BARQ HAI POORA CHAAND HAI.....

by Nooralsabah on December 28, 2010, 02:46:40 AM
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 06:17:29 AM »
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bahut badhiya noor ji ..

frame kafi achha hai bas boy ke hath ke pas editing thodi si reh gayi..

lines bahut khoob..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 08:26:24 AM »
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well done Noor jee!
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 09:29:56 AM »
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Noor Jee Aadaab!

Achchi post hai janab aur sher bhi khoob kaha hai..
Achchi editing kii hai daad hazir hai...

Khush rahiye..
Aate rahiye.....
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 01:30:41 PM »
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Bahut Khub Noor JI
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 02:05:49 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 28, 2010, 06:17:29 AM
bahut badhiya noor ji ..

frame kafi achha hai bas boy ke hath ke pas editing thodi si reh gayi..

lines bahut khoob..

dher saari daad~

thanx Abhiji...........edit kar di hai
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 04:32:06 AM »
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good 1 noor .but could b better....
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