~ BAS TU NAJAR AATI HE ~

by Matrix Guy on August 07, 2010, 07:55:11 AM
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 08:21:25 AM »
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aahaaaaaa........ :love4:MG ji kya khub peshkash hai ye aapki......jitni pyari design utni hi pyari poem....mazaa aagaya.....dil khush khush ho gaya ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
kuch likha hai dekhiye pasand aata hai ya nahin.... Feared.

Sanam mehfil me viraane me bas tu nazar aata hai
Main chhupun tujhse lakh par tu mujhe ghure jata hai

Jagti raaton me jab tu haule se mujhe gudgudata hai
Tadap jati hai angdai jab khwaabon me tu chala aata hai

Chehre pe le dupaata main khud ko tujhse bachati hun
Tu oas ki boond ban mere hothon pe saj jata hai

Chandni raaton me jab hoti hain ghanto baatein
Bas wahi pal mujhe harpal saamne nazar aata hai

Ye chaand ye tare bhi hamari haalat par taras khate hain
Jab main yahan sisakti hun aur tu wahan aansu bahata hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 08:29:57 AM »
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ufffffffffffffff kasak ji kya likha he..........

its simlpy superb.........i m wordless now......

well just 4 u

mere dil ka chiarg tujse hi to jilmilata he
tuje dekh hi to dil ko kahi chain ata he

tu oodh le dupataa lakh apne chehre per
parawana kaha shamma se dur rah pata he

he ishq tujse to har iljaam manjur he sanam
is rog ka rogi hi to diwana kahlata he

na baha aansu ki ye beshkimti he jaha me
tere har ashq me mera lahu najar ata he

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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2010, 10:33:20 AM »
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awesome creation u both.... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2010, 07:18:28 PM »
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wah Matrix ji wah... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... aur Kasak ji ke jawab ka bhi jawaab nahi...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2010, 07:25:31 PM »
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ufffffffffffffff kasak ji kya likha he..........

its simlpy superb.........i m wordless now......

well just 4 u

mere dil ka chiarg tujse hi to jilmilata he
tuje dekh hi to dil ko kahi chain ata he

tu oodh le dupataa lakh apne chehre per
parawana kaha shamma se dur rah pata he

he ishq tujse to har iljaam manjur he sanam
is rog ka rogi hi to diwana kahlata he

na baha aansu ki ye beshkimti he jaha me
tere har ashq me mera lahu najar ata he


Mtrix guy ji kya kahun.......aaone jo likha usse meujhe kisiki yaad aagai...
dil jhum utha aur bas kalam chal padi......
u r tooo guud ji......bht hi pyara reply diya hai aapne...kuch hamari taraf se bhi sun lijiye ab....

Tere sath se hi mere dil ki sukun aata hai
Aaj tere aa jane se dil surr naye sajata hai

Meri oadhni me bhi rang hai tere hi pyaar ka
Ye tera pyaar hi mera shringaar kehlata hai

Ye pyaar koi rog nahin ye to har rog ka ilaaj hai
Isme jo duub jaye wo sansaar se tar jata hai

Ye lahu jo tere dil se tapakta hai mere pyaar ki tarah
Ye lahuu hi to mujhe tereaur bhi kareeb le aata hai…!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2010, 07:32:02 PM »
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Bahut hi sundar aur umda peshkash hai MG Ji
Pa.dh kar dil aatmbibhor ho gaya
Very creative work
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