bahaar Lott Ayee Hai..........................(AD)

by Jaanasheen on March 12, 2009, 12:00:47 PM
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Aap meri Aahaton mein, aap meri nihgaaon mein aksar chaaye hotay hain,
Aksar subha mulakat se pehle, mere khwaabon mein aaye hotay hain.

Ka bhi fiza ban k, aas paas ghulte hain, ka bhi geet ban k goonjte hain...
Mere tassavvur mein aatay hain, mere khayaal ban k dimaagh pe soojte hain.

Aap jaisa qayanat mein kaheen nahi hai, "Azeem",
ye baat tho tayya hai, buss mere liye yehee sachchai hai...
Aap aaye zindagee mein iss tarhaan, k barson se
jo hummse bahaar roohtee thee, wo aaj phir lott ayee hai!

Anjaan Dharkan
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2009, 12:03:37 PM »
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\Waah Kya KHoob Likha Hai Sidraah Ji Aapne,.
BOhat Achche Mashallah,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2009, 12:19:31 PM »
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Janaasheen ji, aap hee ka kamaal hai sub!
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 12:21:03 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 12, 2009, 12:19:31 PM
Janaasheen ji, aap hee ka kamaal hai sub!

Thank U Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 03:32:58 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 12, 2009, 12:21:03 PM
Thank U Ji,.

hmmm...
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2009, 05:23:09 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai....Jaanasheenji   Applause Applause Applause
Ye "Anjaan Dharkan" aapka up naam hai kya ?
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 12, 2009, 12:00:47 PM
Aap meri Aahaton mein, aap meri nihgaaon mein aksar chaaye hotay hain,
Aksar subha mulakat se pehle, mere khwaabon mein aaye hotay hain.

Ka bhi fiza ban k, aas paas ghulte hain, ka bhi geet ban k goonjte hain...
Mere tassavvur mein aatay hain, mere khayaal ban k dimaagh pe soojte hain.

Aap jaisa qayanat mein kaheen nahi hai, "Azeem",
ye baat tho tayya hai, buss mere liye yehee sachchai hai...
Aap aaye zindagee mein iss tarhaan, k barson se
jo hummse bahaar roohtee thee, wo aaj phir lott ayee hai!

Anjaan Dharkan
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2009, 06:28:05 PM »
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well i beleive things are bit confused here. If ad wrote this poem y janasheen posted it. 

I noticed this fact only after  Anaam comments. 

Anyway whoever wrote this good work.
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 06:46:01 PM »
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Jaanasheenji Anjaan se pehchan kara di......
Dharkane jo sust thi unme jaan bhar di...
Shukriya...Azeemji aur Jaanasheenji....
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 12, 2009, 12:00:47 PM
Aap meri Aahaton mein, aap meri nihgaaon mein aksar chaaye hotay hain,
Aksar subha mulakat se pehle, mere khwaabon mein aaye hotay hain.

Ka bhi fiza ban k, aas paas ghulte hain, ka bhi geet ban k goonjte hain...
Mere tassavvur mein aatay hain, mere khayaal ban k dimaagh pe soojte hain.

Aap jaisa qayanat mein kaheen nahi hai, "Azeem",
ye baat tho tayya hai, buss mere liye yehee sachchai hai...
Aap aaye zindagee mein iss tarhaan, k barson se
jo hummse bahaar roohtee thee, wo aaj phir lott ayee hai!

Anjaan Dharkan
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2009, 06:38:52 AM »
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janasheen ji mein bhi thodi confuse hu ki ye kavita anjaan dhadkan ki likhi hui hai ya aapki
well chahe jisne bhi likhi ho bohut achi likhi hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2009, 11:47:55 AM »
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lihkhee maine hai, my name is sidraah, azeem ji k liye... sorry about the confusion.
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2009, 11:53:00 AM »
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Waise Meri Khwaaish Thi Ke Meri 15000 Post Miss Sidraah Kare,.
isliye Unhone Ye Post Ki Hai,.

Ye Unka Work hai,

Shukriya,.
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2009, 04:34:29 PM »
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nicely written and unusually posted....:D
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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2009, 05:24:43 PM »
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Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 16, 2009, 04:34:29 PM
nicely written and unusually posted....:D
Thank U JI,.
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2009, 12:08:25 PM »
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Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 16, 2009, 04:34:29 PM
nicely written and unusually posted....:D

shukriya!
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