe Marta Chala Gaya….

Diya Ishaara Phir Usne, Seene Se Lipat Jaane Ka,
Main Toot Ke Uske Baazuon Me Bikharta Chala Gaya....

Haath Haathon Me Leke, Labon Ko Lab Pe Tikaaye,
Main Bas Har Ek Hadd Se Aage Guzarta Chala Gaya....

Us Raat Do Badan Kuch Aise Takraaye The Shola Ban,
Ki Wo Mujhpe Aur Main Us Par Pighalta Chala Gaya….

Nasha Sharaab Ka Tha Ya Shabaab Ka, Khabar Nahi,
Main To Uske Husn Ke Haathon Lut-ta Chala Gaya....

Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....!!!!!!





**~** Mann **~**

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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2012, 08:48:21 AM »
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“Baat Ek Raat Ki”… Yeh ek Khubsoorat Khayaal Hai.. Jo aksar Mujhe Tadpa sa jaata Hai.. aisi Koi Raat meri zindgi Me Aayi to Nahi.. Par Phir Bhi ek intzaar sa Zaroor Hai.. bassss isi Intzaar Ko Lafzon Me utaarne Ki koshish Ki Hai.. Ummeed karta hoon aapko meri yeh Pyaar bhari koshish Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Raat Ki Baat Hai, Kamsini Me Doobi Ek Raaz Ki Baat Hai,
Madhoshi Me Doode Lamhon Ki, Shokh Yaadon Ki Baat Hai……!!!



Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....

Khuli Zulfon Se Tapak Rahi Thi Boonde Behak Kar,
Aur  Main Nigaahon Se Apni Inhe Peeta Chala Gaya....

Honth Chalka Rahe The Uske Pyaale Mohabbat Ke,
Main In Pyaalon Me Doob Ke Behakta Chala Gaya....

Khule Aangan Me Chaandni Se Bheega Badan Uska,
Dekh, Kuch Pal To Jiya, Phir Uspe Marta Chala Gaya….

Diya Ishaara Phir Usne, Seene Se Lipat Jaane Ka,
Main Toot Ke Uske Baazuon Me Bikharta Chala Gaya....

Haath Haathon Me Leke, Labon Ko Lab Pe Tikaaye,
Main Bas Har Ek Hadd Se Aage Guzarta Chala Gaya....

Us Raat Do Badan Kuch Aise Takraaye The Shola Ban,
Ki Wo Mujhpe Aur Main Us Par Pighalta Chala Gaya….

Nasha Sharaab Ka Tha Ya Shabaab Ka, Khabar Nahi,
Main To Uske Husn Ke Haathon Lut-ta Chala Gaya....

Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....!!!!!!





**~** Mann **~**




Ohoooooo!!!!! Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!

Mann Ji Yeh To vakaai Madhoshi Se Bhare lafz The..Hum To Soch Rahe The Ke yeh Kalaam Aur Aage Chalte rehta Tha Humein Bhi khabar Rehti ke Aage Aur Kya Hua?? tongue3 tongue3 tongue3  

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob Mann Ji..

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Ab Hum To yehi Khayal mein Doobe Hai Ke Agar Yeh Sirf Khayalaat the To Haqeeqat Kya Hogi?? icon_geek icon_geek
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2012, 08:53:38 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MANN... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2012, 09:10:57 AM »
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Badee madhosh karne waalee ghazal hai mann ji gugudee see kar dee.
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2012, 09:38:34 AM »
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“Baat Ek Raat Ki”… Yeh ek Khubsoorat Khayaal Hai.. Jo aksar Mujhe Tadpa sa jaata Hai.. aisi Koi Raat meri zindgi Me Aayi to Nahi.. Par Phir Bhi ek intzaar sa Zaroor Hai.. bassss isi Intzaar Ko Lafzon Me utaarne Ki koshish Ki Hai.. Ummeed karta hoon aapko meri yeh Pyaar bhari koshish Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Raat Ki Baat Hai, Kamsini Me Doobi Ek Raaz Ki Baat Hai,
Madhoshi Me Doode Lamhon Ki, Shokh Yaadon Ki Baat Hai……!!!



Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....

Khuli Zulfon Se Tapak Rahi Thi Boonde Behak Kar,
Aur  Main Nigaahon Se Apni Inhe Peeta Chala Gaya....

Honth Chalka Rahe The Uske Pyaale Mohabbat Ke,
Main In Pyaalon Me Doob Ke Behakta Chala Gaya....

Khule Aangan Me Chaandni Se Bheega Badan Uska,
Dekh, Kuch Pal To Jiya, Phir Uspe Marta Chala Gaya….

