Belated Valentines Day Kavita : Hindi - A poetry

by Ricky on February 18, 2008, 06:20:45 PM
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I wrote a poem for valentines day which is in Hindi and is based upon the story of Valentines which we see around. However to make it easy I am mentioning that story here:
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Let me introduce myself. My name is Valentine. I lived in Rome during the third century. That was long, long ago! At that time, Rome was ruled by an emperor named Claudius. I didn't like Emperor Claudius, and I wasn't the only one! A lot of people shared my feelings.

Claudius wanted to have a big army. He expected men to volunteer to join. Many men just did not want to fight in wars. They did not want to leave their wives and families. As you might have guessed, not many men signed up. This made Claudius furious. So what happened? He had a crazy idea. He thought that if men were not married, they would not mind joining the army. So Claudius decided not to allow any more marriages. Young people thought his new law was cruel. I thought it was preposterous! I certainly wasn't going to support that law!

Did I mention that I was a priest? One of my favorite activities was to marry couples. Even after Emperor Claudius passed his law, I kept on performing marriage ceremonies -- secretly, of course. It was really quite exciting. Imagine a small candlelit room with only the bride and groom and myself. We would whisper the words of the ceremony, listening all the while for the steps of soldiers.

One night, we did hear footsteps. It was scary! Thank goodness the couple I was marrying escaped in time. I was caught. (Not quite as light on my feet as I used to be, I guess.) I was thrown in jail and told that my punishment was death.

I tried to stay cheerful. And do you know what? Wonderful things happened. Many young people came to the jail to visit me. They threw flowers and notes up to my window. They wanted me to know that they, too, believed in love.

One of these young people was the daughter of the prison guard. Her father allowed her to visit me in the cell. Sometimes we would sit and talk for hours. She helped me to keep my spirits up. She agreed that I did the right thing by ignoring the Emperor and going ahead with the secret marriages. On the day I was to die, I left my friend a little note thanking her for her friendship and loyalty. I signed it, "Love from your Valentine."

I believe that note started the custom of exchanging love messages on Valentine's Day. It was written on the day I died, February 14, 269 A.D. Now, every year on this day, people remember. But most importantly, they think about love and friendship. And when they think of Emperor Claudius, they remember how he tried to stand in the way of love, and they laugh -- because they know that love can't be beaten!

Now below is my Poem :


   व्यथा है, एक कथा है, प्रेम की सदैव यही प्र‍था है,
    वर्ष बीते अनेक किंतु प्रेम बलिदान ने इतिहास रचा है,
    प्रीत रीत उस भले मानस की,आज भी प्रेरणास्त्रोत उंचा है,

    कितने राजे आये,प्रेम पंरपरा न डिगा पाये,
    कोयल सी इस कूक को, गीदड़बग्घी से न उरा पाये,
    कष्ट, पीड़ा की न सीमा,पर न कोई इसे मिटा पाये,

    प्रेम दिवस है नाम दिया, संत ने जीवनदान दिया,
    पाठ पढ़ाया, प्रेम बिना न कोई जीवन,
    प्रेमपथ रोड़ा उस मृत्यु को भी सम्मान दिया,

    व्यथा है, एक कथा है, प्रेम की सदैव यही प्र‍था है,
    कभी रुप वेलेंटांइस, कभी जन मानस ब्यार,
    बहती गंगा मानिंद ये प्रेम कभी न रुका है

So above was my little try, I know there are many who can understand hindi but can’t read it so I am typing again in English fonts..

    Vyatha hai, ek katha hai, prem ki sadaiv yahi pratha hai,
    Beete varsha anek kintu prem balidan ne itihaas racha hai,
    Preet reet uss bhale maanas ki, aaj bhi prerna srot uncha hai,

    Kitne raje aye, prem parampara na diga paye,
    Koyal si iss kook ko, geedarbhabki se na dara paye,
    kasht,peeda ki naa seema, par naa koi isse mita paye,

    Prem divas naam diya hai, sant nae jeevan daan diya,
    Paath padhaya, Prem bina na koi jeevan,
    Prem path roda,uss mrityu ko bhi samman diya

    Vyatha hai, ek katha hai, prem ki sadaiv yahi pratha hai,
    Kabhi roop valentines, kabhi jan-maanas bayaar,
    Behti ganga manind ye prem naa kabhi ruka hai… !
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2008, 07:33:43 PM »
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tats beautiful ricky!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2008, 05:20:43 AM »
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Wow nice creations Ricky ji..lots of wishes  .. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2008, 05:31:11 AM »
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Very Nice and Very Different...
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2008, 04:49:47 PM »
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wowow too good Ricky!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2008, 07:36:32 PM »
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Thankyou Sanya, Shikha, honeyrose and Pooja ji  for this nice appreciation.

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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2008, 06:39:06 AM »
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thanks for considering the "hindi impaired"
cool story
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2008, 08:40:25 PM »
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NGS, well atleast it served its purpose Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2008, 12:28:46 PM »
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Everyone is already appreciated ur creation. i just wanted to add  more word... amazing ... i like to read hindi poetry..really beautiful
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2008, 10:57:50 PM »
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Thankyou !
Shall try write something more off-track like this Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2011, 10:19:26 AM »
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Hi im Vinay
i like it shayri
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