Bagair Mere...

by Deepati on July 20, 2008, 08:32:04 PM
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Bagair mere tujhe chan aa nahin sakta,
Mera jawaab kahin se tu laa nahin sakta.

Laakh chahre lagaao banawat ke,
Dilon ki baat ko chehra chhupa nahin sakta.

Haseen Taj Mahal banaane waala bhi,
Dilon ke toote gharondhe bana nahin sakta.

Pathar saa dil bana diya hai zamaane ne,
Sataye koi bhi mujhko rula nahin sakta.
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2008, 04:31:33 AM »
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Deepati Ji..aajkal Apki Kalam se bahot Achchha Kalaam Padhne Ko Milta Hai
Bahot Khoob..Likhte Rahiye..

Haseen Taj Mahal banaane waala bhi
Dilon ke toote gharondhe bana nahin sakta

Pathar saa dil bana diya hai zamaane ne
Sataye koi bhi mujhko rula nahin sakta

Kaafi Dard Ka Bariqi Se Izhaar Hai..Bahot Khoob
 
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2008, 04:57:06 AM »
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bohut khoob dipti ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2008, 06:59:46 AM »
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aapki himmat ki daad deta hu dipti ji
kya khoob kaha hai aapne, k sataye koi b mujhko rula nahi sakta.......
maan na padega yaar bahut lajwab likhti hai aap..........
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2008, 10:32:50 AM »
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Very nice deepati jee.Keep it up.
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Deepati
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2008, 04:48:39 AM »
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Thank You, Sweeti Ji.
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Deepati
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2008, 04:50:06 AM »
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Shukriya Kaushiki Ji
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 21, 2008, 04:57:06 AM
bohut khoob dipti ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2008, 04:58:54 AM »
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Shukriya Sagar Ji... Waise yeh Kalaam mera khud ka likha hua nahin hai lekin jisne bhi likha hai, khoob likha, khaas kar yeh line - "Sataye koi bhi mujhko rula nahin sakta"!
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2008, 05:16:48 AM »
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Muhammed Ji...Bahut Shukriya! Mujhe behad khushi huyi ki aapko aajkal hamari sharing pasand aa rahi hai. Usual Smile
 

Haseen Taj Mahal banaane waala bhi
Dilon ke toote gharondhe bana nahin sakta

Pathar saa dil bana diya hai zamaane ne
Sataye koi bhi mujhko rula nahin sakta

Kaafi Dard Ka Bariqi Se Izhaar Hai..Bahot Khoob
 
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 01:04:20 AM »
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Very nice and beautiful sharing Deepti ji,excellent. icon_thumleft
beautiful lines by Muhammed ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 01:06:59 AM »
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NICE SHARING DEEPATI JI
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Deepati
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 01:11:23 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 09, 2009, 01:04:20 AM
Very nice and beautiful sharing Deepti ji,excellent. icon_thumleft
beautiful lines by Muhammed ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya, Madhu Ji! Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 01:12:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 01:06:59 AM
NICE SHARING DEEPATI JI

Shukriya, Pooja Ji! Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 01:22:21 PM »
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Very nice sharing Deepati Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 03:19:01 PM »
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Very Nice Sharing Deepati Dear.. Applause


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