bas ek QATRAA teri maaNg ki khaatir BACHAA rakha hai...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 12, 2012, 07:44:24 PM
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Ek bahut puraana kalaam nazar kar raha huN, apni raa'i se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...


Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!![/color]




HazaaroN tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ek qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nahi to kambakht saaNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unhe is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Sach se waakif haiN, ki vo kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi mukhaatib ab is mehfil-e-shayar humse,
Jo sabko humne apna naam,“taish”bataa rakha hai.
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2012, 01:04:49 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2012, 02:18:50 AM »
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bahut khoob ghayal ji dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2012, 03:39:02 AM »
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wah wah

Bahukhandi ji bahut bahut shukriya, bas yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2012, 04:16:25 AM »
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bahut khoob ghayalji
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2012, 06:02:35 AM »
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umda kalaam
wah wah wah ghayal jee
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2012, 08:33:54 AM »
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bahut khoob ghayal ji dheron daad

shukriya saini sir ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2012, 09:01:48 AM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai bahut khoob....
Badi hi dilfareb kalaam kahi hai janab... Sabhi ashaar aik se
badhkar aik rahe... gazab ki gehrai aur umda bayaani rahi janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN par yeH kalaam toH dard e ishq meiN honi chajhiye thi ismeiN khumari
wali koi baat nahi hai may be aapne ghalati se ise yahaaN post kar diya
hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Ek bahut puraana kalaam nazar kar raha huN, apni raa'i se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...


Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!![/color]




HazaaroN tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Kia kahne janab waaH teri chahhat hai par tujhi se chupaa rakha hai" bahut khoob... daad daad daad...

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ek qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Bahot khoob daad....

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nahi to kambakht saaNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Waaah waah bahut umdaa daad daad daad...

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unhe is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Masha Allaah kia kahne janab waaH badi hi umdaa shikayat hai..
bahut khoob daad daad daad... Usual Smile


Sach se waakif haiN, ki vo kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Bahut khoob bahut umdaa waaH, saani misraa toH kamaal ka hai janab.. Usual Smile
HazaaroN daad...


Koi nahi humse ab is shayaroN ki mehfil me humse,
Jo ssabko humne apna naam,“taish”bataa rakha hai.

Maqta achcah raha par ulaa misre par gaur kar lijiye jo aap
kahna chahte haiN shayad woH yeH misra bayaaN nahi kar paa raha hai.. Usual Smile



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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2012, 10:11:38 AM »
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Ek bahut puraana kalaam nazar kar raha huN, apni raa'i se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...


Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!![/color]




HazaaroN tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ek qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nahi to kambakht saaNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unhe is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Sach se waakif haiN, ki vo kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi humse ab is shayaroN ki mehfil me humse,
Jo ssabko humne apna naam,“taish”bataa rakha hai.



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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2012, 11:52:16 AM »
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Ek bahut puraana kalaam nazar kar raha huN, apni raa'i se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...


Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!![/color]




HazaaroN tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ek qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nahi to kambakht saaNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unhe is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Sach se waakif haiN, ki vo kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi humse ab is shayaroN ki mehfil me humse,
Jo ssabko humne apna naam,“taish”bataa rakha hai.

bohut khoob bohut umda , daad qubool kijiye ,but maqta ka pehla misra samajh nahi aaya barahe karam is par nazre saani kar lijiye,
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2012, 04:33:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob ghayalji

bahut bahut shukriya aqsh sahab, yuNhi aate raheN...
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2012, 04:45:22 PM »
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Ek bahut puraana kalaam nazar kar raha huN, apni raa'i se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...


Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!![/color]




HazaaroN tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ek qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nahi to kambakht saaNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unhe is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Sach se waakif haiN, ki vo kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi mukhaatib ab is mehfil-e-shayar humse,
nahin koi mukhaatib ab ghayal_shayar se yahaan,
Jo sabko humne apna naam,“taish”bataa rakha hai.



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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2012, 01:31:22 AM »
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umda kalaam
wah wah wah ghayal jee


shykriya mkv sahab, bas aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2012, 02:54:21 PM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai bahut khoob....
Badi hi dilfareb kalaam kahi hai janab... Sabhi ashaar aik se
badhkar aik rahe... gazab ki gehrai aur umda bayaani rahi janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN par yeH kalaam toH dard e ishq meiN honi chajhiye thi ismeiN khumari
wali koi baat nahi hai may be aapne ghalati se ise yahaaN post kar diya
hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





Parwaaz ji bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka, waise sach kahun to likhne ke baad jyada samajh nahi aata ki kise kahaan post karna chahiye, isiliye jo samajh aata hai, wahiN daal deta huN... tongue3 agli baar se waise kosish rahegi ki sahi jagah hi post karuN, aage v yunhi aate raheN, aapki taareef se bahut hausla afzaayi hoti hai...
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2012, 06:39:29 AM »
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shireen ji shukriya, bas yunhi saath nibhaati raheN... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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