Basera kare koi

by TOUSIFSHAIKHH on April 06, 2009, 11:31:47 AM
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Is dil pe bhi basera kare koi,
Dard e dil ki mere dawa kare koi,
Sapnon se bane haar me mere,
Haqeeqat k moti buna kare koi,
Jag ki tez raftar kahaniyon me,
Daastan dil ki suna kare koi,
Mar hi jayen tham kar dil apna,
Hum par bhi aisi ada kare koi,
Sune jo dil ki awaz meri,
Ek shaks aisa  hua kare koi,
Alfaz me kisi ka tasauur ho,
Ashaar me mere jiya kare koi.
(Composed by tousif shk)
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2009, 11:34:21 AM »
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Wah wah kya khoob likha hai Tousif ji. keep writing.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 02:46:09 PM »
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Bohat khoob Tausif kya kehne.....Ek choti si gustakhi hamari taraf se.

Sab karte rahe bayaan mere zakhm ka
Dard mujhko hain meri bhi suna kare koi..

-SG-
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2009, 09:05:09 PM »
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very nice,keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2009, 09:32:36 PM »
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Wah wah Tausif jee aur Ghayel jee...Wah...Ghayel saheb aap kamal ka likte ho...kitni badi baat kehgaye kitne chand shabdon main... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2009, 09:36:36 PM »
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Ghayel saheb apka jawab padkar FARAZ ka ek shaer yaad agaya...

Kaun pareshan hota hai tere ghum main FARAZ,
woh apni hi kisi baat par roya hoga...
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 04:04:53 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 06, 2009, 09:32:36 PM
Wah wah Tausif jee aur Ghayel jee...Wah...Ghayel saheb aap kamal ka likte ho...kitni badi baat kehgaye kitne chand shabdon main... Applause

Quote from: dead heart on April 06, 2009, 09:36:36 PM
Ghayel saheb apka jawab padkar FARAZ ka ek shaer yaad agaya...

Kaun pareshan hota hai tere ghum main FARAZ,
woh apni hi kisi baat par roya hoga...

Nawazish karam hain mere dost......aur ek bujhte diye ko dekhkar tumhe suraj yaad aaya yeh tumhara badappan aur mohabbat hain.
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2009, 10:05:17 AM »
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Mohobat hai badapan nahin bhai...Aap kamal ka likte ho... Ek purana shaer jo maine kabhi likha tha woh yaad agaya...thode lavz badal ke apke liye likh raha hoon..

Andhiyon main jo diya tumhe jalta hua nazar ajaega,
Takat uski aisi hogi ek akela wohi Ghayel kehlaega...
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2009, 11:33:30 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 07, 2009, 10:05:17 AM
Mohobat hai badapan nahin bhai...Aap kamal ka likte ho... Ek purana shaer jo maine kabhi likha tha woh yaad agaya...thode lavz badal ke apke liye likh raha hoon..

Andhiyon main jo diya tumhe jalta hua nazar ajaega,
Takat uski aisi hogi ek akela wohi Ghayel kehlaega...

Bas itna kahuga dost jo Rafi saheb ne kaha tha...

Ehsan mere dil pe tumhara hain dosto
Yeh dil tumhare pyaar ka mara hain dosto....
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2009, 11:36:30 AM »
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Quote from: TOUSIFSHAIKHH on April 06, 2009, 11:31:47 AM
Is dil pe bhi basera kare koi,
Dard e dil ki mere dawa kare koi,
Sapnon se bane haar me mere,
Haqeeqat k moti buna kare koi,
Jag ki tez raftar kahaniyon me,
Daastan dil ki suna kare koi,
Mar hi jayen tham kar dil apna,
Hum par bhi aisi ada kare koi,
Sune jo dil ki awaz meri,
Ek shaks aisa  hua kare koi,
Alfaz me kisi ka tasauur ho,
Ashaar me mere jiya kare koi.
(Composed by tousif shk)

Bohot Khoob Tausif Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2009, 11:37:20 AM »
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Nice additions Rahim, Sajid Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2009, 11:39:57 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 06, 2009, 09:36:36 PM
Ghayel saheb apka jawab padkar FARAZ ka ek shaer yaad agaya...

Kaun pareshan hota hai tere ghum main FARAZ,
woh apni hi kisi baat par roya hoga...

Waah Kya Khoob Sharing Ki Hai Rahim Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2009, 11:46:00 AM »
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Quote from: TOUSIFSHAIKHH on April 06, 2009, 11:31:47 AM
Is dil pe bhi basera kare koi,
Dard e dil ki mere dawa kare koi,
Sapnon se bane haar me mere,
Haqeeqat k moti buna kare koi,
Jag ki tez raftar kahaniyon me,
Daastan dil ki suna kare koi,
Mar hi jayen tham kar dil apna,
Hum par bhi aisi ada kare koi,
Sune jo dil ki awaz meri,
Ek shaks aisa  hua kare koi,
Alfaz me kisi ka tasauur ho,
Ashaar me mere jiya kare koi.
(Composed by tousif shk)

Bohat Achche Tousif Ji,.
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2009, 08:26:44 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan aur Talat jee...
Nice sharing Ghayel Saheb...
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