nice_off_me
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Tumhare bina zindagi viran si hai
Tumhari baaton ke bina meri baatein adhuri si hai
Tumhai ek jhalak dekhne ke liye meri aankhen bekaraar si hai
Tumhari pyarr bhari aankhon mein doob jane ki aarzuu si hai
MERI sansein teri sanso mein ghulne ke liye kab se bekaraar si hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi udass si hai
Tumhein pakar sab kuch bhoolane ki ki tamana si hai
Kabhi tumhari nazrein meri nazro se takraye ye chahat si hai
Tumhari ikraar-e-wafa sunne ke liye meri tamana si hai
Mujhe tumse pyarr hai ye nazro se saaf zahir si hai
Tumhare saath dil kash nazara dekhne ki khwaish si hai
TUMHARA PYARR PANE KI EK KHWAISH SI HAI
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2005, 04:23:25 PM » |
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Tumhare bina zindagi viran si hai
Tumhari baaton ke bina meri baatein adhuri si hai
Tumhai ek jhalak dekhne ke liye meri aankhen bekaraar si hai
Tumhari pyarr bhari aankhon mein doob jane ki aarzuu si hai
MERI sansein teri sanso mein ghulne ke liye kab se bekaraar si hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi udass si hai
Tumhein pakar sab kuch bhoolane ki ki tamana si hai
Kabhi tumhari nazrein meri nazro se takraye ye chahat si hai
Tumhari ikraar-e-wafa sunne ke liye meri tamana si hai
Mujhe tumse pyarr hai ye nazro se saaf zahir si hai
Tumhare saath dil kash nazara dekhne ki khwaish si hai
TUMHARA PYARR PANE KI EK KHWAISH SI HAI wow simran..........bahot acche,..............very nice..............
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2005, 05:42:27 AM » |
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thank you waheed for replying and liking it keep writing keep reading
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2005, 05:52:51 AM » |
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thank you waheed for replying and liking it keep writing keep reading ur always welcome simmi............................................ .....................
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2005, 06:04:25 AM » |
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Bohat achey Simran...............................
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2005, 12:07:55 PM » |
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ur always welcome simmi
thank you waheed for being a good frend
and thanx alot aryaan for liking and replying it
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2005, 12:13:05 PM » |
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bahut ache every one....keep it up
tujhe pane ki chaah dil main utatti hai teri narazo se jab bhi meri nazar milti hai ki hum tuh reh jate hai dil tham ke yaaron jab bhi vo saj savarke ghar se nikalti hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2005, 09:02:41 PM » |
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AAJ FIR JINDGI UDAS HAI, PASS HOKAR BHI NA MERE PASS HAI; AAJ FIR KHUSHIYAN CHOOD CHALI GAI HAI MUJHE... AB TO BAS MAUT KI HI AAS HAI.
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2005, 02:52:38 AM » |
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sandhaya jee thank you for liking it and replying it apne behad khubsurat likha hai likhte rahiyega.
and fakhar apne buhut hi acha likha hai sachi really very good
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2005, 06:03:13 AM » |
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Tumhare bina zindagi viran si hai
Tumhari baaton ke bina meri baatein adhuri si hai
Tumhai ek jhalak dekhne ke liye meri aankhen bekaraar si hai
Tumhari pyarr bhari aankhon mein doob jane ki aarzuu si hai
MERI sansein teri sanso mein ghulne ke liye kab se bekaraar si hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi udass si hai
Tumhein pakar sab kuch bhoolane ki ki tamana si hai
Kabhi tumhari nazrein meri nazro se takraye ye chahat si hai
Tumhari ikraar-e-wafa sunne ke liye meri tamana si hai
Mujhe tumse pyarr hai ye nazro se saaf zahir si hai
Tumhare saath dil kash nazara dekhne ki khwaish si hai
TUMHARA PYARR PANE KI EK KHWAISH SI HAI Good work, zindagi mein kisi ki jarurat si hai, shayad isliye zindagi tanha si hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2005, 06:20:33 AM » |
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sandhaya jee thank you for liking it and replying it apne behad khubsurat likha hai likhte rahiyega.
and fakhar apne buhut hi acha likha hai sachi really very good shukria
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2005, 10:13:25 AM » |
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g8 simran nice lekha hai aapne yaar
Aap Gairon ki baat karte hain, humne Apno ko Aajmaya hai! log Katoan se bachkar chalte hain, humne Fooloan se Jakhm khaya hai!! hai....
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2005, 09:22:23 PM » |
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buhat khoon sem ..............................keep it up my dear.............
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2005, 05:54:09 AM » |
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thank you devdas ji mujhe apka naam nahi pata
thank you very much for liking it keep writing keep reading
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2005, 05:05:36 PM » |
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Tumhare bina zindagi viran si hai
Tumhari baaton ke bina meri baatein adhuri si hai
Tumhai ek jhalak dekhne ke liye meri aankhen bekaraar si hai
Tumhari pyarr bhari aankhon mein doob jane ki aarzuu si hai
MERI sansein teri sanso mein ghulne ke liye kab se bekaraar si hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi udass si hai
Tumhein pakar sab kuch bhoolane ki ki tamana si hai
Kabhi tumhari nazrein meri nazro se takraye ye chahat si hai
Tumhari ikraar-e-wafa sunne ke liye meri tamana si hai
Mujhe tumse pyarr hai ye nazro se saaf zahir si hai
Tumhare saath dil kash nazara dekhne ki khwaish si hai
TUMHARA PYARR PANE KI EK KHWAISH SI HAI wahhhhh simran,kya likha hai,superb,meri nazar bohat der me padi but i m happy that i read it :D .Excellent,very very nice.
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