----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: July 20, 2010, 02:14:05 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji.. bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapne hamari is kaalpanik prem kahani ko apna waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya... Kasak ji ka yunhi saath milta raha to kahaani bhi chalti rahegi... tahe dil main shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka ek bar fir se... bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 19, 2010, 09:14:11 PM

Waah ji waah kapil ji aur kasak ji bahut hi khoob ishq ki dastan ko lafzo mein utara ja raha hai..bahut interesting tarike se likh rahe hai aap padhkar bahut acha hai iss pyari si kahani ko jald aage badhiye..bahut khoob...


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Re: ----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar

«Reply #16 on: July 20, 2010, 02:15:41 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai jo aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 10:33:10 PM

Oye hoyeee ishq ke deewanon kya baat hai...Wah bahaut acha likh rahe ho Kasak jee aur Kapil Dost..shandar...behaddddd khubsoorat likha hai...
Kayi dinn hogaye mohobat main dooba kuch parre hue...bahaut acha likha hai ap dono ne hi wakei...

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Re: ----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar

«Reply #17 on: July 20, 2010, 02:17:56 AM »

Are yaar... kahaani me twish jaruri hai nahi to kahaani rukhi sukhi lagne lagti hai... baahon me fir se aajayengi kuch waqt bad chinta kyun karte ho.. bas Kasak ji ka saath yunhi milta raha to milan dur nahi un do aashiqo ka in kaalpanik duniya me... Usual Smile

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 10:35:55 PM

Ufffffff Kapil Dost...kyun ashiqon ko juda kar rahe ho...acha khasa baarish woh tumhari baahon main thi aur ab milon ke fasle...uff aisa mat karo yaar...! Koi toh kahani bina koi mushkil kay chalni chahiye...!


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Re: ----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar

«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2010, 02:19:00 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhai... aapka bhi jawaab nahi...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 10:52:49 PM

Ek koshish...
Larrka yeh sab kehta hai larrki se juda hokar...

Mujhe tu bahaut yaad ati hai,
Tera muskurana,
Teri zulfon ka lehrana,
Tera mujhe dekhte hi shama jana,
Wakei jana tu mujhe bahaut yaad ati...

Kal tu meri baahon main hua karti thi,
Aj fizaon se teri mahek churani parrti hai,
Kal tak tera chehra samne tha mere,
Aj teri tasver seene se lagani parrti hai,
Wakei jana tu mujhe bahaut yaad ati hai...


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Re: ----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar

«Reply #19 on: July 20, 2010, 05:23:54 AM »

Achha twist hai klakaarji....

Tu he ek-lauta apne parivaar ka
Mera pyaar ek-lauta tera saajan

Haye-haye yeh teri majbooree,
Yeh mausam aur yeh doori,
Mujhe pal pal hai tadpaye,
Teri do takiya ki naukri mein
Mera lakhon ka sawan jaye. ...

Quote from: klaskar on July 19, 2010, 01:42:23 PM

ufffffffffffff.... aapki aadat humein bhi lag gayi ufff kehne ki.... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi khoob... lajawaab..... sach me baarish ka asar hi kuch aisa hota hai... kya se kya karwa jaata hai ... ufff ye dewwani baarish .. ye pagal baarish...!!!

mujhe bhi yaad hai barsat ki wo shaam,
jab chali thi tum mere in haathon ko thaam,
bheege the hum us barsaat me is tarha,
bheege the kapde aur dhal rahi thi shaam,

badal ki us garaz ko ab bhi main bhoola nahi,
jiske awaaz se darke mere baahon me thi samayi,
baahon me bharke tumhe seene se lagaya tha,
nazron se nazar mili to tum thi tab sharmaayi,

wo bargad ka ped aur wo hamari tanhaayi,
rok na sake khud ko jab jhadi pyaar ki aayi,
saason se sanse mili aur ek ho gaye the hum,
bhool ke sab bandhano ko tum me sama gaye the hum,

socha na tha is tarha hoga haal-e-dil mera bayan,
wo baarish ki shaam hogi aur tum hogi baahon me mere,
sach me wo sham tha hi aisa ki ho gaye the tum mere,
tod ke uljhano ko saare baahon me the tum mere,

fir shuru huwe silsile, roz hum tab tumse milte the,
subah se lekar shaam tak tab ek duje ke sang rehte the,
silsila ye tham gaya tab, chod us shahar aana pada tha jab,
naukri karne ki khaatir mujhe is shahar aana pada tha jab,

ab to kaam me kuch bandh gaya hoon aisa,
sochta hoon ab mujhe nahi chahiye paisa,
fir sochta hoon ki ek lauta hoon ghar ka,
sach me jaane ye majboori hai kaisa...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: ----- /// Ban gaya hai koi apna ///----- klaskar

«Reply #20 on: October 07, 2010, 09:50:50 AM »

Shukriya Koyal ji.... bahut pyaara gaana share kiya hai aapne...!!!!

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