Diya Ishaara Phir Usne, Seene Se Lipat Jaane Ka,
Main Toot Ke Uske Baazuon Me Bikharta Chala Gaya....

Haath Haathon Me Leke, Labon Ko Lab Pe Tikaaye,
Main Bas Har Ek Hadd Se Aage Guzarta Chala Gaya....

Us Raat Do Badan Kuch Aise Takraaye The Shola Ban,
Ki Wo Mujhpe Aur Main Us Par Pighalta Chala Gaya….

Nasha Sharaab Ka Tha Ya Shabaab Ka, Khabar Nahi,
Main To Uske Husn Ke Haathon Lut-ta Chala Gaya....

Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....!!!!!!





**~** Mann **~**



 Winking Winking Winking Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Vasl ki raat ka kya khoobsurti se chitran kiya hai aapne mann ji. bahut bahut mubaarakbaad aapko. Apki ye kalpna aapki sachaai me tabdil ho iski dua karta hun...
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2012, 12:12:05 PM »
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Ohoooooo!!!!! Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!

Mann Ji Yeh To vakaai Madhoshi Se Bhare lafz The..Hum To Soch Rahe The Ke yeh Kalaam Aur Aage Chalte rehta Tha Humein Bhi khabar Rehti ke Aage Aur Kya Hua?? tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob Mann Ji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ab Hum To yehi Khayal mein Doobe Hai Ke Agar Yeh Sirf Khayalaat the To Haqeeqat Kya Hogi?? icon_geek icon_geek

Khwaish Bhai... Aapki Yeh Taareef sar Aankhon Par.. aapka tahe dil se Behad shukriya Bhai..  notworthy notworthy

aur Aage Kya hua iska bhi Varnan Phir kabhi kar denge bhai.. hahahaha.. Giggle Giggle

ek Baar Phir se behad shukriya.. Usual Smile




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2012, 12:34:27 PM »
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Ohoooooo!!!!! Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!

Mann Ji Yeh To vakaai Madhoshi Se Bhare lafz The..Hum To Soch Rahe The Ke yeh Kalaam Aur Aage Chalte rehta Tha Humein Bhi khabar Rehti ke Aage Aur Kya Hua?? tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooob Mann Ji..

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Ab Hum To yehi Khayal mein Doobe Hai Ke Agar Yeh Sirf Khayalaat the To Haqeeqat Kya Hogi?? icon_geek icon_geek

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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2012, 03:02:55 PM »
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Topic padte hi Main Samaj gai thi Ki yea aap ki hi thread hogi.. Itne Khumaar bhare alfaaz Koi aur kaise saja sakta hai.. jo shuru se lekar akhiri sher tak puri tarah Mohabbat e Kumaar mea dubi ho....

mar jaavan gud Khake mann ji.. Kya tareef Karu.. Mashaallah kya khoob likha hai... bahoot bahoot umda likha hai...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ispar tho kuch soch samaj kar reply karna padega... isliye thoda waqt chahungi...

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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2012, 04:46:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause विकी भाई लोग यूँ ही आपको खुमार का बेताज बादशाह नही बुलाते हैं ....कुछ तो बात है बंदे मे. लगे रहो भी....खूब खुमार है और वो भी रात का........ Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2012, 05:00:19 PM »
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“Baat Ek Raat Ki”… Yeh ek Khubsoorat Khayaal Hai.. Jo aksar Mujhe Tadpa sa jaata Hai.. aisi Koi Raat meri zindgi Me Aayi to Nahi.. Par Phir Bhi ek intzaar sa Zaroor Hai.. bassss isi Intzaar Ko Lafzon Me utaarne Ki koshish Ki Hai.. Ummeed karta hoon aapko meri yeh Pyaar bhari koshish Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Raat Ki Baat Hai, Kamsini Me Doobi Ek Raaz Ki Baat Hai,
Madhoshi Me Doode Lamhon Ki, Shokh Yaadon Ki Baat Hai……!!!



Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....

Khuli Zulfon Se Tapak Rahi Thi Boonde Behak Kar,
Aur  Main Nigaahon Se Apni Inhe Peeta Chala Gaya....

Honth Chalka Rahe The Uske Pyaale Mohabbat Ke,
Main In Pyaalon Me Doob Ke Behakta Chala Gaya....

Khule Aangan Me Chaandni Se Bheega Badan Uska,
Dekh, Kuch Pal To Jiya, Phir Uspe Marta Chala Gaya….

Diya Ishaara Phir Usne, Seene Se Lipat Jaane Ka,
Main Toot Ke Uske Baazuon Me Bikharta Chala Gaya....

