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«Reply #15 on: July 03, 2006, 08:57:14 AM » |
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shukriya Nitiesh.......
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«Reply #16 on: July 03, 2006, 07:23:44 PM » |
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amavas ki raat mein jugnuo.n ka sath ho
jab tujhe belibas karun jab koi nahi tere pas ho
chaand ko mein rukhsat kar k tere aangan me diya jala dun
jab aaye koi tufan agar to mein tujhe iss dil mein chupa lun
har ghadi har lamha tere deedar kliye mein tadapunga
par jab aaega yaad tera wo pak husn to mein bhi kuch aanhe.n bhar lunga
teri muskaan ko apni aankho me panah dunga
agar ho saka to tere khwaab ko me sach kar k dikha dunga
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2006, 04:07:33 AM » |
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bahut hi khubsurat Nitiesh..........
pyaar ki laye mein ab geet sajane lage hain
woh amawas mein bhi chand ban ke mujhse milne lage hain
sara sama mehek raha hai unke hi pyaar se
ek nasha sa ban kar woh mujhe mein utrane lage hain
ho jaata hai dil mera betaab unki awaz sun kar
hum unke labo per payaas ban ke jagane lage hain
le le woh mujhko apni bahaon ki panahao mein ek din
bas unmein saamane ke sapne meri aankho mein sajane lage hain
der tak gunjati rahi unki hansi mere kaano mein
woh ek saaz sa ban kar mere dil mein dharkane lage hain
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«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2006, 10:28:27 AM » |
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GUd job Ranju and NItesh
Bhala kabhi kisi ki Zindagi badli hai....
Jo tum aaj apne Ehsaas badalte hai.....
Rang jab chaye IShQ ke.....
Toh tum kyu phir apni Raat badalte ho...!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 04, 2006, 11:04:41 AM » |
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Log kehte hain k waqt k saath ehsaas badla karte hain...
koi samjaye unhe k khabi hum khudai badal sakte hain??
hum ab ik pal bhi judaii ka seh nahi sakte...
wo ab dil o jaan main basa karte hain...
koi baas nahi chalta ab is dil pe humara...
wo ab isse bhi legaye hain...!
dil to bohot kiya k churaloon unhe is zamane se...
hum to waise bhi naam se unke jud chuke hain
ab to raaton ko hi unhe pukara karte hain...
k wo nahi ate par phir bhi unka intzaar kiya karte hain..!!
ishq hai ab dil main samaya...
bas ek unki kaami hai....aur hain hum besahara...!
~rosh~
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«Reply #20 on: July 04, 2006, 11:46:43 AM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav and wonderful job Roshu................bahut khubsurat likha hai..........
kuch ehsaas sari umar hamare saath hi rehte hain
un palo ke ehsaas se hi hum apni jindagi jeete hain
woh pehli baar unki chhoona akasar yaad aata hai
mujhko unke saath na jaane kahan pe le jaata hai
woh pehli baar labo ka milna aaj bhi mujhe kampa jaata hai
aaj bhi usko yaad karke dil mera ghabara jaata hai..........
jab mili thee nazaro se nazare na jaane hui thee kitni khamosh baatein
aaj bhi unko yaad karana meri nazaro ko sharam se jhuka jaata hai
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch jindagi mein badal jaata hai
bas yahi beete palo ka ehsaas hi hamaare saath reh jaata hai
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«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2006, 02:16:01 PM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav and wonderful job Roshu................bahut khubsurat likha hai..........
kuch ehsaas sari umar hamare saath hi rehte hain
un palo ke ehsaas se hi hum apni jindagi jeete hain
woh pehli baar unki chhoona akasar yaad aata hai
mujhko unke saath na jaane kahan pe le jaata hai
woh pehli baar labo ka milna aaj bhi mujhe kampa jaata hai
aaj bhi usko yaad karke dil mera ghabara jaata hai..........
jab mili thee nazaro se nazare na jaane hui thee kitni khamosh baatein
aaj bhi unko yaad karana meri nazaro ko sharam se jhuka jaata hai
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch jindagi mein badal jaata hai
bas yahi beete palo ka ehsaas hi hamaare saath reh jaata hai oooops no words at all ranju :D simply great |
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«Reply #22 on: July 04, 2006, 03:08:16 PM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav and wonderful job Roshu................bahut khubsurat likha hai..........
