Batla do zara...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 19, 2011, 06:33:00 PM
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Har baat tumhari merra dil manta hai,
bechain hai dil ek muddat se aake ise behela do zara,

main jhel jaungi har mushkil ko tumhe pane k liye,
merre haasil k liye tum kya kar jaoge itna mujhe batla do zara,

tanhai mein b tumhara saya sang rehta hai merri ruh k,
merri sanso mein bhar k apni sanse unhe meheka do zara,

merri hasrate behek jati hai aksar tumhe sochte sochte,
merri tadpan ko tum apni chhuan se sehela do zara,

ab ankhe bhi behelati nhi tumse khuabo mein milkar,
apni mulaqato mein abhi waqt hai merri ankho ko tum itna smjha so zara,

bade din hue tumhe namaz padhte dekh,
milan k din k liye dua mein apna hath tum bhi utha do zara,

merri jaan chaha hai GEET ne tumhe is duniya mein sabse badhkar..
rukh pe apne merre naam ki muskan ta umar k liye tum saja do zara.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2011, 07:03:53 PM »
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kitna pyara pyara likha aapne Geet--
bahut achi lagi ye mohabat bhara peskash
god bless u dear.
happy holi
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2011, 07:06:56 PM »
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Bahut shukriya nirala ji...HAPPY HOLI TO U TOO..TAKE CARE..
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2011, 10:06:48 PM »
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 hello2  great going weldone and happy holi
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2011, 03:19:15 PM »
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Behad shukriya muskan ji..happy holi to u too..
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2011, 03:22:36 PM »
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geet mam i need ur help again
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2011, 03:24:42 PM »
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U can send me pm regarding ur problem...
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2011, 03:29:36 PM »
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yahi to prob he k mere iss new mobile se pm or koi b new post nhi ho raha sad5sad5
srf comnt ho rha he. aisa q ho rha yhi poocha tha aapse
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2011, 03:35:29 PM »
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Nirala ji ye tou apke ph k feautures pe depend hota hai merre samsung k ph mein main yoindia pe aa skti thi per main log in nhi kar paa rahi thi per merre frend k nokia k ph mein main log in bhi kar paa rahi thi aur new post n comments bhi share kar paa rahi thi tou isme main koi help nhi kar sakti ye tou apke ph ka inbuilt feature hai...kuch ph selected sites ko hi completely access kar paate hai...
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2011, 03:49:45 PM »
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hmm hmm me srf cmnt hi post kar paunga bs!!!
iss ph ko abi todne ka mann ho rha:(
kal hi lia tha naya.
wese ab meri pakau shayri se kuch din or bach jaoge aap log bs yhi ek achi baat he:)Usual SmileUsual Smile
aapka thanx 4 helping me
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2011, 03:52:24 PM »
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Batla do zara Geet geet itne sunder sunder kaise likh leti ho tum.......
Roz ek nayaa geet likh kar usse gun-gunaati aa jaati ho tum......
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2011, 03:54:26 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on March 20, 2011, 03:49:45 PM
hmm hmm me srf cmnt hi post kar paunga bs!!!
iss ph ko abi todne ka mann ho rha:(
kal hi lia tha naya.
wese ab meri pakau shayri se kuch din or bach jaoge aap log bs yhi ek achi baat he:)Usual SmileUsual Smile
aapka thanx 4 helping me
Aesa nhi hai apki kaafi shayari's kabil-e-tarif hoti hai...khair aur koi help chahiye ho tou aap beshak puch sakte hai...
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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2011, 03:55:53 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on March 20, 2011, 03:52:24 PM
Batla do zara Geet geet itne sunder sunder kaise likh leti ho tum.......
Roz ek nayaa geet likh kar usse gun-gunaati aa jaati ho tum......

Dil se nikalte hai lafz aur main aap sabhi k beech share kar deti hu kuch khaas nhi karti..khair shukriya shayari k andaz mein tarif karne ka...
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«Reply #13 on: March 20, 2011, 04:10:14 PM »
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mai bht khus hu Usual SmileUsual Smile
””
itna help kaafi he
sbse acha apna ”GADDAFI” he Usual SmileUsual Smile
””
haan aap aise hi ache ache ‘GEET’ likhte raho bs
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«Reply #14 on: March 20, 2011, 04:52:08 PM »
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Shukriya..
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