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paa liya karta thaa kabhi tu mujhe tatol kar raat ke andhare mein bhi
aaj din ke ujaale mein bhi mere naam tere labo per nahi hai
yeh gujarate waqt ki saajish hai ya………
mere pyaar mein ab who kashish nahi hai………..
kabhi mere labo per jami khamoshi bhi tu pad liya karta thaa
aaj meri jubaan se nikali baat ka tujh ko yakeen kyu nahi hai
kar deti thee kabhi diwana tujhko mero shokhiyaan ,nadaniyaan
aaj meri pyaar ki baato ka bhi kyu tujhe per asar nahi hai
kabhi mere chhone bhar se tu ban jaata thaa ek jalata sharara
aur mujhe bhi kar deta thaa diwaana yeh pyaar tumhara
aaj mere pure vajood ka bhi tujh per asar kyu nahi hai
kho jaaya karta thaa kabhi tu peharo pehar merei aankho ke nashe mein dub kar
aaj mujhe per ek nazar daalne ka bhi kyu tujhe waqt nahi hai
kiya karta thaa kabhi mere husan ke charche tu diwaano ki tarha
aaj kyu tere dil ki dharkan mein bhi naam mera nahi hai…..
kaha karte they kabhi apni saanse apni jaan mujhko
kyu ab woh teri rahagujar an meri raha nahi hai…
thaam kar haath mera tune kiya thaa umar bhar saath chalne ka vaada
kyu aaj tere waqt ka ek pal bhi aaj mera nahi hai
dhal gya hai kya mosam pyaar ka tere mere beech mein
ya tujhe ab garo.n se hi fursat nahi hai………
yah gujarate waqt ka hai yeh aalam
ya mere pyaar mein ab who kashisih nahi hai…………………..
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2006, 06:29:46 PM » |
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=D> =D> =D> !
Bahut bahut aache maata Jee...
Wasie ye Jitni lambi dikhti hai utni hai nahi .... Padne mein lagta hai ek chhoti se Shayari hai.. Very wel done!
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2006, 06:33:44 PM » |
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paa liya karta thaa kabhi tu mujhe tatol kar raat ke andhare mein bhi
aaj din ke ujaale mein bhi mere naam tere labo per nahi hai
yeh gujarate waqt ki saajish hai ya………
mere pyaar mein ab who kashish nahi hai………..
kabhi mere labo per jami khamoshi bhi tu pad liya karta thaa
aaj meri jubaan se nikali baat ka tujh ko yakeen kyu nahi hai
kar deti thee kabhi diwana tujhko mero shokhiyaan ,nadaniyaan
aaj meri pyaar ki baato ka bhi kyu tujhe per asar nahi hai
kabhi mere chhone bhar se tu ban jaata thaa ek jalata sharara
aur mujhe bhi kar deta thaa diwaana yeh pyaar tumhara
aaj mere pure vajood ka bhi tujh per asar kyu nahi hai
kho jaaya karta thaa kabhi tu peharo pehar merei aankho ke nashe mein dub kar
aaj mujhe per ek nazar daalne ka bhi kyu tujhe waqt nahi hai
kiya karta thaa kabhi mere husan ke charche tu diwaano ki tarha
aaj kyu tere dil ki dharkan mein bhi naam mera nahi hai…..
kaha karte they kabhi apni saanse apni jaan mujhko
kyu ab woh teri rahagujar an meri raha nahi hai…
thaam kar haath mera tune kiya thaa umar bhar saath chalne ka vaada
kyu aaj tere waqt ka ek pal bhi aaj mera nahi hai
dhal gya hai kya mosam pyaar ka tere mere beech mein
ya tujhe ab garo.n se hi fursat nahi hai………
yah gujarate waqt ka hai yeh aalam
ya mere pyaar mein ab who kashisih nahi hai………………….. Wah kya baat hai....Ranjana Dekha hai humne bhi badalte tujhe jaise Chand Sitaare..... Tum baat karti ho Chahat ki kabhi khair se tumne bhi poocha hota kaise hai haal hamare...... Dinn Guzarta hai yeh tumhe kya pata....Raat ko toh hote nahi ab Deedar bhi tumhare..... Bolo kaise kahein hum bhi ki tum kyu na ho sake kabhi Dil-O-Jaan se hamare.......!!!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2006, 06:41:03 PM » |
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Sunn ek Sada kya tumhe bhi Sunai deti hai......
Rawani hai jo Saanson me kya woh aaj bhi kisi se mehkayi jaati hai.....
Mahobbat Mahobbat bas ab dikhti hai hume Chaaron taraf......
Kya kahein hum ki usme bhi chupa tera Nasha hai Sachh......
Mere lahoo se Mehekenge ek Dinn Gulaab tere Gulistaan ke......
Choot jayegi Kalam haathon se tere sunke ki mere Armaan jayada toh na the........!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2006, 07:15:12 PM » |
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shukriya Neer dear.....bahot khub Gaurav..............aacha likha tumne.........  |
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2006, 09:11:43 PM » |
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Shukriya Ranju
Sach tere Pyar ne mujhpar kuch Jaadu kar dikhaya.....
