Bas tum hi ho..

by nashwani on July 13, 2013, 10:29:41 PM
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Dil me ikk tasveer chhupaye baithe hain,,
    Ilm nahi hai use ki use apna bana.e baithe hain..

Parwane se betaab hain aajkal ham, shayad,,
    Shama sang jalne ka khwab saja.e baithe hain..

Chand ki kisko khabar hai ab yaha.N par,,
    Ham to ikk sitare pe nazare jama.e baithe hain..

Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..

Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

Kisi ki ab aas nahi koi ab dusra khwab nahi,,
    Dil-o-dimaag pe wo iss kadar chhaa.e baithe hain..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2013, 10:32:27 PM »
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Dil me ikk tasveer chhupaye baithe hain,,
    Ilm nahi hai use ki use apna bana.e baithe hain..

Parwane se betaab hain aajkal ham, shayad,,
    Shama sang jalne ka khwab saja.e baithe hain..

Chand ki kisko khabar hai ab yaha.N par,,
    Ham to ikk sitare pe nazare jama.e baithe hain..

Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..

Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

Kisi ki ab aas nahi koi ab dusra khwab nahi,,
    Dil-o-dimaag pe wo iss kadar chhaa.e baithe hain..!!! Ñ

wonderful,sir
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2013, 10:44:40 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 13, 2013, 10:32:27 PM
wonderful,sir

Bahut Dhanyawaad sirjee..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2013, 11:02:25 PM »
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khoobsoorat Nashwani...keep writing....
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2013, 11:13:13 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..

Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

bahut bahut achchi peshkash nashwani ji. khaas kar yeh do sher dil ke qareeb raha. hazaron dili daad qubool kare..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2013, 01:03:16 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhai Nashwani Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2013, 02:16:30 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 14, 2013, 01:03:16 AM
Bahut Khoob Bhai Nashwani Jee.

Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2013, 02:17:05 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on July 13, 2013, 11:16:20 PM
Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..

Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

bahut bahut achchi peshkash nashwani ji. khaas kar yeh do sher dil ke qareeb raha. hazaron dili daad qubool kare..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aqsh jee shukriya..happy9
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Quote from: nashwani on July 14, 2013, 02:16:30 AM
Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9
Ur Welcome Jee.
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2013, 03:47:44 AM »
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Dil me ikk tasveer chhupaye baithe hain,,
    Ilm nahi hai use ki use apna bana.e baithe hain..
bol kar nahin bataao ge to koi telepathy ho rahi hai ki pataa chale ga icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Parwane se betaab hain aajkal ham, shayad,,
    Shama sang jalne ka khwab saja.e baithe hain..
ab jal bhi jaao to betaabi bhi khatam aur khawaab bhi sawaaha Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Chand ki kisko khabar hai ab yaha.N par,,
    Ham to ikk sitare pe nazare jama.e baithe hain..
kya naam hai uss sitaare ka bada difficult kaam kar rahe ho chaand to eklauta hai per sitaare allah -allah kaise itni baarik nazar rakhe hue ho....nice job keep going Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..
bahut improvisation kar liya hai ji communications mein . mubarak ho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

na ji na main aisi ghalatfahmi nahin rakhti tum to mere pyaar mein diwaane hue baithe ho icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Kisi ki ab aas nahi koi ab dusra khwab nahi,,
    Dil-o-dimaag pe wo iss kadar chhaa.e baithe hain..!!!

aakhir mera jaadoo chall gaya
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bahut khoob nashwani bahut khoob........!

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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2013, 03:52:17 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Nashwani ji....!!!
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Dil me ikk tasveer chhupaye baithe hain,,
    Ilm nahi hai use ki use apna bana.e baithe hain..

Parwane se betaab hain aajkal ham, shayad,,
    Shama sang jalne ka khwab saja.e baithe hain..

Chand ki kisko khabar hai ab yaha.N par,,
    Ham to ikk sitare pe nazare jama.e baithe hain..

Na labzo.N se koi ummeed rakhna hamare,,
    Dil ki zubaan ham ankho.N ko bana.e baithe hain..

Muskurate chehre ki wajah bas tum hi ho,,
    Na samajhna ki kisi aur se dil laga.e baithe hain..

Kisi ki ab aas nahi koi ab dusra khwab nahi,,
    Dil-o-dimaag pe wo iss kadar chhaa.e baithe hain..!!! Ñ
like it,nice
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2013, 08:41:15 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2013, 01:24:55 PM »
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Quote from: pawan16 on July 13, 2013, 11:02:25 PM
khoobsoorat Nashwani...keep writing....

Thankyou ! pawan jee..happy9
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