|
bazish
Guest
|
|
«Reply #15 on: November 26, 2004, 06:40:31 PM » |
|
Koi Khawab Aankho Main Utrane Nahi Daita
Yea Dil K Mujhe Chain Se Marne Nahi Daita
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
mudassirali
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #16 on: November 27, 2004, 01:22:46 PM » |
|
good bazish
jeeta tha tho milney ko bhi na aatey they merey paas
ab mar chuka hoon to mayyat pey ro rahey ho tum,
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Talat
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #17 on: November 27, 2004, 01:37:50 PM » |
|
Wah!!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
bazish
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #18 on: November 27, 2004, 08:12:22 PM » |
|
Thanks Mudassirali and Talat
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
bazish
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #19 on: November 27, 2004, 08:13:55 PM » |
|
Rishtaa kyaa hai teraa meraa
Main huun shab aur tuu hai saveraa
Tuu hai chaand sitaaron jaisaa
Merii qismat ghor andheraa
Phuulon jaisii raahen terii
Kaanton jaisaa meraa Deraa
Aataa jaataa hai ye jiivan
Pal do pal kaa rain-baseraa
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
lovebites
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #20 on: November 27, 2004, 08:19:52 PM » |
|
Rishtaa kyaa hai teraa meraa
Main huun shab aur tuu hai saveraa
Tuu hai chaand sitaaron jaisaa
Merii qismat ghor andheraa
Phuulon jaisii raahen terii
Kaanton jaisaa meraa Deraa
Aataa jaataa hai ye jiivan
Pal do pal kaa rain-baseraa wah kya likha hai........! |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
bazish
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #21 on: November 27, 2004, 08:20:59 PM » |
|
shukria
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
mudassirali
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #22 on: November 28, 2004, 07:45:39 AM » |
|
nice bazish good poem,
aap ki nazm parhney ke baad iska jawab likhney ki koshish ki hai pls read it.
Rishta jo hai uska tera
tu hai suraj woh hai savera
tu hai dilbar shafaq ki laali
teri qismat mein kahan andhera
poolon jaisa uska jeevan
hanseen kamal mein tera dera
aata jaata hai hai jeewan
par tum par to hai ishq ka pehra.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
lovebites
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #23 on: November 28, 2004, 07:59:49 AM » |
|
ubb ke tu is terhan se yaad aaya
jis terhan dasht main ghanay sayey
jesay dhundlay se aeeinay ke naqooosh
jesay sadioan ki baat yaad ayay
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
bazish
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #24 on: November 28, 2004, 08:10:15 PM » |
|
Kia Baat Hai mudassirali
Woh kehte hai k app jo bhi kehte hai woh kuch nahi hota jabh tak sunane wala acha na ho aur woh aap k kahe k jawab main us se bhi acha na kahe.. aap ne waqia bohat acha reply kia meri post ki hoi nazam ko.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
lovebites
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #25 on: November 28, 2004, 08:29:24 PM » |
|
bhoot khoob everyone
aab kay hum pay yeh kaisa saal paara logo
shehroon mein awazoon kaa kaal paara logo
her chehra do tokroon mein takseem hoa
aab kay diloon mein aisa baal paara logo
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
bazish
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #26 on: November 28, 2004, 08:32:46 PM » |
|
Pyaar mujhase jo kiyaa tumane to kyaa paaogii
Mere haalat kii aandhii mein bikhar jaogii
Ranj aur dard kii bastii kaa main baashindaa huun
Ye to bas main huun ke is haal mein bhii zindaa huun
Khvaab kyuun dekhuun vo kal jisape main sharmindaa huun
Main jo sharmindaa huaa tum bhii to sharamaaogii
Kyun mere saath koi aur pareshaan rahe
Merii duniyaa hai jo vIraan to vIraan rahe
Zindagii kaa ye safar tumako to aasaan rahe
Hamasafar mujhako banaogii to pachhataaogii
Ek main kyaa abhii aayenge divaane kitane
Abhii gunjege muhabbat ke taraane kitane
Zindagii tumako sunaayegii fasaane kitane
Kyun samajhatii ho mujhe bhuul nahii paaogii
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
lovebites
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #27 on: November 28, 2004, 08:38:33 PM » |
|
Is kay naam say lafzo main chand utrtay hain
Woh aik shakhs daikho to ankh bhar aye
JO kho chukay hain inhain dhondna to mumkin hai
Jo ja chukay hain inhain koi kistarhan laye
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
mudassirali
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #28 on: November 29, 2004, 12:29:44 PM » |
|
shukriya bazish meri hosla afzai ka ek koshish aur hai ummed hai pasand aayegi.
hum laeyingey mohobbat ko dhoond kar insaanon ki bheerh sey
aisi koi jagah nahin jahan humein ishq na miley
itni nafrat to nahin hai merey mehboob ko mujhsey
main chahoon aur mujhey ussey pyar na miley
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nishita
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #29 on: November 29, 2004, 12:54:16 PM » |
|
wah wah both
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
