Bas aap hi khayaalon mein chhaye hain !

by Rishi on October 15, 2004, 02:38:58 PM
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«Reply #45 on: October 27, 2004, 08:55:57 PM »
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nice one Nishita !
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thoda tum kadam badhaao, thoda hum badhenge,
ye faasle dilon ke dilbar hum mil ke taey karenge,
raah-e-mohabbat mein jo bhi aayengi mushkilein,
saath mil ke har mushkil ko hum tamaam karenge....
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Pooja
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«Reply #46 on: October 27, 2004, 09:01:25 PM »
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wah!!!! bahoot khoob Rishi ji!!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #47 on: October 27, 2004, 10:11:24 PM »
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Thanx Pooja !
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nd please don't add "ji" after my name  :!:
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eternal
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«Reply #48 on: October 28, 2004, 06:49:35 AM »
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«Reply #49 on: October 28, 2004, 07:55:49 AM »
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nice one Nishita !
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thoda tum kadam badhaao, thoda hum badhenge,
ye faasle dilon ke dilbar hum mil ke taey karenge,
raah-e-mohabbat mein jo bhi aayengi mushkilein,
saath mil ke har mushkil ko hum tamaam karenge....
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Chand kehata hai chalo ,
Kuchh mod ke aage khushi hai,
Ab khatam hone ko hain,
Jo dooriyan tumne sahi hai.
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«Reply #50 on: October 28, 2004, 08:39:30 AM »
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wah!!!!!  nisihta............nice words.....

yeh doorian, yeah faasly kabhi nahi mitenge
rasta dekhna, yeh tera mera gumaan hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #51 on: October 28, 2004, 08:05:14 PM »
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Beautiful!!! bahut Achchhe! Nishita ji!!!Wah!
Nice written Waheed Bhai! Rishi
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: October 28, 2004, 08:46:27 PM »
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nice nishita!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #53 on: October 29, 2004, 02:46:37 AM »
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Thanx everyone !
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yaad karte hain hum tumhein apni tanhaai mein,
udaas dil dooba hai gummon ki gehrayi mein,
humein na dhoondna tum duniyaa ki bheed mein,
hum milenge tumhein tumhaari hi parchhayi mein...
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #54 on: October 29, 2004, 05:04:27 AM »
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Very Nice Rishi!!
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nishita
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«Reply #55 on: October 29, 2004, 07:23:29 AM »
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thx all
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Rishi
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«Reply #56 on: October 30, 2004, 05:31:58 AM »
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Thanx Arun ! nd sorry again all, even the above one was not mine...silly mistake again....i should keep trying to use my mind while writing....kya karoon yaar upar wala section khaali hai....kuchh yaad hi nahi rehta !
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kal sab honge aapki mehfil mein sanam magar hum nahin honge,
phir bhi jaanta hoon main humdum ke aap har pal mere sang honge,    
har pal aapki yaad, aapke khayaal, aapke waade mere sang honge,
chahe kahin bhi hon aap,dhadkan hain meri kaise na mere sang honge....
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but this one is mine....!
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«Reply #57 on: October 30, 2004, 07:55:52 AM »
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Why to bother about that!! Rishi!! U r writing pretty well!!
Just write the name of Shayar/poet while using their lines
or write Not mine(NM) if u doesn't remember their names...Simple...!

Very Nice written! Rishi!! Tremendous!!!
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«Reply #58 on: October 30, 2004, 08:23:19 AM »
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Bas aap hi khayaalon mein chhaye hain !
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nishita
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«Reply #59 on: October 30, 2004, 08:29:52 AM »
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sharmaji is right rishi... no need to say sorry yaar its perfectly alrite..

Kepp writing u r gr8...! ur shayari's r gr8 too!! just chill!
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