<>*Baat kar*<>:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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<>*Baat kar*<>

chalte chalte thak gaye hain teri raah mein mere kadam,,
ab to aake mujhe apni baahon me thamne ki baat kar !!!

main to rang chuki hun khud ko tere hi rang mein,,
tu bhi to khud ko mere rangon se rangeen kar !!!

main to geet hun tera ,, teri hi to nazm hun,,
kabhi apne hothon pe saja ke mujhko bhi mashhoor kar !!!

khali sadak ki tarha khali pada hai dil mera,,
isme tu apne sapno ka ghar basane ki baat kar !!!

mausam to badalte hain saal me sirf 4 baar,,
tu yun na har din mujhse nazarein badalne ki baat kar !!!

dhoop me hi saaya nazar aata hai apna,,
yun andheron me chhupkar mujhe khudse na dur kar !!!

muddat baad mila hai mujhe tu aaj yun khulkar,,
aaeee DEEWANE aaj fir se sambhalkar ladkhadane ki baat kar !!!


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Re: <>*Baat kar*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2010, 09:16:02 PM »

Wah wah baahut khoob Kasak ji,kamaal ke likhti hai aap.heart touching creation.excellent icon_salut


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*KasaK*....Dil Ki

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Re: <>*Baat kar*<>

«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2010, 03:37:14 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 11, 2010, 09:16:02 PM

Wah wah baahut khoob Kasak ji,kamaal ke likhti hai aap.heart touching creation.excellent icon_salut

shukriya madhu ji..... bas aap sab ka likha padh padh k kuch koshish karti hun
aap pasand karte ahin to hausla milta hai aur likhne ka.
thnx again ji


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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2010, 12:20:55 PM »

too good kasak.... icon_thumleft

Kyu he mujse ruth huaa,
na tadpa yu bata kya he meri khata,
issi bahane mujse baat kar....


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Re: <>*Baat kar*<>

«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 04:33:16 PM »

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 12, 2010, 12:20:55 PM

too good kasak.... icon_thumleft

Kyu he mujse ruth huaa,
na tadpa yu bata kya he meri khata,
issi bahane mujse baat kar....

thnx devangi ji....

bht achcha likha h aapne....


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ParwaaZ

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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 04:49:32 PM »

Kasak Jee aapke khayaal aur ahsaas achche hai.....
Bayaan bhi naye andaaz meiN kiya hai aapne....
Achcha laga padhker......

Hum bhi kuch arz kareN....
Tujhe haq hai chahe jo tu mere saath kar
MaiN mana luNga tujhko bus ek mulakhaat kar


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 05:15:22 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 11, 2010, 07:42:39 PM

<>*Baat kar*<>

Wah! Anamika Ji, Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai aap ki
Har ek peshkash aatamvibhor kar deti hai


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Re: <>*Baat kar*<>

«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 07:35:12 AM »

wah Kasak ji wah... bahut pyaari kavita hai ye aapki... sach me bahut pasand aayi humein... maine ye bahut din pehle padha tha par ye soch ke reply nahi kiya ki iske jawaab me kuch likhunga... par aapki ye kavita itni achchi hai ki iske jawaab me mujhse ab tak kuch nahi ban paayaa... sach kahun to kuch ban hi nahi raha... bahut khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne is kavita me... saare sher ek se badhkar ek hain... ye mujhe best laga...

main to geet hun tera ,, teri hi to nazm hun,,
kabhi apne hothon pe saja ke mujhko bhi mashhoor kar !!!

bahut khoob Kasak ji... bahut hi unda... yunhi likhte rahiye jisse humein bhi kuch sikhne ka mauka milta rahe aapse.... keep up the good work...!!!


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