baki na rahi ~~~Raahi~~~

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meri jindagi me koi chiz ab baki na rahi
tum jo aaye to tanhai meri sathi na rahi

door ja nahi sakta ek pal ko tumse
dhadkanen tere bin chalne ki aadi na rahi

na paon tujhko yahan to mujhe ye lagta hai
is duniya me koi jagah hi ab baki na rahi

tere sath chalon to chhota ho milon ka safar
tere bina ye raah meri sathi na rahi

tune kaha hai jab se hamdam mujhe
sunne ko aur koi baat baki na rahi

meri aankhon me basi hai tasveer teri
kuch aur ab dekhne ko yaad hi nahi
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2013, 04:39:13 PM »
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good one,sir
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2013, 04:42:34 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on February 09, 2013, 04:39:13 PM
good one,sir

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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2013, 05:28:00 PM »
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bhut khub ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2013, 05:33:09 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 09, 2013, 05:28:00 PM
bhut khub ji

thnx rajan ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2013, 01:54:52 AM »
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just excellent
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2013, 02:12:15 AM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on February 09, 2013, 03:47:19 PM
meri jindagi me koi chiz ab baki na rahi
tum jo aaye to tanhai meri sathi na rahi

door ja nahi sakta ek pal ko tumse
dhadkanen tere bin chalne ki aadi na rahi

na paon tujhko yahan to mujhe ye lagta hai
is duniya me koi jagah hi ab baki na rahi

tere sath chalon to chhota ho milon ka safar
tere bina ye raah meri sathi na rahi

tune kaha hai jab se hamdam mujhe
sunne ko aur koi baat baki na rahi

meri aankhon me basi hai tasveer teri
kuch aur ab dekhne ko yaad hi nahi


wah wah... tarif k liye alfa baki nahi rahi  Usual Smile

Wonderful...ghazal  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2013, 04:50:40 AM »
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bahut khub ji.. very nice.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2013, 10:31:33 AM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on February 09, 2013, 03:47:19 PM
meri jindagi me koi chiz ab baki na rahi
tum jo aaye to tanhai meri sathi na rahi

door ja nahi sakta ek pal ko tumse
dhadkanen tere bin chalne ki aadi na rahi

na paon tujhko yahan to mujhe ye lagta hai
is duniya me koi jagah hi ab baki na rahi

tere sath chalon to chhota ho milon ka safar
tere bina ye raah meri sathi na rahi

tune kaha hai jab se hamdam mujhe
sunne ko aur koi baat baki na rahi

meri aankhon me basi hai tasveer teri
kuch aur ab dekhne ko yaad hi nahi


VERY GOOD...........!
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