Binn Sune Awaaz teri dekh me aaj raat bhar na so paya.....
Ab bhi intezaar hai tera inn Ankhon me.....
Jaise Ek Daal par Kabootar basera karta Paya.....
Rooth gaya Rabb bhi ab toh mujhse.....
Kehta tune Cheen lee meri Jannat ki Chaya.....
Aa Jao Sanam ab Aur nahi raha jata.....
Dekho aaj kaise mitt raha hai tera SaYa.....!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2006, 01:54:50 AM » |
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wah !!!! bahut khoob.......gaurav..............
woh mohabbat ke pehle ehasas ki nishaani
kyu badal jaate hain rishte kyu bada jaati hai kahaani
hai bahut lamaba yeh afsaana magar jindagi ka waqt kam hai
jaane kaise kaise rang dikha jaati hai yeh meri jindagi
woh lamhaat gujarate ja rahe hain paas se
woh toh rukate nahi hai ab tu hi tham ja jindagi
yeh inayat hai teri ki hum muskara dete hain aaj bhi tere khayal se
aur kabhi beete waqt ki yaade kar deti hai aankho ko nam jindagi
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2006, 04:14:00 AM » |
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very beautiful poem
aapki yeh poem pad kar mujhe jagjit singh ki ek gazal yaad aa gayi....
woh jo apna tha kabhi, wohi aaj aur kissi ka kyun hai....
bhaut hi achi poem hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2006, 05:44:39 AM » |
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bahut khoob ranju aap waqai kamal ka likhati hain
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«Reply #9 on: July 02, 2006, 09:12:31 AM » |
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very beautiful poem
aapki yeh poem pad kar mujhe jagjit singh ki ek gazal yaad aa gayi....
woh jo apna tha kabhi, wohi aaj aur kissi ka kyun hai....
bhaut hi achi poem hai shukriya ji...........aapko pasand aayi aacha laga..... |
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2006, 09:13:13 AM » |
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bahut khoob ranju aap waqai kamal ka likhati hain shukriya tabassum.............. |
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«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2006, 09:32:34 AM » |
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sach mein!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ranz-na tum etna achcha likhti ho mujhe to malum hii nahii tha! wah wah kya kehna!:P..................... :D
Gaurav ne bhi khub sath diya hein!...weldone man! :wink:
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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2006, 05:46:05 PM » |
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Thnx alll......
Tere Badalte Ehsaason ko phir ek baar Khawahishon me badal dunga.....
Poore kar sab khawaab tere tere Chehre par ek Muskaan la dunga......
Guzregi jab harr Shaaam badalte Mausam ke sang toh bas hume yaad rakhna......
Deri ho jaya karegi kabhi kabhi Rang badalne me tum bas meri Raah takna.......!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2006, 06:07:17 PM » |
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bahut khub ...........shukriya shahid.............apne aas pass ki kahbar rakha karo....... :wink: uske damaan se aati meethi khusboo ka mujhe ehasas hai woh mere bahut kareeb hai mere dil ke bahut pass hai per waqt hai yeh kabhi thamata nahi hai ek jaisa kabhi bhi isliye uski baato ki ,uski yaado ki ek chhooan mere liye ek pawan ehasas hai |
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«Reply #14 on: July 03, 2006, 03:41:42 AM » |
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paa liya karta thaa kabhi tu mujhe tatol kar raat ke andhare mein bhi
aaj din ke ujaale mein bhi mere naam tere labo per nahi hai
yeh gujarate waqt ki saajish hai ya………
mere pyaar mein ab who kashish nahi hai………..
kabhi mere labo per jami khamoshi bhi tu pad liya karta thaa
aaj meri jubaan se nikali baat ka tujh ko yakeen kyu nahi hai
kar deti thee kabhi diwana tujhko mero shokhiyaan ,nadaniyaan
aaj meri pyaar ki baato ka bhi kyu tujhe per asar nahi hai
kabhi mere chhone bhar se tu ban jaata thaa ek jalata sharara
aur mujhe bhi kar deta thaa diwaana yeh pyaar tumhara
aaj mere pure vajood ka bhi tujh per asar kyu nahi hai
kho jaaya karta thaa kabhi tu peharo pehar merei aankho ke nashe mein dub kar
aaj mujhe per ek nazar daalne ka bhi kyu tujhe waqt nahi hai
kiya karta thaa kabhi mere husan ke charche tu diwaano ki tarha
aaj kyu tere dil ki dharkan mein bhi naam mera nahi hai…..
kaha karte they kabhi apni saanse apni jaan mujhko
kyu ab woh teri rahagujar an meri raha nahi hai…
thaam kar haath mera tune kiya thaa umar bhar saath chalne ka vaada
kyu aaj tere waqt ka ek pal bhi aaj mera nahi hai
dhal gya hai kya mosam pyaar ka tere mere beech mein
ya tujhe ab garo.n se hi fursat nahi hai………
yah gujarate waqt ka hai yeh aalam
ya mere pyaar mein ab who kashisih nahi hai………………….. excellent |
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