BEKARARI

by madhuwesh on July 08, 2009, 12:26:29 AM
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HOON MAI BEKARAR TERE LIYE
KARTA HAI YE DIL TUJHE YAAD BAAR BAAR.
JEENA NAHI MUJHE AB TERE BINA
KAR GAYA KYUN MUJHE TU ITNA BEKARAR
BAN JA TU MERE DIL KI DHADKAN
NA KAR MUJHE TU ISS TARAH BEKARAR.

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javedarshad
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 02:11:40 AM »
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HOON MAI BEKARAR TERE LIYE
KARTA HAI YE DIL TUJHE YAAD BAAR BAAR.
JEENA NAHI MUJHE AB TERE BINA
KAR GAYA KYUN MUJHE TU ITNA BEKARAR
BAN JA TU MERE DIL KI DHADKAN
NA KAR MUJHE TU ISS TARAH BEKARAR.



Madhu ji bahut khoob

kuch meri taraf se aap ki nazr



Tere liye yeh dil hai beqarar
Tu aata hai yaad kuin baar baar
jiun to ab kaise jiun tere bina
Kahan se laaun main dil hazaar
kash ban jata mere dil ki dharkan
Na hoota dil istarah beqarar beqarar


tx

javed
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Deepati
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 02:26:52 AM »
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Wah Wah Madhu Ji... Bahut achha likha hai! Applause


Wah Wah Javedarshad Ji... Aapne bhi bahut sundar likha hai! Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 02:27:10 AM »
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HOON MAI BEKARAR TERE LIYE
KARTA HAI YE DIL TUJHE YAAD BAAR BAAR.
JEENA NAHI MUJHE AB TERE BINA
KAR GAYA KYUN MUJHE TU ITNA BEKARAR
BAN JA TU MERE DIL KI DHADKAN
NA KAR MUJHE TU ISS TARAH BEKARAR.


Bohot khoob..bohot umda.  Applause

madhuwesh ji jab aap likh sakte hain to aap ko likhna chahiye...isi taha likhte rhiyega...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 02:30:16 AM »
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Tere liye yeh dil hai beqarar
Tu aata hai yaad kuin baar baar
jiun to ab kaise jiun tere bina
Kahan se laaun main dil hazaar
kash ban jata mere dil ki dharkan
Na hoota dil istarah beqarar beqarar

tx
javed

Bohot umda javed ji, ahchha likha aapne.
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 10:51:44 AM »
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HOON MAI BEKARAR TERE LIYE
KARTA HAI YE DIL TUJHE YAAD BAAR BAAR.
JEENA NAHI MUJHE AB TERE BINA
KAR GAYA KYUN MUJHE TU ITNA BEKARAR
BAN JA TU MERE DIL KI DHADKAN
NA KAR MUJHE TU ISS TARAH BEKARAR.



kon hai jo tujhay beqarra karta hai
sitam ye khoobsurat baar baar karta hai
wo tere is izhaar pe mar gya hoga
jo tera hai aur tera intezaar karta hai



aur javed sahab kya baat hai bhut acha reply hai mashallah
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 11:48:49 AM »
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Thank you so much Javed ji,Deepti ji,Sayyid ji, Aaina ji.
Javed ji and Aaina ji very beautiful lines,kaash mai bhi aap dono ki tarah likh
pati. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_thumleft love4
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 12:01:33 PM »
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madhu  dear, aslam aur javed bhai aap teeno ne bahut achcha likha hai


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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2009, 12:04:48 PM »
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Oye Laila ke majnu thank you so much. hello tongue3
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2009, 11:43:27 PM »
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kon hai jo tujhay beqarra karta hai
sitam ye khoobsurat baar baar karta hai
wo tere is izhaar pe mar gya hoga
jo tera hai aur tera intezaar karta hai



Kya baat hai..Bohot umda aslam ji.  Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2009, 11:44:46 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai, Good work MADHU JI, JAVED JI AND AAINA JI!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 04:53:34 AM »
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Wah Madhu Ji Kya Baat hai... Bahut dino baad aapne kuch Khumaar me likha hai.. Aur Behad Khubsoorat likha hai.. Waqai Lajawab aur Mohabbat Bhara...!!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Aur Sath Hi Javed saheb aapne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 04:56:33 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Madhu Ji , Javed Ji and Aslam ji..

Good Work All!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 04:58:58 AM »
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Thank you so much Pooja ji,Mann ji,Sophi ji. hello love4
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md.ayad
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:44:10 AM »
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HOON MAI BEKARAR TERE LIYE
KARTA HAI YE DIL TUJHE YAAD BAAR BAAR.
JEENA NAHI MUJHE AB TERE BINA
KAR GAYA KYUN MUJHE TU ITNA BEKARAR
BAN JA TU MERE DIL KI DHADKAN
NA KAR MUJHE TU ISS TARAH BEKARAR.


Jaane kaun ch'heen kar le gaya Tera chain-o-Qarar
BeQarari tujhe Ae dil pehle tho na thi
                           NM

Aadab
Madhu ji
  Hume Aap ki tarha likhna tho nahi aata
  kahi se padha hua sher likh raha hu
     ummeed hai pasand aaegi
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