**~** Baat Ek Raat Ki **~**

by _Vicky_ on March 31, 2012, 08:40:30 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 10, 2012, 01:31:36 PM »
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Hmmmmmm kya taarif katun aapke is pyaar bhare pyaar me doobe huye geet ki.... bas aapka geet main padhta chala gaya aur nashe me doobta chala gaya ... bahut nasheeli peshkash hai ye aapki... sach me sharaab aur shabab me dooba huwa .... bahut bahut khoob Mann ji...!!!

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Itne Khubsoorat Comment Ke Liye tahe Dil Se aapka Shukriya Kapil Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #31 on: August 25, 2012, 08:10:18 AM »
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Sahi..bataau   mere paas words hi nahi hai....halaat bayaa karne ke liye...jo yahaa huye hai..apka...ye khoobsurat....khyaal pad kar...!

Bahoot..bahoot...bahoot........lazawaab...!




Chitra Ji Yakin maaniye Itne Waqt Baad aapko Yahan Dekh Ke Aur Itna Pyaara Comment Padh Ke Dil Khush Ho gaya..!!

Aapka Behad Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy yunhi Aate Raha kijiye..!!



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«Reply #32 on: October 24, 2012, 03:05:11 PM »
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love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4
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KAHAR dhaa gai aapki ye gazal mann ji.



Is Pyaari si Taareef Ke liye Aapka Behad Shukriya Heer Ji..  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #33 on: June 18, 2013, 08:38:07 PM »
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hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee maarrrrr dalaaa zaalimmmmm
aise poem pe reply kiye bina kaise rahun main...... madhoshi chha gai yaara padhkar ise..... uffffffff gazab ho tum khumaar e ishq k rajkumar ji....... gazab likhte ho sachchiiiiiiiiii itne din baad kuch aisa padha hai k bas dil me kuch kuch hone laga,,,,,,
mastam mast zabardasttttttttt post vicky

Kasak Ji.. Humen to Aapki Is Taareef Ne Maar Daala..!! Is Khubsoorat Si Daad Ke Liye Dheron Shukriya.. Aajkal Likh Nahi Paata hoon.. Aur aapke Saath Likhna bhi Bahut Yaad Aata Hai..!!! Jald Hi Wapsi karunga..!!

Ek Baar Phir Aapki Is Taareef Ke Liye Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy


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«Reply #34 on: June 19, 2013, 01:57:08 PM »
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mannnn .... aa jao na wapas ... mujhse bhi ab likha nahi jata shayad tumhara jaadu mujhpar bhi chal jaye .... chalo sath hi try karte hain kuch naya ...
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«Reply #35 on: September 26, 2017, 10:08:10 AM »
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mannnn .... aa jao na wapas ... mujhse bhi ab likha nahi jata shayad tumhara jaadu mujhpar bhi chal jaye .... chalo sath hi try karte hain kuch naya ...

Anamika Ji.. aa jao to phir..!! waqai kaafi din ho gaye.. kuch Likhte hain..

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«Reply #36 on: January 07, 2018, 06:13:39 PM »
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Anamika Ji.. aa jao to phir..!! waqai kaafi din ho gaye.. kuch Likhte hain..

**`** Mann **`**

lo main to aagai lekin tum gayab ho ab bhi
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«Reply #37 on: January 07, 2018, 10:27:52 PM »
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BAAT EK RAAT KI ..... MANN ! ITS SUPERB  Applause

ITS THE SEXIEST SHAYARI I HAVE EVER COME ACROSS ...... KEEP UP YOUR COMPOSITIONS .... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #38 on: June 06, 2019, 11:33:09 AM »
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lo main to aagai lekin tum gayab ho ab bhi


Aa Jaao Anamika jiii.. Phir se ho jaaye kuch Rumaani Maahol.. Kuch bikher do aap bhi yahan..

Humen To Nasha Ho Jata Hai, Tere Alfaazon Ko Padh Kar,
Kyun Is Qadar Lafzon Me Ishq-e-Sharaab Ghole Jaate Ho...

Tarsaate Ho Khud Ko Bhi, Tadap Dil Ki Meri Badha Kar,
Aur Raaton Ko Khwaabon Me Bhi Deewana Kiye Jate Ho....