kuch ehsaas sari umar hamare saath hi rehte hain
un palo ke ehsaas se hi hum apni jindagi jeete hain
woh pehli baar unki chhoona akasar yaad aata hai
mujhko unke saath na jaane kahan pe le jaata hai
woh pehli baar labo ka milna aaj bhi mujhe kampa jaata hai
aaj bhi usko yaad karke dil mera ghabara jaata hai..........
jab mili thee nazaro se nazare na jaane hui thee kitni khamosh baatein
aaj bhi unko yaad karana meri nazaro ko sharam se jhuka jaata hai
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch jindagi mein badal jaata hai
bas yahi beete palo ka ehsaas hi hamaare saath reh jaata hai woooooooo....gr8 :D mujhe bhi yaad hein hamari wo pehli mulakat
Ham dono ne bohot kii thi ek dusre ke dil ki baat
Tu hii meri zindagii ki hadaf baan gayii thi
Ek tu ne hii bharr dii thi muhjh mein jeene ki wajaahat
Aab to tu haame ehsaa samajh kar ja rahii hein
Hamse nata tod kis gairr kii duniya saja rahii hein..... |
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«Reply #23 on: July 04, 2006, 03:13:03 PM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav and wonderful job Roshu................bahut khubsurat likha hai..........
kuch ehsaas sari umar hamare saath hi rehte hain
un palo ke ehsaas se hi hum apni jindagi jeete hain
woh pehli baar unki chhoona akasar yaad aata hai
mujhko unke saath na jaane kahan pe le jaata hai
woh pehli baar labo ka milna aaj bhi mujhe kampa jaata hai
aaj bhi usko yaad karke dil mera ghabara jaata hai..........
jab mili thee nazaro se nazare na jaane hui thee kitni khamosh baatein
aaj bhi unko yaad karana meri nazaro ko sharam se jhuka jaata hai
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch jindagi mein badal jaata hai
bas yahi beete palo ka ehsaas hi hamaare saath reh jaata hai wow awesome reply mom :D |
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«Reply #24 on: July 05, 2006, 05:56:43 AM » |
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paa liya karta thaa kabhi tu mujhe tatol kar raat ke andhare mein bhi
aaj din ke ujaale mein bhi mere naam tere labo per nahi hai
yeh gujarate waqt ki saajish hai ya………
mere pyaar mein ab who kashish nahi hai………..
kabhi mere labo per jami khamoshi bhi tu pad liya karta thaa
aaj meri jubaan se nikali baat ka tujh ko yakeen kyu nahi hai
kar deti thee kabhi diwana tujhko mero shokhiyaan ,nadaniyaan
aaj meri pyaar ki baato ka bhi kyu tujhe per asar nahi hai
kabhi mere chhone bhar se tu ban jaata thaa ek jalata sharara
aur mujhe bhi kar deta thaa diwaana yeh pyaar tumhara
aaj mere pure vajood ka bhi tujh per asar kyu nahi hai
kho jaaya karta thaa kabhi tu peharo pehar merei aankho ke nashe mein dub kar
aaj mujhe per ek nazar daalne ka bhi kyu tujhe waqt nahi hai
kiya karta thaa kabhi mere husan ke charche tu diwaano ki tarha
aaj kyu tere dil ki dharkan mein bhi naam mera nahi hai…..
