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by baadal102 on November 08, 2008, 04:23:11 PM
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Dil aaj fir bekarar hua jaata hai,
Tumhe gale lagane ko betaab hua jaata hai,

Jaise hi chu.ti hai badalte mausam ki thandak,
Tumhara wo hum se lipat jaana yaad aata hai,

Garam saanse wo tumhari jab chu.ti the galo ko,
Fir wo dhire se kaano main gunguna.na yaad aata hai,

Laga ke kaajal aankho main, aaine ko dekhna,
Fir dhire se palkhe jhookana yaad aata hai,

Laut aao jaldi aur dikha do surat-e-yaar,
Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai,

Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai...........






Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2008, 04:27:05 PM »
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Wah wah bohat khoob Badal ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2008, 04:30:06 PM »
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thanx a lot honey ji







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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2008, 04:53:45 PM »
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Ati sundar Baadal Ji

Par itni bekarari theek nahi
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2008, 04:56:54 PM »
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beautiful kalam badal

yeh bekarari kisi ajnabi ko batayee hoti
woh tuje pal me apna bana leta

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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2008, 05:09:11 PM »
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Dil aaj fir bekarar hua jaata hai,
Tumhe gale lagane ko betaab hua jaata hai,

Jaise hi chu.ti hai badalte mausam ki thandak,
Tumhara wo hum se lipat jaana yaad aata hai,

Garam saanse wo tumhari jab chu.ti the galo ko,
Fir wo dhire se kaano main gunguna.na yaad aata hai,

Laga ke kaajal aankho main, aaine ko dekhna,
Fir dhire se palkhe jhookana yaad aata hai,

Laut aao jaldi aur dikha do surat-e-yaar,
Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai,

Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai...........






Baadal

Wah Wah Wah!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Baadalji..Bahut Acha likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2008, 05:40:31 PM »
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Waah....Bohot Khoobsurat...ek tarannum sa dikhta hai shuru se akhir tak ....Very nice work Baadal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2008, 05:51:15 PM »
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badal yaar maine to socha ki mere baare me likha hai tumne...khair ......jo bhi likha achcha likha...
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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2008, 01:55:05 PM »
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badal yaar maine to socha ki mere baare me likha hai tumne...khair ......jo bhi likha achcha likha...
kya baat hain kahi tum aur baadal.....chodo muje kya karna hain free country hain  Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2008, 03:10:47 PM »
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bahut bahut sukriya aap sab
ka jo aap ne mari hausla afjai ki hai.
thanx a lot ALL OF U


bekarar bhai naraz na ho kabhi aap pe bhi likh denge hello


saajid bhai kya kaan khinchne ke liye hum hi mile the tongue3 Laughing hard





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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2008, 07:28:06 AM »
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 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM
KYA KHUMAAR HAI ISME...
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #11 on: November 10, 2008, 12:58:37 PM »
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thanx a lot
shally ji



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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2008, 01:17:46 PM »
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tufaan bhi tham gaya hai
sapna bhi toot gaya hai
tanha hi reh gaye hum
aashiya hi bikhar gaya hai


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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2008, 04:52:16 AM »
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wonderful creation baadal ji  Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2008, 08:55:56 AM »
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bahut bahut sukriya jasbir ji N bhawna ji






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