Bazm

by Ravi_Dave on September 26, 2007, 06:16:47 PM
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Bazm mein tere, main kho jaata hoon,
Deed se tere, main deewana ho jaata hoon,

Mujhse nazar milakar jo tumhe bechaini hoti ho,
Abhi aaya hoon, abhi lo jaata hoon,

Yaad tumhaari aayi, to tumhaare dar pe chalaa aaya,
Aitraaz ho mere aane pe, to jaata hoon,

Maye-kashi ki vahshat nahi,
Jaam ghum ke pee ke, so jaata hoon,

Hansi kissi baat pe nahi aati,
Khushi ke maahol mein bhi, ro jaata hoon,

Dikhta nahi 'Ravi' ab sahar mein bhi,
Apne hi jism mein, khaak ho jaata hoon
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2007, 06:21:08 PM »
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Bazm mein tere, main kho jaata hoon,
Deed se tere, main deewana ho jaata hoon,

Mujhse nazar milakar jo tumhe bechaini hoti ho,
Abhi aaya hoon, abhi lo jaata hoon,

Yaad tumhaari aayi, to tumhaare dar pe chalaa aaya,
Aitraaz ho mere aane pe, to jaata hoon,

Maye-kashi ki vahshat nahi,
Jaam ghum ke pee ke, so jaata hoon,

Hansi kissi baat pe nahi aati,
Khushi ke maahol mein bhi, ro jaata hoon,

Dikhta nahi 'Ravi' ab sahar mein bhi,
Apne hi jism mein, khaak ho jaata hoon


wah wah bahut khoob...
daad hazir hai Ravi ji..
Kabul farmaiyega
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2007, 02:23:17 PM »
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Good One Ravi...
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2007, 12:34:15 PM »
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Shukriya Roja and Aryaan!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2007, 11:10:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Ravi...
Bahut achha likha hai aapne...

Especially I liked these line :
"Mujhse nazar milakar jo tumhe bechaini hoti ho,
Abhi aaya hoon, abhi lo jaata hoon"
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2007, 10:28:45 AM »
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Very simple and yet so expressive and a bit different from your usual style...good one Ravi =D>
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2007, 02:03:26 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Ravi ji... magar apne kavita khumar-e-ishaq se shuru kari aor khatam karte waqat dard ki taraf chale gaye!!!

Per Likha bahoot acha hai.. good job!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2007, 12:15:33 PM »
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Shukhriya ShikhaJi, TalatJi and PoojaJi


PoojaJi...

Woh dil kya jis ke mohabbat mein dum naa ho,
Woh ishq kya jis mein dard-e-ghum naa ho,

Pyaar mein bhi khatta dekh ye, dua dekh ye,
Ke pareshaani-e-waqt-o-khush-hayaat mein khumaar-e-ishq kam naa ho!
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2007, 12:19:29 PM »
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Kya baat hai Ravi

Har ishq ki daastaan main chupa kahin hai ghum
Kahan jaayen, qadam dar qadam saath hai ghum !
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