~~~~ Baton Baton main ruth jate ho Kyun ~~~~~

by BeNam on April 17, 2006, 11:03:53 PM
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Baton Baton main ruth jate ho kyun,
Ruth kar humey tadapate ho kyun,
Yeh Raaz-e-dil khol bhi do zara,
Humsey ruth kar chale jate ho kyun!

Kis baat per hamari naraz ho yun,
Chand sa mukhada chupa baithe ho kyun,
Kya hai dil main tumhare bol bhi do zara,
Narazagi ka zeher piye jate ho kyun!

Nazar milate hi, zuk zati hai kyun,
Kisi baat per aa kar ruk jate ho kyun,
Zakhm per marham rakhane do zara,
Her zakhm ko nasur banate ho kyun!

Baton Baton main ruth jate ho kyun,
Ruth kar humey tadapate ho kyun,
Yeh raaz-e-dil khol bhi do zara,
Humsey ruth kar chale jate ho kyun!
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2006, 12:01:25 AM »
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BeNam bhai

Aaj bahut dino ke baad aap ko apne poorane andaaz mein paya hai !

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2006, 12:42:17 AM »
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Bohat khoob BeNam...
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2006, 08:45:11 AM »
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bahut hi khoob benam ji....excellent...
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2006, 08:50:04 AM »
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Mananey ka andaz aapka kuch aisa hai ke ruth jaane mein maza aata hai,
Jhuki palkon pe matt jaa meri tumhe dekh ke dil ghabra jaata hai,
Zakhm sirf ek hi hai teri judai ka jo pal pal nasoor bana jaata hai,
Raaz-e-dil bayaan karein khud kaise
Hum to aankhon se bayaan kare jaate hai,
Yoon hi baaton baaton mein roothne ka maza aata hai,
Jab apne pehloo mein lekar dilbarr manata hai..

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2006, 03:25:31 PM »
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Baton Baton main ruth jate ho kyun,
Ruth kar humey tadapate ho kyun,
Yeh Raaz-e-dil khol bhi do zara,
Humsey ruth kar chale jate ho kyun!

Kis baat per hamari naraz ho yun,
Chand sa mukhada chupa baithe ho kyun,
Kya hai dil main tumhare bol bhi do zara,
Narazagi ka zeher piye jate ho kyun!

Nazar milate hi, zuk zati hai kyun,
Kisi baat per aa kar ruk jate ho kyun,
Zakhm per marham rakhane do zara,
Her zakhm ko nasur banate ho kyun!

Baton Baton main ruth jate ho kyun,
Ruth kar humey tadapate ho kyun,
Yeh raaz-e-dil khol bhi do zara,
Humsey ruth kar chale jate ho kyun!



Wah Kaya baat hai!!! Bahoot khoob!! Gesu ji apne bhi bahoot acha reply diya hai!!  BeNam ji apki kavita pad kar jo man mai ayya wo hi likh rahi hu:

Baton baton mai pass bulaty hai
kuch door jakar thum hum jaaty hai
Raz-e-dil lo ajj apko bataty hai
be-panah muhobaat apse kiye jaaty hai!!

Her baat teri mujko to achi lagati hai
Teri her najar, shingaar mera karati hai
dil mai hamare sirf ek tera naam hai
Tera naam hi meri subah aor sham hai!!

Nazare tuje dekh kar sharma jaati hai
dil ki dharkan bhi kahi ruk jaati hai
jab se mile ho tum, her jkham bhool gaye
kali raat ke saye, jaise shabnam mai dhul gaye!!

Baton baton mai pass bulaty hai
kuch door jakar thum hum jaaty hai
Raz-e-dil lo ajj apko bataty hai
be-panah muhobaat apse kiye jaaty hai!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2006, 03:28:13 PM »
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kya baat hai pooja ji...wonderful...
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2006, 03:32:54 PM »
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Baaton baaton mein izhaar kis tarah se kiya tha tumne,
Aaj bhi yaad hai woh chandni raat mein jo sawaal kiya tha tumne,
Dogi saath mera har janam mein kis tarah se puchha tha tumne,
Ghabrahatt aur hayaa se kis tarah maar daala tha hamein tumne,
Kis tarah chatth(terrace)se hum utrey thhey jab haath thaam liya tha tumne,
Aaj bhi taaza hai woh lamhe jo kismatt se chura liye thhey tumne,
Apni har ehsaas-e-dhadkan ka raaz khol diya tha tumne...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2006, 03:54:37 PM »
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Wah Gesu ji , kaya kamal ka likha hai!!! Jo bhi man mai aa rahahai likh rahi hu tongue3

tere jawab ne wo raat mahkaai thi
bato bato mai sari raat wo bitaai thi
teri haya aor wo ghabraana tera
chehre ko hatho mai wo chupana tera

her zazbaat tera, najaro se bayaan ho gaya
karti ho tum bhi payaar, raz yah khul gaya
wo pal zindagi bhar sath rahege, teri tarah
ehsaas-e-dhadkan meri tum rooh-e-dharkan ki tarah!!! tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2006, 04:39:13 PM »
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Pooja, Gesu

Kya baat hai !

Bahut khoobsurat !

Aane dijiye aur dhamake :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2006, 08:46:07 AM »
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toog good to say anything........

Benam, Gesu and Pooja very nice........

ab kaya likhun sonchta hun
jo man mai aata ha likh deta hun.


Karke izhaar tum payar ka
kahan kho gai......
dhundhta hum phir se woh lamha
jab tu mujh ma kho gai....
har aati aahat se
tere aane ka guman hota hai
har waqt lagta hai
ke tu phir paas aa gai...
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2006, 02:12:34 PM »
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Thanks AND Good one Vikas~!
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2006, 05:29:18 AM »
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kya baat hai vikas ji .. tussi te kamaal kar ditta.. fantastic...
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2006, 04:36:20 AM »
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Shukriya Pooja Ji and Gesu ji

Ruthne ko aap ka kaya kahen
Jaan pe ban aati hai
to kaya ise aapki ada kahen
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2006, 05:37:35 PM »
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Thanks for appreciation friends! Gesu, Pooja and Vikas bravo! After a long time Rajbir pra ji aap hamari post per aye achha laga!

Kahan se chale, hum kahan ke liye,
kahan manzil ki khabar, hum madhosh jiye,
Mann hai bawara jis ke liye,
Roshan rahe woh teri ankho ke diye!

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