Banke Gajra Tere Balon May...

by Iqtedar on August 27, 2013, 04:22:44 PM
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Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

Saans Banke Kabhi Nathnon Se Kabhi Honton Se
Haole Haole Tere Seeney May Utar Jaaon Main

Aarzoo Dil Ki Mere, Jaan-e-Wafa Bas Hai Yehi
Tere Honton Pe Hansi Banke Nikhar Jaaon Main

Mar Ke Bhi Saath Rahe Tera Bas Ek Is Ke Liye
Rooh Banke Teri Rag Rag Main Utar Jaaon Main

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2013, 04:48:42 PM »
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very beautiful ... lekin agar chand aur ash'aar
aur maqte ke sath mukammal ghazal ho to aur bhi
behtar hai... just a suggestion .
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 05:10:21 PM »
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Siddiqui sahab suggest karne ka bahot bahot shukriya, sach may acha laga ke koi hai hai hamari guidance ko... par kahte hain na mulla ki daud masjid tak, bas usi hisab se ziyada'tar muqhtasar hi likh paata hoon Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 05:16:22 PM »
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aapke ashaar parh kar yaqeen ke sath kaha jaa sakta hai ki aap mazeed aur achhe ashaar likh sakte hain ...Best of luck .
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 05:47:49 PM »
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Waah waah bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 05:51:10 PM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब कहा ..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2013, 05:59:16 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 27, 2013, 04:22:44 PM
Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

Saans Banke Kabhi Nathnon Se Kabhi Honton Se
Haole Haole Tere Seeney May Utar Jaaon Main

Aarzoo Dil Ki Mere, Jaan-e-Wafa Bas Hai Yehi
Tere Honton Pe Hansi Banke Nikhar Jaaon Main

Mar Ke Bhi Saath Rahe Tera Bas Ek Is Ke Liye
Rooh Banke Teri Rag Rag Main Utar Jaaon Main

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
bohat khoob iqtidar ji,.....
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2013, 06:01:58 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 27, 2013, 04:22:44 PM
Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

Saans Banke Kabhi Nathnon Se Kabhi Honton Se
Haole Haole Tere Seeney May Utar Jaaon Main

Aarzoo Dil Ki Mere, Jaan-e-Wafa Bas Hai Yehi
Tere Honton Pe Hansi Banke Nikhar Jaaon Main

Mar Ke Bhi Saath Rahe Tera Bas Ek Is Ke Liye
Rooh Banke Teri Rag Rag Main Utar Jaaon Main

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.

Bemishaal hai...!! Waaah...!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 06:15:33 PM »
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Siddiqui sahab shukriya Usual Smile
Nishi ji shukriya Usual Smile
Amit ji shukriya Usual Smile
Laaiba ji shukriya Usual Smile
Drpandey ji shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2013, 07:08:28 PM »
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bahut shaandaar
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2013, 07:10:26 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2013, 07:16:59 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah iqtedarji... bahut bahut bahut hi khoob.. bade pyaare ehsaas rahe aapke ashaaron mein... dheron dheron daad..
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause behad umda
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahut Khoob Iqtedarji.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah iqtedarji... bahut bahut bahut hi khoob.. bade pyaare ehsaas rahe aapke ashaaron mein... dheron dheron daad..
Tareef ka shukriya, waese aapki sangat ka hi asar hai ke ham bhi kuch kah lete hain Usual Smile
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