kaha karte they kabhi apni saanse apni jaan mujhko
kyu ab woh teri rahagujar an meri raha nahi hai…
thaam kar haath mera tune kiya thaa umar bhar saath chalne ka vaada
kyu aaj tere waqt ka ek pal bhi aaj mera nahi hai
dhal gya hai kya mosam pyaar ka tere mere beech mein
ya tujhe ab garo.n se hi fursat nahi hai………
yah gujarate waqt ka hai yeh aalam
ya mere pyaar mein ab who kashisih nahi hai………………….. RANJANA.... aapne itna accha likha hai ki mere paas tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad gaye hai... phir bhi kuch lafz chura ke laya hoon... KHUBSOORAT-LAJAWAB-BEHTREEN |
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«Reply #25 on: July 05, 2006, 09:01:21 AM » |
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Sangy..thanks  Roshu dear ab thanks kehna padega.. :wink: Vicky ji shukriya aapke chura ke laaye gaye lafazo ke liye.. :D |
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«Reply #26 on: July 05, 2006, 09:33:47 AM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav and wonderful job Roshu................bahut khubsurat likha hai..........
kuch ehsaas sari umar hamare saath hi rehte hain
un palo ke ehsaas se hi hum apni jindagi jeete hain
woh pehli baar unki chhoona akasar yaad aata hai
mujhko unke saath na jaane kahan pe le jaata hai
woh pehli baar labo ka milna aaj bhi mujhe kampa jaata hai
aaj bhi usko yaad karke dil mera ghabara jaata hai..........
jab mili thee nazaro se nazare na jaane hui thee kitni khamosh baatein
aaj bhi unko yaad karana meri nazaro ko sharam se jhuka jaata hai
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch jindagi mein badal jaata hai
bas yahi beete palo ka ehsaas hi hamaare saath reh jaata hai woooooooo....gr8 :D mujhe bhi yaad hein hamari wo pehli mulakat
Ham dono ne bohot kii thi ek dusre ke dil ki baat
Tu hii meri zindagii ki hadaf baan gayii thi
Ek tu ne hii bharr dii thi muhjh mein jeene ki wajaahat
Aab to tu haame ehsaa samajh kar ja rahii hein
Hamse nata tod kis gairr kii duniya saja rahii hein.....bahut khub Shahid ji............shukriya hosala afzaai ke liye.... kuch beete palo ke jugnu meri aankho mein jagmagane lage unke pyaar ko ab hum apne geeti mein gungaane lage kabhi manga thaa jine humne din raat duawo.n mein woh meri zindagi ko apni baato se mehakane lage unke pyaar ke meethe ehasao se mera chaman mehek utha woh mujhe apne dil ka sakun aur qarar nazar aane lage |
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«Reply #27 on: July 05, 2006, 06:17:20 PM » |
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bahut khub Shahid ji............shukriya hosala afzaai ke liye.... kuch beete palo ke jugnu meri aankho mein jagmagane lage unke pyaar ko ab hum apne geeti mein gungaane lage kabhi manga thaa jine humne din raat duawo.n mein woh meri zindagi ko apni baato se mehakane lage unke pyaar ke meethe ehasao se mera chaman mehek utha woh mujhe apne dil ka sakun aur qarar nazar aane lage hahahha...............sach mein ! maine tumhara hosla aafzaii kiya!..  But u did good job ranz-na :D |
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«Reply #28 on: July 05, 2006, 09:23:00 PM » |
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bahut khub Shahid ji............shukriya hosala afzaai ke liye.... kuch beete palo ke jugnu meri aankho mein jagmagane lage unke pyaar ko ab hum apne geeti mein gungaane lage kabhi manga thaa jine humne din raat duawo.n mein woh meri zindagi ko apni baato se mehakane lage unke pyaar ke meethe ehasao se mera chaman mehek utha woh mujhe apne dil ka sakun aur qarar nazar aane lage yaadoin ke kuch diye jhalne laghe usse bheethe huwe kaal mein hum jalne laghe isse qdar hum jaal kar rakh hogaye koi pehchane bhi na laghe, isse duniya ke liye anjani_si hum hogaye |
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«Reply #29 on: July 06, 2006, 04:22:26 AM » |
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bahut khub Anjani dear......
ehasas hai mujhe ki mujhe har pal bas diye ki tarah jalna hai
sab kuch rakh ke dil mein chupchaap sulgana hai
dard ko chhipana hai hansi ki naqab mein
per kise se kabhi bhi kuch nahi kehana hai
har pal chup reh kar anajan sa sab gamo se ho kar
bas mujhe yun hi akele hi chalna hai bas akele hi chalna hai!!!!!!!!
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