Baat jara si(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on July 15, 2013, 12:47:17 PM
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baat jara si thi pyaar ki usne ker di badi
bhich majhdhaar mei tanha thi wo khadi

dikhne mei pass thi bahut manzile pyaar ki
raah mei dikhi nahi muskile jo thi khadi

roka bahut tha usko sabne manmaani se
chand ko paane ke liye wo ab tak hai adi
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 12:51:11 PM »
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Manoj Sahab, zarra tallaffuz per dhyan dijiye.. jaise ki..

Manjil  is actually "Manzil".

Baaki aapke vichaar bohot gehere hain in ashaar main.
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2013, 01:48:39 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2013, 01:50:58 PM »
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waah waah
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Manoj Sahab, zarra tallaffuz per dhyan dijiye.. jaise ki..

Manjil  is actually "Manzil".

Baaki aapke vichaar bohot gehere hain in ashaar main.

THX
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2013, 03:00:59 PM »
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i like it.good
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