BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Ek or ghazal aapke supurd kar rahaa hun .... is ummeed ke sath ki isme mujhe sachche comments milege....bilkul sahi sahi... kharab ho to kharab ...bekar to bekar..achhi to achhi... hehe..


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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2012, 07:41:48 AM »

acha laga dear


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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 08:44:02 AM »

Priya abhee ji is rachnaa ke bhaaw bade shaandaar hain lekin jis fragdilee se aapne is par sachhee rai maangee hai to main ye kahoongaa ki ye rachnaa ghazal ke grammar se door hai yaa yoon kahen ki bahr se khaariz hai


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2012, 08:53:32 AM »

Pyaari peshkash hai . 3rd sher bahut khoobsurat hai . Rythm bhi hai .
Haan , agar bahr mein hoti to maza dobaala ho jaata.


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mkv

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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2012, 03:53:35 PM »

Abhi jee
Bahut acche khayaalo ko jaama pahnaaya hai aapne.
Baaki kuch kahne ka mujhe haq nahee.
Sacche comment kee chahat kise nahee hotee..aap bhee chahte hai..fakra hai mujhe aap par.
Is field ka koee ant nahee.. par basic ko seekhkar dheere dheere aage badhna accha hai. jaha chah vaha raah. ek na ek din safalta haath lagegee.


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roy

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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2012, 05:03:42 PM »

bohoot khoob likha hai abhe g Applause

bohot khoobsorat
Applause


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suman59

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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2012, 11:34:33 PM »

abhi jee nicely designed and wonderful ghazal Applause


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soudagar

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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2012, 02:05:22 AM »

abhi ji bhut hi zabardast aur khubsurat creation............ dhero daad aur mubrakbaad. Clapping Smiley


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Re: BEBASII........................... Abhi Tamrakar..

«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 05:04:45 PM »

Quote from: saahill on July 02, 2012, 07:41:48 AM

acha laga dear

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 02, 2012, 08:44:02 AM

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 02, 2012, 08:53:32 AM

Pyaari peshkash hai . 3rd sher bahut khoobsurat hai . Rythm bhi hai .
Haan , agar bahr mein hoti to maza dobaala ho jaata.

Quote from: mkv on July 02, 2012, 03:53:35 PM

Quote from: roy on July 02, 2012, 05:03:42 PM

bohoot khoob likha hai abhe g Applause

bohot khoobsorat
Applause

Quote from: suman59 on July 02, 2012, 11:34:33 PM

abhi jee nicely designed and wonderful ghazal Applause

Quote from: soudagar on July 03, 2012, 02:05:22 AM

abhi ji bhut hi zabardast aur khubsurat creation............ dhero daad aur mubrakbaad. Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi dosto kaa....

sksaini sirji bahr se aapka ishara takhtii se hoga shayad...iska aage se khyal rakhuga..

F H siddiqui ji aapne sahi kaha is bar meri jyada koshish rhythm thii so pa li ...ab bahr par takhtii karke kam shuru karne ki koshish me hun...dekhte he agli peshkash sahi rakh pata hun ya nahi..

mkv ji yunhi sath rahiye ...


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