barsaat ki bheegi raaton mein......

by nice_off_me on May 22, 2005, 02:49:33 PM
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barsaat ki bheegi raaton mein
phir koi suhani yaad aayi
kuch apna zamana yaad aaya
kuch un ki jawani yaad aayi

kaliyu ki tarah ju chiki thi
un gulshan-gulshan hoton per
lo baithey baithey aaj hum
veh baat purani yaad aayi

hum bhool chuke the
kisne humein duniya mein akela chod diya
jab gair kiya tu ek surat jani pehchaani yaad aayi

kuch paav ke chale kuch aansu
kuch tanhaii kuch garde safar
us bichade huye humrah ki
ek ek nishani yaad aayi

hum chaak gareba aap bhi the
kya kehte katil zamane ku
cheda ju paraya afsana
apni hi kahani yaad aayi..............
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2005, 02:51:18 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwwww nice off..........really really goooooooooood.............sach mein bahut achha...
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2005, 05:31:10 PM »
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hey thanx dolly for liking it and replying it............................................... .
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2005, 06:20:19 PM »
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wha kya baat hai.....niceeeee

jab baadal ghir kar aate hain
to yaadon ke mausam bhi saath laate hain

hum sochna kuch aur chahte hain..
par yeh baraste badal yaad kuch aur dilate hain

woh saawan ki mastiyan
woh barsaat ke suhane pal

jaya karte the doston ke sung film dekhne ..
lagta hai jaise kal..

woh unka rahon mein milna
woh dil ka joron se dhadakna ..

kaise bhoolen hum..
woh baadlon ka usi pal jooron se garajna...

woh pal to hameshan yaad ayenge ...
woh barsaat ki  bheegi raatein.. kaise hum bhool payenge
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2005, 07:58:33 PM »
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kuch nahin milti mohabbat mein dard ke siva
phir bhi log mohabbat karte kyun hain
kuch na mile zindagi main to koi gam nahin hota
mohabbat na mile to log bikhrte kyun hai
kya yeh zindagi kuch bhi nahin,
gar kishi se mohabbat na ho
bin mohabbat ke to log jee saktein hain
mohabbat chhin-ne ke baad woh marte kyun hai
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 10:03:08 AM »
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thank you nikki and fakhar sach mein aap duno ne buhut acha likha hai sach mein i just love it keep writing..........
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Chand khamosh hai,lamhein udass hai
tumhare intezaar mein aaj har saans tanha hai,
naa jane kab se tumhare yaado ke lamho
ko thame baithey hai,
issi bekasi mein yaado ke chiraag jalaye baithey hai,
aashko ke moti larag rahe hai,
per shama ki loo keh rahi hai,
tum aaoge,zaror aaoge...........
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 03:39:34 PM »
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simran sis...apki jitni tareef ki jaye na kam hai. yeh apki nazm to mujhe bohot hi pasand ayi!!!!!!!

"hum bhool chuke the
kisne humein duniya mein akela chod diya
jab gair kiya tu ek surat jani pehchaani yaad aayi"


beautidful lines hai!!!

 :D
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2005, 04:17:57 PM »
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barsaat ki bheegi raaton mein
phir koi suhani yaad aayi
kuch apna zamana yaad aaya
kuch un ki jawani yaad aayi

kaliyu ki tarah ju chiki thi
un gulshan-gulshan hoton per
lo baithey baithey aaj hum
veh baat purani yaad aayi

hum bhool chuke the
kisne humein duniya mein akela chod diya
jab gair kiya tu ek surat jani pehchaani yaad aayi

kuch paav ke chale kuch aansu
kuch tanhaii kuch garde safar
us bichade huye humrah ki
ek ek nishani yaad aayi

hum chaak gareba aap bhi the
kya kehte katil zamane ku
cheda ju paraya afsana
apni hi kahani yaad aayi..............


hmmmmmmmmm   bahot  khoob  simmi........  kya  baat hai ......nice  written..........too  good  naveed............nikki.........nice  reply...............
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2005, 09:37:04 PM »
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Thanx all of you...............waheed.......................si mran.................
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Ravi Kashyap
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2012, 06:11:58 AM »
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 :icon_salut:ek awesome lines hai bahut badhiya...
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