Bachpan ka pyar

by deepika_divya on January 04, 2007, 05:08:31 AM
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bachpan ka pyar jawani mea rang lata hai,

iskq kiya tha bachpan pe humne, tab sayad main ndan thi,
dil lagaya tha bachpan mea humne, tab sayad main anjaan thi.

khela karte the hum galiyo mea
kabi ruta , kabhi manay karte the.
school jaya karte the saath saath.
saath picnic manay karte the.

homework karte the saath saath ,
cartoon network dekha karthe the.
chocolate ke liye lada karte the hum ,
phir saath baith kar khaya karte the

na jane kab bade ho gaye hum
kuch pata hi na chala
ab haar baat achchi lagti hai uski,
woh ban gaya hai mera humdum

Ab tho hum raaton main jaga kartein hai
din mea ganton baatein kiya karten,
saat jine marne ki kasme kaya kartein hai.
sayad hum is baat ka ehsaas ho gaya hai
ke humein pyar ho gaya hai

pyar ki surat hui thi bachpan se
aishas hua jawani mea
[/b]Bachpan ka pyar jawani mea rang lata hai.
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2007, 04:17:34 PM »
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ye kahan kho gayi thi deepika G ?
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2007, 05:19:26 PM »
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Very nice Divs.. I am moving it to main section Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2007, 12:13:05 AM »
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sach likha divya...
Bachpan ka pyar Jawani main rang lata hai...

wah wah..
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2007, 07:49:29 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Divya.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2007, 08:30:00 AM »
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Quote from: "deepika_divya"
bachpan ka pyar jawani mea rang lata hai,

iskq kiya tha bachpan pe humne, tab sayad main ndan thi,
dil lagaya tha bachpan mea humne, tab sayad main anjaan thi.

khela karte the hum galiyo mea
kabi ruta , kabhi manay karte the.
school jaya karte the saath saath.
saath picnic manay karte the.

homework karte the saath saath ,
cartoon network dekha karthe the.
chocolate ke liye lada karte the hum ,
phir saath baith kar khaya karte the

na jane kab bade ho gaye hum
kuch pata hi na chala
ab haar baat achchi lagti hai uski,
woh ban gaya hai mera humdum

Ab tho hum raaton main jaga kartein hai
din mea ganton baatein kiya karten,
saat jine marne ki kasme kaya kartein hai.
sayad hum is baat ka ehsaas ho gaya hai
ke humein pyar ho gaya hai

pyar ki surat hui thi bachpan se
aishas hua jawani mea
[/b]Bachpan ka pyar jawani mea rang lata hai.


Deepika ji bahoot hi oomda ahsaas...


tumhaare pyaar ki agan
bachpan se tumahari lagan
anubhooti hoti rahi is tarah
jawaani naape iski shagan....

Tumhaari ratoN ko jagna
rut ka is tara dil se lagna
sawan ki jhoole ki tarah
diloN ko ik duje ke liye bhagna

waah bahoot khoob deepika ji daad hazir hai


Harash[/i][/color]
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2007, 04:28:24 AM »
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Thank u so much All of u..

I feeling glad that u lyk it.. I written this poetry when I was in 11th class.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2007, 02:07:11 AM »
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Bohat khoob Deepika...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2007, 01:35:25 PM »
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Nice one Divya...
and Good Reply Harash...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2007, 01:44:47 PM »
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very nice divya  .......& harsh ji
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2007, 12:08:20 PM »
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Waaaah kya baat hai Divya.....Fantastic...!!!

Le Chali mujhe bhi yeh Mohabbat ki Pyas phir kahin......
Jab aya Hosh toh chala pata ke bhatak rahe the hum Janmon se Yahin Kahin.......!!!!!

Very true.....!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2007, 11:25:25 AM »
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Thank u so much all of u
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Nomi786
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2007, 05:28:18 AM »
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Nice Deepika
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2007, 07:52:21 AM »
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thank u so much Nomi
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2007, 11:45:33 AM »
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Quote from: "deepika_divya"
thank u so much Nomi



U welcome Deepika
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