Haath Haathon Me Leke, Labon Ko Lab Pe Tikaaye,
Main Bas Har Ek Hadd Se Aage Guzarta Chala Gaya....

Us Raat Do Badan Kuch Aise Takraaye The Shola Ban,
Ki Wo Mujhpe Aur Main Us Par Pighalta Chala Gaya….

Nasha Sharaab Ka Tha Ya Shabaab Ka, Khabar Nahi,
Main To Uske Husn Ke Haathon Lut-ta Chala Gaya....

Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....!!!!!!





**~** Mann **~**


wowwww
its awsome ---
sach hai bhai aap jitna khumaarka ehsaas alfaazon meaur koi nhi kara sakta
sach kahen to bas aapki kalaam to humne padhi hi nhi balki
esa laa jaise live dekhi ho--
aapki kuch postmene pehle bhi padhi hai jinke ehsaas bhi kuch aise hi the--
aapki lekhni to bas kamaalhai sir--
daad dene ko shabd nhi so--

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2012, 06:00:17 PM »
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Bhaa'ii:

namaste!

huZoor aapki koShiSh dil ko be-Had pasand aayiiN... iShQ ke ehsaas liKhne meiN aap bade hi maahir hoN... andaaz-e-bayaan bhee behterin lagaa aapka... duaa yahee hai aap aise hi aage bhee bazm ko sajaaye rahiye... dil se daad

KhuSh rahen... apnaa Khayaal raKhen

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2012, 02:46:12 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MANN... Applause Applause Applause Applause
Theyash Ji aapka Tahe Dil Se Behad Shukriya...  notworthy notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2012, 04:04:36 AM »
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“Baat Ek Raat Ki”… Yeh ek Khubsoorat Khayaal Hai.. Jo aksar Mujhe Tadpa sa jaata Hai.. aisi Koi Raat meri zindgi Me Aayi to Nahi.. Par Phir Bhi ek intzaar sa Zaroor Hai.. bassss isi Intzaar Ko Lafzon Me utaarne Ki koshish Ki Hai.. Ummeed karta hoon aapko meri yeh Pyaar bhari koshish Pasand aayegi..!!!aji behad pasand aayi hai...



Ek Raat Ki Baat Hai, Kamsini Me Doobi Ek Raaz Ki Baat Hai,
Madhoshi Me Doode Lamhon Ki, Shokh Yaadon Ki Baat Hai……!!!acchaa!!!



Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....
Uffff...
Khuli Zulfon Se Tapak Rahi Thi Boonde Behak Kar,
Aur  Main Nigaahon Se Apni Inhe Peeta Chala Gaya....
Kya baat hai..!
Honth Chalka Rahe The Uske Pyaale Mohabbat Ke,
Main In Pyaalon Me Doob Ke Behakta Chala Gaya....
Bch hi kaun skta hai...
Khule Aangan Me Chaandni Se Bheega Badan Uska,
Dekh, Kuch Pal To Jiya, Phir Uspe Marta Chala Gaya….
Critical staze na!!
Diya Ishaara Phir Usne, Seene Se Lipat Jaane Ka,
Main Toot Ke Uske Baazuon Me Bikharta Chala Gaya....
Baahon k darmya..do pyaar mil rhen hain...
Haath Haathon Me Leke, Labon Ko Lab Pe Tikaaye,
Main Bas Har Ek Hadd Se Aage Guzarta Chala Gaya....
Gujarna hi tha..
Us Raat Do Badan Kuch Aise Takraaye The Shola Ban,
Ki Wo Mujhpe Aur Main Us Par Pighalta Chala Gaya….
Saanson ki hararat se tanhai pighal jaye..jalte hue honthon ka
armaan nikal jaye..
Nasha Sharaab Ka Tha Ya Shabaab Ka, Khabar Nahi,
Main To Uske Husn Ke Haathon Lut-ta Chala Gaya....
Tumhe to loot lia milke husn walon ne...
Main Sharaab Uske Badan Pe Bikherta Chala Gaya,
Shabaab Uska Phir Aur Madhosh Hota Chala Gaya....!!!!!!

waah!!
....waah!!
Waah!!
....waah!!
waah!!
Mann ji meri dua hai ki aap hmesha khush rahen.



**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2012, 04:47:26 AM »
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Wah wah wah kaya baat hai Mann ji.. bahoot khoob appto hime apne shabdo se madhosh he karte chale gaye........kaya baat hai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2012, 07:49:09 AM »
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Badee madhosh karne waalee ghazal hai mann ji gugudee see kar dee.

Aapne apna Qeemati Waqt diya Saini Saheb aur meri is koshish ko saraaha.. uske liye aaapka Behad Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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