Beetey Palon Ke Saye - 1973 - Ram Saraswat

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Pahle   dekha   na  suna,  wo   shabab  tera   hai,
apni   tu  khud   misaal,  kya   jawab  tera   hai.

Zulf  bikhra  de  to, sawan  ki  ghata  chhaa jaye,
ek  nazar  dekh  le ,  sehra  mein  bahar  aa jaye,
dil - e - bimaar  ko,  chup  ke  se  karar aa jaye,
chaand   sa   chehra ,  badan   aftab   tera   hai.

Jee mein aata hai ki,jeebhar ke tujhe pyaar karoon,
zindagi bhar  tujhe  chaahoon, tera  deedar karoon
jioon mein tere liye , tujh pe jaan nisaar  karoon,
tujh ko mein dil mein basaloon , ye khwab mera hai.
 
Tera   deevana   hoon, duniya ki bhi  parwah  nahi,
teri  chaahat  ke  siva ,  dil mein koi chaah nahi,
tu    na   ho   saath  mere,  aisi  koi  raah  nahi,
tujh   se  rangeen  meri  sham  hai,  savera   hai.
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 03:34:24 AM »
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waah waah waah waah, Saraswat jee, bahut hi khoob. Bahut maza aaya padh ke.
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 11:51:06 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai
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waah. bahut khoob aur romantic peshkash rahi. dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2013, 01:08:13 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Saraswat ji,
Bahut emotional aur romantic geet likha hai aapne. Such me padkar dil khush ho gaya.
aapko is mukkammal geet ki rachna ke liye badhai ho.
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2013, 01:49:15 PM »
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Pahle   dekha   na  suna,  wo   shabab  tera   hai,
apni   tu  khud   misaal,  kya   jawab  tera   hai.

lajavaab..
behad pyari peshkash Sir
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kyaa baat hai,
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2013, 02:39:45 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on May 01, 2013, 03:26:51 AM
Pahle   dekha   na  suna,  wo   shabab  tera   hai,
apni   tu  khud   misaal,  kya   jawab  tera   hai.

Zulf  bikhra  de  to, sawan  ki  ghata  chhaa jaye,
ek  nazar  dekh  le ,  sehra  mein  bahar  aa jaye,
dil - e - bimaar  ko,  chup  ke  se  karar aa jaye,
chaand   sa   chehra ,  badan   aftab   tera   hai.

Jee mein aata hai ki,jeebhar ke tujhe pyaar karoon,
zindagi bhar  tujhe  chaahoon, tera  deedar karoon
jioon mein tere liye , tujh pe jaan nisaar  karoon,
tujh ko mein dil mein basaloon , ye khwab mera hai.
 
Tera   deevana   hoon, duniya ki bhi  parwah  nahi,
teri  chaahat  ke  siva ,  dil mein koi chaah nahi,
tu    na   ho   saath  mere,  aisi  koi  raah  nahi,
tujh   se  rangeen  meri  sham  hai,  savera   hai.


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waah waah waah waah, Saraswat jee, bahut hi khoob. Bahut maza aaya padh ke.
Bahut Bahut shkrya Iftakhar ji
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bahut khoob likha hai
Bahut bahut Shukriya
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waah. bahut khoob aur romantic peshkash rahi. dheron daad.
Bahut Bahut Shukriya
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Wah,Wah,Wah Saraswat ji,
Bahut emotional aur romantic geet likha hai aapne. Such me padkar dil khush ho gaya.
aapko is mukkammal geet ki rachna ke liye badhai ho.
Dhanyabad Sudhir ji
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Pahle   dekha   na  suna,  wo   shabab  tera   hai,
apni   tu  khud   misaal,  kya   jawab  tera   hai.

lajavaab..
behad pyari peshkash Sir

Bahut bahut dhanyabad MKV ji
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kyaa baat hai,
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Qalb ji
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