----- /// Behek jaaye hum /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 22, 2010, 03:08:06 PM
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kuch nasha sa hai teri aankhon me,
ki bin piye hi behek jaayen hum,
dekh len tera chehra hum ek baar,
to bas wahin pe theher jaayen hum,

hothon ki laali ka kya kehna tere,
ki usi rang me aaj rang jaayen hum,
chamakte hothon me kuch narmi si hai,
ki un hothon ko aaj chhoo jaayen hum,

julfon ke baadal se paani basra de,
usi baarish me aaj bheeg jaayen hum,
kho ke aaj teri aashiqui mein o jana,
ishq ke samundar me doob jaayen hum...


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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 03:12:38 PM »
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bahut khooob kapil ji..
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2010, 03:21:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 03:36:05 PM »
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kya kahun iss nazm k liye Hriday ji....
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2010, 06:36:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... likhna chaah bhi rahi hai par likh nahi paa rahi hain .. aisa kaise?
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2010, 06:45:29 PM »
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aisa kaise ye aapko pata hai kaise....
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2010, 07:24:44 PM »
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likha to nahin ja raha tha kapil ji par ek chhoti moti try ki hai..dekhiye aapko achchi lagti hai kya...zara nazar daliye ji.....

Uffff na aise dekho hume k  sharma jayen hum
Tere seene se lag kar tujhme hi kho jaye hum
Lehron sa machal k saahil se milne aye hum
Milkar tujhe wahin khudko mita jaye hum


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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2010, 08:41:53 PM »
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mat behko yaar abhi bahut durr jaana hai zindagi ki shuaat hai ye tou....
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2010, 11:05:25 PM »
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Kapil Dost aur Anamika di..

Bahaut khoob..!
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2010, 11:08:56 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 22, 2010, 08:41:53 PM
mat behko yaar abhi bahut durr jaana hai zindagi ki shuaat hai ye tou....
Oye hoye di bahaut kuch kehgaye ek line main..
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Tum toh pehla kadam lete hi ladkhara gaye Zalim,
Abhi toh safar-e-mohobat shuru hi nahin hua hai..!
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2010, 11:26:21 PM »
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Thanks Rahim-bhai........aapki lines bhi  achhi hain.....

Pehli nazar kay pyaar mai dost aksar dhoka hota hai
Jismaani khubsurti dekh,mann ki pehchaan nahi hoti

Quote from: -Rahim- on October 22, 2010, 11:08:56 PM
Oye hoye di bahaut kuch kehgaye ek line main..
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Tum toh pehla kadam lete hi ladkhara gaye Zalim,
Abhi toh safar-e-mohobat shuru hi nahin hua hai..!
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2010, 11:32:14 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 22, 2010, 11:26:21 PM
Thanks Rahim-bhai........aapki lines bhi  achhi hain.....

Pehli nazar kay pyaar mai dost aksar dhoka hota hai
Jismaani khubsurti dekh,mann ki pehchaan nahi hoti

Bahaut bahaut shukriya..!
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Aj kal toh log bahaut kalakari hogaye hai Rahim,
Mann ki sachayi chupana khoob jante hai..!
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2010, 02:17:40 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. isko chhoti moti try kehte hain to fir poore dil se likhenge to kya hoga .. qahar dhaa denge aap to fir... tongue3


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 22, 2010, 07:24:44 PM
likha to nahin ja raha tha kapil ji par ek chhoti moti try ki hai..dekhiye aapko achchi lagti hai kya...zara nazar daliye ji.....

Uffff na aise dekho hume k  sharma jayen hum
Tere seene se lag kar tujhme hi kho jaye hum
Lehron sa machal k saahil se milne aye hum
Milkar tujhe wahin khudko mita jaye hum


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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2010, 02:18:30 AM »
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kya karein ji control hi nahi hota... tongue3

Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 22, 2010, 08:41:53 PM
mat behko yaar abhi bahut durr jaana hai zindagi ki shuaat hai ye tou....
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2010, 02:18:51 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on October 22, 2010, 11:05:25 PM
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Kapil Dost aur Anamika di..

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