bas teri hi chahat ko paya hai.......

by ranjana on May 01, 2006, 06:48:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2006, 10:10:02 AM »
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aj fir chera hai kisi ne mere dil ke dard ko..
jo soya hua tha barso se ek dhul ki gard mein....

fir dil dharka hai joro se.....
lagata hai ud jau badalo ke paar......

jahan main hun ,tum ho ........
aur wah meetha sa ehasas.....
jo teri baato ne geeto mein chalk kar .......
mujhe diya hai aaj.................


dard se humra bhi nata purana hai
utna hi jitna tumhara payar se

jab hi band karta hun aakhee
dheeme se koi aansu
yaad teri lekar chala aata hai....

chaand chmakata hai
jab jab aasman mai
ek metha sa dard  
mujh mai jaga jata hai

har jugnu ke chamak mai
tujhko dhundhta hun mai
kar oos kio boond main
dhundhta hun sparsh tera

jo tum nahi sang mere
jeene ka arth dhundhta hun
tujhko chahata hun
tere hona chahta hun


JO BHI MAN MAI AAYAY LIKH DIYA.... KUCH SMAJH A\NA AAYE TO MAFFI........
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ranjana
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«Reply #16 on: May 02, 2006, 03:39:05 AM »
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aj fir chera hai kisi ne mere dil ke dard ko..
jo soya hua tha barso se ek dhul ki gard mein....

fir dil dharka hai joro se.....
lagata hai ud jau badalo ke paar......

jahan main hun ,tum ho ........
aur wah meetha sa ehasas.....
jo teri baato ne geeto mein chalk kar .......
mujhe diya hai aaj.................


dard se humra bhi nata purana hai
utna hi jitna tumhara payar se

jab hi band karta hun aakhee
dheeme se koi aansu
yaad teri lekar chala aata hai....

chaand chmakata hai
jab jab aasman mai
ek metha sa dard  
mujh mai jaga jata hai

har jugnu ke chamak mai
tujhko dhundhta hun mai
kar oos kio boond main
dhundhta hun sparsh tera

jo tum nahi sang mere
jeene ka arth dhundhta hun
tujhko chahata hun
tere hona chahta hun


JO BHI MAN MAI AAYAY LIKH DIYA.... KUCH SMAJH A\NA AAYE TO MAFFI........



very nice Vikas.............nahi aaye toh maffi...................aur aaye toh........? Usual Smile

bahut sundar koshish  hai aapki........

yah lines aacchi lagi.........

har jugnu ke chamak mai
tujhko dhundhta hun mai
kar oos kio boond main
dhundhta hun sparsh tera

jo tum nahi sang mere
jeene ka arth dhundhta hun
tujhko chahata hun
tere hona chahta hun ........

shukriya.......

with love

ranju
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2006, 03:50:42 AM »
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dil ki dharakno ka bhi ek tarana hota hai,
shayad pass kisi ko bulana hota hai.....

ya hoti hai jhoothi tasalee dil ki...
ya sirf apne dil ko bahlana hota hai...

kyu karta hai mere masoom dil pyar kisi se...
jab har kisi ne us ko thokar maar ke jana ho hota hai.......


ranju
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vikas2210
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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2006, 03:51:05 AM »
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Ranju

pasand aai aapko koshsih meri shukriya bahoot bahoot.



dhundhna kismat ko apni
lakeeron mai teri chahata hun
mai tera hun aur
tera rehna chahcta hun......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #19 on: May 02, 2006, 03:56:56 AM »
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Bohat khoob Ranjana & Vikas...Usual Smile
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ranjana
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«Reply #20 on: May 02, 2006, 03:57:35 AM »
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dhundhna kismat ko apni
lakeeron mai teri chahata hun
mai tera hun aur
tera rehna chahcta hun......
 
 .............

LAKEERON KA LIKHA KAB SACH HUA............ Usual Smile

very beautiful.......

with love

ranju
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ranjana
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«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2006, 04:07:29 AM »
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shukriya ARYAAN..............

TAKE CARE....

ranju
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vikas2210
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«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2006, 05:02:16 AM »
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Shukriya Aryaan........
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vikas2210
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«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2006, 05:03:33 AM »
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RANJU

shukriya..........

