*~*?? BeWaFa Ko AaKhIrI sAlAaM kYa DeNgE ??*~* -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #15 on: April 08, 2006, 01:25:50 PM »

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dev sahab pehle to aapka shukraguzar hun ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.aur yakeen maaniye aapki panktiyaan bhi kaafi ahchi hain.umeed hai ki aap aage bhi yunhi humari mehil me shirkat karte rahiyega.

ghayl_shayr ji aapse ye humari dusri mulakat hai..........
pehle kisi aur site pe bhi hui thi shayd........... dono hi waqt aapne hume ek ladka samjha........ main ek ladki hu baba.......... my name is minu!
dev sahab tho humare bf hai..............
vaise humari urdu aap jaisi achi tho nahi........ par koshish karte hai......
and thank you kyunki humara shayri-andaaz pasand aya.........
hum likhtey rahenge!

to main is baat ke liye maafi ka talabdaar hun.aur doosri baat urdu aadaab ki jaankari mujhe bhi koi khaash nahi hai.bas padh padh kar seekh raha hun.main bhi aapko ye batana chahunga ki mujhe aap keh kar na bulayen.kyunki main sirf 18 saal ka ladka hun.umeed hai humari aane wale samay me bhi mulakaten hoti rahengi.
aapka GHAYAL


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Talat

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«Reply #16 on: April 08, 2006, 01:37:53 PM »

Ghayal...Minu and Gaurav.... nice work buddies !!


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #17 on: April 08, 2006, 01:40:36 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Ghayal...Minu and Gaurav.... nice work buddies !!

talat ji bahut bahut shukriya.bas aage bhi aap hume yunhi padhti rahiye.


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #18 on: April 08, 2006, 04:28:59 PM »

Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"

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Tere Kadmo ke Nishaan ko.....
Choom ke hum ek Yaad bana denge.....

Teri Bewafai ko iss seene....
Mein daba ke Dard seh lenge.....

Sochta hoon teri bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe inaam kya denge.....

Khushin ko door toh....
Ab Gum ko apne darmiyaan kar lenge....

Par tere aanchal ko.....
Koi aanch na aane denge.....

Bas apni Zindagi bhi teri....
Bewafai ke Naam kar chalenge.....

Sochta hoon teri Bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe Inaam kya denge........!!!!!!!!!!!!

gaurav sahab kya kahen hum,aapne to ek saccha aashiq dikha diya apni lines.bas yahi guzarish hai ki yunhi padhte aur likhte rahiye aap.

Thnx a lot Ghayal bhai jaan


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urs4evasomdev

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«Reply #19 on: April 09, 2006, 01:02:30 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Ghayal...Minu and Gaurav.... nice work buddies !!

thanx talat


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urs4evasomdev

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«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2006, 01:07:33 PM »

Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"

ghayal ji......... humse maafi maang kar aap hume sharminda kar rahe hai......
vaise aapki urdu humare samajh ke bahar hai........ he he he he! :lol:
humara ye mann na hai ke "aap" sirf buzurgo ke liye hi nahi balki un sab ko dena chahiye jo respect ke kabil ho....... chaliye aapka hukum salaqhon par....... mera matlap hai tumhara....... he he he!
chaliye apna kalam ka jadu firse chalaye.......
aapke intzaar main
~Minu~


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rockindia

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«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2006, 02:29:27 PM »

kiya khoob likha hai gaurav aur ghayal ne....sach kayal kar dala apni shayari ka


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #22 on: April 10, 2006, 07:26:48 AM »

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kiya khoob likha hai gaurav aur ghayal ne....sach kayal kar dala apni shayari ka

humari khuskismati rock sahab ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.umeed hai ki aap aage bhi hume yunhi padhte rahiyega.


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