Balam kee nagariyaa na jaauungee, guinyaan!

by abdbundeli on August 07, 2009, 01:58:35 PM
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Kanhaiyaa ko apney, rijhaauungee, guinyaan!
Balam kee nagariyaa na jaauungee, guinyaan!

Hawaaoun sey wo roz sandesh bheyjey!
Fazaaoun key qaasid khuley khat dikhaayen!!
Ghataaoun sey wo roz sandesh bheyjey!
Bijuriyaa key deepak, ishaaroun bulaayen!!

Bansuriyaa bajaayegaa jab baith chhaliyaa;
Jamun mein akeylee nahaauungee, guinyaan!
              Balam kee nagariyaa na jaauungee, guinyaan!

Mayuuree kareygee agar sirf ghuuraa;
Kachhaaroun mein naacheygaa fir-fir mayuuraa!
Churaa kar chunariyaa sataayegaa rasiyaa;
Chhirhaa raag man kaa, tabhee hogaa puuraa!!

Kasak eik lamahey mein kaafoor hogee;
Kachhaaroun mein, fir-fir bulaauungee, guinyaan!
              Balam kee nagariyaa na jaauungee, guinyaan!

                                      - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2009, 02:36:18 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI......

BALAM SANG NA JAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH,
APNEY MOHAN KO RIJHAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH.

HAWAAOUN SE ROZ KARE ISHARA MOHE,
BAANSURI BAJAAEY KHATIR MOHE.

JAMUNA KINARE DEKHEY RAHA MORI,
JAMUNA  MAIN JAAOUN, NAHAANE KE BAHAANEY MEIN.

BAANSURI BAJAAEY JAB KRISHNA KANAIYA,
MAN NACHAT-GAAVAT BIN, NA RAHE PAAEY RE.
 

BALAM SANG NA JAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH,
APNEY MOHAN KO RIJHAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH.




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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2009, 03:37:23 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI......

BALAM SANG NA JAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH,
APNEY MOHAN KO RIJHAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH.

HAWAAOUN SE ROZ KARE ISHARA MOHE,
BAANSURI BAJAAEY KHATIR MOHE.

JAMUNA KINARE DEKHEY RAHA MORI,
JAMUNA  MAIN JAAOUN, NAHAANE KE BAHAANEY MEIN.

BAANSURI BAJAAEY JAB KRISHNA KANAIYA,
MAN NACHAT-GAAVAT BIN, NA RAHE PAAEY RE.
 

BALAM SANG NA JAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH,
APNEY MOHAN KO RIJHAAOUNGEE MAIN TOH.

Thanks cara! Aur, bahut khoob!

Jab saajan hai eik hee,
Kaisey wahaan na jaaun?
Jahaan kahey wo, mein waheen
Aauun aur nahaaun!!

              - 'Ramwatiya'

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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2009, 04:53:03 PM »
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So beautifully Written Abd ji.. bahoot bahoot kamaal ka likha hai .. Mazaa aa gaya pad k..Usual Smile

Cara ji aapne bhi wakai khud likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2009, 05:16:44 PM »
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So beautifully Written Abd ji.. bahoot bahoot kamaal ka likha hai .. Mazaa aa gaya pad k..Usual Smile

Cara ji aapne bhi wakai khud likha hai Usual Smile

Shukriyah! Sou baar shukriyah, Sophi ji! Mujhey waaqiyi bahut khushee hai, ki, 'yoindia' mein, aisey log bhi hain, jo aaj bhi aisey geetoun ko pasand kartey hain!
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2009, 12:59:18 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahut khoob ,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2009, 01:20:51 AM »
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Nice one Abd Ji N good response Cara Ji
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2009, 04:20:44 AM »
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Lovely creation Uncle ji and Cara ji   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2009, 06:38:44 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahut khoob ,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Madhu!
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2009, 06:39:58 AM »
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Nice one Abd Ji N good response Cara Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji!
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2009, 06:41:12 AM »
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Lovely creation Uncle ji and Cara ji   Thumbs UP


Thanks Roja!!
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