Log Kahate Hain Kaunse Nashe Mein Jhoomte Ho "Mann" jiii,
Kaise Bata De Inhe Ki Tum Roz Aankhon Se Pilaate Ho..!!!!


**`** Mann **`**

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«Reply #39 on: June 06, 2019, 06:39:28 PM »
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Waah kyaa baat hai, nihaayat khoobsurat peshkash hai.
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«Reply #40 on: June 06, 2019, 07:47:05 PM »
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Aa Jaao Anamika jiii.. Phir se ho jaaye kuch Rumaani Maahol.. Kuch bikher do aap bhi yahan..

Humen To Nasha Ho Jata Hai, Tere Alfaazon Ko Padh Kar,
Kyun Is Qadar Lafzon Me Ishq-e-Sharaab Ghole Jaate Ho...

Tarsaate Ho Khud Ko Bhi, Tadap Dil Ki Meri Badha Kar,
Aur Raaton Ko Khwaabon Me Bhi Deewana Kiye Jate Ho....

Log Kahate Hain Kaunse Nashe Mein Jhoomte Ho "Mann" jiii,
Kaise Bata De Inhe Ki Tum Roz Aankhon Se Pilaate Ho..!!!!


**`** Mann **`**



aayeee hayeeeee mann ji ...  love4
sach me loot le gaye aap dil ko.... happy3
fir wahi rumaaniyat barsa gaye.... love4


Hume ilzaam na do aankhon se pilaane ka
Tum hi roz hamare maikhane chale aate ho...!

Chhedte ho taraane dil ke saaz rumaani chhed ke
Aur ishaaron ishaaron me hi dil loot le jate ho...!

Khinch lete ho kareeb apni nashili aankhon se
Aur baahon me le saanson ki khushbuu chura jate ho…!!

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«Reply #41 on: June 07, 2019, 10:10:20 AM »
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तुम्हारी यादो का किस्सा बाकि था ?
अँधेरे नभ में वो एक दीपक सहारा था
या तुम्हारे साथ गुज़ारे उन पलों की यादे
कुछ तारे यूँ टिम-टिमा रहे थे
मानो जैसे तुम गुन-गुना रही हो
हल्की हल्की माध्यम ठंडी हवा
मेरे तन मन को स्पर्श करते हुए
तुम्हारे होने का अंदेशा दिला रही थी
ये रात लंबी थी या तेरी याद गहरी थी.
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«Reply #42 on: June 07, 2019, 11:22:57 AM »
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Waah kyaa baat hai, nihaayat khoobsurat peshkash hai.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahot Bahot Shukriya Surindran ji..
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«Reply #43 on: June 13, 2019, 10:21:52 AM »
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तुम्हारी यादो का किस्सा बाकि था ?
अँधेरे नभ में वो एक दीपक सहारा था
या तुम्हारे साथ गुज़ारे उन पलों की यादे
कुछ तारे यूँ टिम-टिमा रहे थे
मानो जैसे तुम गुन-गुना रही हो
हल्की हल्की माध्यम ठंडी हवा
मेरे तन मन को स्पर्श करते हुए
तुम्हारे होने का अंदेशा दिला रही थी
ये रात लंबी थी या तेरी याद गहरी थी.


Bahot Bahot Khoob Anaam Ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #44 on: June 13, 2019, 10:42:55 AM »
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aayeee hayeeeee mann ji ...  love4
sach me loot le gaye aap dil ko.... happy3
fir wahi rumaaniyat barsa gaye.... love4


Hume ilzaam na do aankhon se pilaane ka
Tum hi roz hamare maikhane chale aate ho...!

Chhedte ho taraane dil ke saaz rumaani chhed ke
Aur ishaaron ishaaron me hi dil loot le jate ho...!

Khinch lete ho kareeb apni nashili aankhon se
Aur baahon me le saanson ki khushbuu chura jate ho…!!



Anamika ji Yeh hue na kuch Behakte hue se Alfaaz.. Lajawab hi likh daala aapne.. Bahot Pyara likha hai..  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Mayekhane Teri Nigaahon Ke Bewafa Ban Baithe,
Hum Un Paimaano Se Phir Bhi, Wafa Kar Baithe......

Qatl Hone Ko Peete Rahe Teri Aankhon Ke Jaam,
Marte-Marte Bhi Nashe Me Tere Lad-Khada Baithe...!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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