Bahoot Woh Ho tum .. !!!

by deepika_divya on January 16, 2010, 04:43:32 PM
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«Reply #30 on: January 29, 2010, 09:53:33 AM »
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Wah Divya Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Hi pyaar Bhara likha hai aapne.. Applause


Unhe Shikaayat Hai Ki Hum Unhe Yaad Nahi Karte,
Naadan Hain Wo Jo Mera Dil-e-Haal Nahi Samajhte...

Saansen-Dharkan-Ehasaas Mere, Hain Uske Dam Se,
Zinda Hoon Sirf Uske Liye, Wo Itna Nahi Samajhte....!!!




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #31 on: January 29, 2010, 10:02:17 AM »
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Waah Waah.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai VIcky...

Tera Naam Leke Jeene Lage Hai Ab Hum,
Tere Naam Par Mar Jaane Ko Jee Chahta hai

Itna Tadap Chuke hai Tere Intzaar mein
Ab Tere liye sab Kuch Lutane ko jee chahta hai

Divya
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«Reply #32 on: January 29, 2010, 10:44:39 AM »
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BAHO ACHHI MEHFIL SAJAI HE AAP DONO NE....
KEEP IT UP.....DIVYA DI N VICKY JI.... Clapping Smiley   Applause
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«Reply #33 on: January 30, 2010, 04:46:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Devangi Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #34 on: January 30, 2010, 04:52:02 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 29, 2010, 10:02:17 AM
Waah Waah.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai VIcky...

Tera Naam Leke Jeene Lage Hai Ab Hum,
Tere Naam Par Mar Jaane Ko Jee Chahta hai

Itna Tadap Chuke hai Tere Intzaar mein
Ab Tere liye sab Kuch Lutane ko jee chahta hai

Divya

Wah Kya Baat hai Divya.. Dil Ki baaton Ko Alfaazon Me Dhaalna Koi aapse Seekhe.. Applause Applause



Mujhe Loot Le Jaye, Mere Dilbar Ki Adaayen,
Shayad Yehi Har Dil Ka Bhi Armaan Hota Hai.....

Labon Se Choomne Ki Tamanna Hoti Hai Sanam,
Pahali Mulaaqat Me Kahan Yeh Aasan Hota Hai...!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #35 on: January 30, 2010, 05:02:17 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Vicky.. Hum kahan likh paate hai bas woh tho aapka saath mil jata hai tho kuch likh lete hai...

NaZro Mein Kaid tha Jo ehsaas Hamare
Unn Ehsaaso Ko Main ab tak Bula Nahi Paai  !!

Teri Sargoshi Main Aisi doobi Main Sanam
Bahaaron se thoda aur waqt chura nahi Paai !!

 Divya
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«Reply #36 on: January 30, 2010, 07:13:35 AM »
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Aisa Kaha kar Sharminda Mat Kijiye Divya Ji.. Aap To Kamaal likhti hain.. Aur is Baar Bhi Behad Khubsoorat likha hai aapne.. Applause



Bahaaron Ka Mausam Dilbar, Tere Aane Se Aata Hai,
Gulistan Khud Ko Tere Husn-o-Shabaab Se Sajaata Hai....

Har Raat Tere Aane Ka Intzaar Karti Hain Saansen,
Aur Dil Mera Un Raahon Par Khud Bichta Chala Jaata Hai.....!!!



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«Reply #37 on: January 30, 2010, 07:19:24 AM »
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Kamaal ki lines hain. Bahut achhi lagi.
Quote from: Sophi on January 29, 2010, 10:02:17 AM
Waah Waah.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai VIcky...

Tera Naam Leke Jeene Lage Hai Ab Hum,
Tere Naam Par Mar Jaane Ko Jee Chahta hai

Itna Tadap Chuke hai Tere Intzaar mein
Ab Tere liye sab Kuch Lutane ko jee chahta hai

Divya
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«Reply #38 on: January 30, 2010, 07:23:59 AM »
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Excellent!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob, Mann Aur Sophi Aap Dono Ne To Ek sama Hi baand Diya..

Pehli Poem Se Akkhir Poem Tak Ek Karvaan Sa Chal raha Hai..

Tooo Good!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #39 on: January 30, 2010, 07:28:12 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 30, 2010, 07:19:24 AM
Kamaal ki lines hain. Bahut achhi lagi.

Bahoot Shukriyaa Riyaz ji
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«Reply #40 on: January 30, 2010, 07:28:54 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 30, 2010, 07:23:59 AM
Excellent!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob, Mann Aur Sophi Aap Dono Ne To Ek sama Hi baand Diya..

Pehli Poem Se Akkhir Poem Tak Ek Karvaan Sa Chal raha Hai..

Tooo Good!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot Bahoot Aur Tahe Dil Se Shukriyaa Khawaish ji Hausla Afzai ke liye aur sarahane ke liye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: January 30, 2010, 07:45:30 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 30, 2010, 07:23:59 AM
Excellent!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob, Mann Aur Sophi Aap Dono Ne To Ek sama Hi baand Diya..

Pehli Poem Se Akkhir Poem Tak Ek Karvaan Sa Chal raha Hai..

Tooo Good!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Khwaish Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #42 on: January 30, 2010, 07:47:29 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on January 30, 2010, 07:13:35 AM
Aisa Kaha kar Sharminda Mat Kijiye Divya Ji.. Aap To Kamaal likhti hain.. Aur is Baar Bhi Behad Khubsoorat likha hai aapne.. Applause



Bahaaron Ka Mausam Dilbar, Tere Aane Se Aata Hai,
Gulistan Khud Ko Tere Husn-o-Shabaab Se Sajaata Hai....

Har Raat Tere Aane Ka Intzaar Karti Hain Saansen,
Aur Dil Mera Un Raahon Par Khud Bichta Chala Jaata Hai.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**





Bahoot Badiyaa Vicky Ji.. Aapne tho Kamaal Ka Likh Dala... Bahoot khoob!

Keh Do aaj In Fizaao se
Keh Do Aaj Inn Bahaaro se
Keh Do Tum Hame Chahte ho
Lafzo se Sahi, Na Sahi
Keh Do tum Aaj Ishaaro Se

Band Kar Li Hame Ankhen apni
Bar Lo Aaj Hame Apni Bahoon Mein
Bula Na paaye ak aisa Ehsaas
Chod Jaao tum Meri Raahon Mein

Divya !
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«Reply #43 on: January 30, 2010, 11:34:22 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on January 30, 2010, 11:32:10 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi khoob likha hai Sophi ji aur Mann dear aap dono ne
bahut khoob  icon_thumleft

Thank you so much Kaash ji !
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«Reply #44 on: January 30, 2010, 01:13:40 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on January 30, 2010, 11:32:10 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi khoob likha hai Sophi ji aur Mann dear aap dono ne
bahut khoob  icon_thumleft

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaash Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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