Lakeeron ka lkha sach nahi hua kabhi sach hai par dhundhna khud ko kisi ke kw\hawab mai bahut hi khubsurat ehsas hota hai.

take care

vikas
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«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2006, 05:44:12 AM »
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VIKAS.........

khawab toh khawab hai .........par yah bhi sach hai ki ham unhi ko dekh kar apni kalpana ki zindgee ke kuch ksuhnuma pal jee jate hain.......
tumhari lakerron  ki baat se kuch yaad  aaya.........

ham jee rahe  hain apne sapno ke saath.
muthee mein band .......
un kuch palo ke  saath,
jo kabhi hamare they...
ham kholte  hain ......
apne haatho ko.....
aur pad lena chahte  hain....
un lakerron ko ......
JO TUMSE JUDI HAIN.............................

RANJU
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«Reply #25 on: May 02, 2006, 06:01:55 AM »
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Ranju,,,,,,,,,

very nice and good. U have the ability to pen down the thoughts very beautifully......

love it.

jab bana liya hai nata tumse
tabse jod liha kismat apni teri hi lakeeron se
thama ha haath jab se tumhara
tab se baan liya hai dhadkano ko tumhare dil se
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«Reply #26 on: May 02, 2006, 06:16:50 AM »
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Ranju,,,,,,,,,

very nice and good. you have the ability to pen down the thoughts very beautifully......

love it.

jab bana liya hai nata tumse
tabse jod liha kismat apni teri hi lakeeron se
thama ha haath jab se tumhara
tab se baan liya hai dhadkano ko tumhare dil se


bahoot bahoot shukriya......par vikas ji aap saath toh akle toh yah likhna mushkil tha.........so aap bhi kam nahi hai......mujhe bhi aapka likhne ke andaz ne bahoot impress kiya............

fir kuch lines aur......jab bore ho jaye  toh plz bata de........kyuki main apne aap shayad stop na karu........ Usual Smile

mera haath apne haatho mein lekar
dekhi tumne apni rekha.......
jeevan saath-saath jeene ka
ham dono ne ek meetha sapna dekha........
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vikas2210
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«Reply #27 on: May 02, 2006, 07:37:32 AM »
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Ranju

sahi kaha aapne koi ho saath nibhane wala to likhna aasaan hota hai.

aur rabi bore hone ki baat to shyad pehal aapki tarf se hi hogi dekhte hain..

shukriya mera likha pasand karne e liye.

bahut accha likha hai aapne. gehra aur saaf.



saath chale do kadam
aur sapne sajane lage
kari do baate aur
dil mai samane lage
dekh kar tere suhane khawab
hum bhi raato ko jagne lage.......
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ranjana
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«Reply #28 on: May 02, 2006, 08:07:46 AM »
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saath chale do kadam
aur sapne sajane lage
kari do baate aur
dil mai samane lage
dekh kar tere suhane khawab
hum bhi raato ko jagne lage........

bahut khub................na na......bore aur main...........par haar gayi toh bhi meri hi jeet hai........... Usual Smile wasie kavitaa karne ke siva kuch nahi sujhta  hamko.......... Usual Smile

yun raato ko aakar sataya  na karo....
khawab bunti in aankho ko yun jagaya na karo..
mana yah khawab hain adhure,aur meri khushiya adhuri hai..
per jeene ke liye kuch galatfamiyan bhi jaruari   hai.......

meri hi ek kavitaa ki kuch lines hain yah.......puri kavitaa fir kabhi.......
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vikas2210
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«Reply #29 on: May 02, 2006, 08:15:20 AM »
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great one Ranju..........



chaliye dekhte hain wase main koi kavi to nahi par bas aapko phad kar likhta hun ayee hanseen.....

raato ko chup chup kar chand ko dekhna
aur phir kuch udaas sa ho jana.....
sonchna tujhko aur phir .....
aankhen band kar dekhna tujhko
tadpna teri yaad mai tere aake ke intezaar mai
kyo hai tu dur itni mai itna majboor..........
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