BhAtKe HaRdUm MuSaFiR NaHi HaI.....

by nice_off_me on May 27, 2005, 08:18:57 AM
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2005, 10:21:41 AM »
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........
wow simran sis,again a gr8 work :D
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2005, 12:51:02 PM »
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Wah! Bohat khoob Simran........................
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2005, 01:59:23 PM »
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wowwwwwwww simran sis!!!!!!!! bohot pyara likha apne!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2005, 02:03:10 PM »
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[QUOTE=Yun gungunate hue raste per chala jaaraha tha terii bahon ke sparsh ko yaad kiye jaa raha tha....teri khushbooo to gulab se jyada khushboodaar hai terii khushbooo ko apnii dharkan me dharkaaye chala jaa raha tha....  


yeh merii muhabbat merii MUSSKAAN ke liye jisse mein dil se pyar karta hoon


merii jindagii ek RAAZ hai merii jindagii ek ALFAAZ hai.karta hu mein muhabbat tumse kyonkii merii jindagii ka ek tu hii SARTAAZ hai........

ILOVEU MUSSKAAN
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2005, 02:07:39 PM »
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Yun gungunate hue raste per chala jaaraha tha terii bahon ke sparsh ko yaad kiye jaa raha tha....teri khushbooo to gulab se jyada khushboodaar hai terii khushbooo ko apnii dharkan me dharkaaye chala jaa raha tha....  


yeh merii muhabbat merii MUSSKAAN ke liye jisse mein dil se pyar karta hoon


merii jindagii ek RAAZ hai merii jindagii ek ALFAAZ hai.karta hu mein muhabbat tumse kyonkii merii jindagii ka ek tu hii SARTAAZ hai........

ILOVEU MUSSKAAN
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2005, 03:44:34 PM »
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nice work simran ,realy good.

main musafir nahin hoon bhatka hoon phir bhi
manzil ko har dam main tarsa hoon phir bhi
mohobbat jo meri kho si gayi hai
dhoondney ko usko nikla hoon phir bhi
safar, zindgi hai, kya maut hai manzil
pyar zindigi ka kinara hai phir bhi
rakhta hoon dil key lahoo mein duboo kar
kya karon usko nafrat hai phir bhi.
(mudassir-)
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2005, 08:16:05 PM »
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oye simran buhat khoob dear..................


tuney tu mera dil hi chlni chlni kr diya......


The rainbow is a sign of God's promise,
that He will guide us through all our troubles,
no matter what their form.
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2005, 11:26:13 AM »
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HeY tHaNk YoU nidhi sis,meena sis,aryaan,dard aur ulfat ji and thanx fakhar dost..........thank you for ur supports thanx again........

dil ke khayalo mein hai wo basa
dil ki dharkano mein hai wo basa
har saans mein hai wo
lakin kismat nahi hai wo.............
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2005, 11:56:32 AM »
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........


amazing .... aur kya kahun
bahut khoob likha hai aap ne simran
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2005, 12:44:37 PM »
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........


haway bhi rok sakta hu mai,....
toofan bhi rok sakta hu,..

meri chahat me hai itna dum,,...
tu kahe to mai aapni jaa bhi chor sakta hu,..
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2005, 11:09:36 PM »
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........


haway bhi rok sakta hu mai,....
toofan bhi rok sakta hu,..

meri chahat me hai itna dum,,...
tu kahe to mai aapni jaa bhi chor sakta hu,..
nice
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2005, 05:53:37 AM »
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tushar its really nice dear sach mein buhut acha  likha hai apne bhi..........................
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2005, 10:53:18 AM »
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BHaTkE ju hardum musafir nahi hai,
tham jaye pal bhar hawa wo nahi hai,

zindagi mein tufaan se ju naa ghira hu,
pahucha hua koi shayar nahi ha,

kanto se jis ka daman hu khali,
shayad chaman mein koi gul nahi hai,

bin dard ke hi dil ko ju choo le
aisi koi bhi gazal ek nahi hai,

pighla sake ju naa pathar ka seena
phir ye samjh lo wo ansu nahi hai,

ek pyass ke mare ko ju sakoon de
jaha mein koi ek sagar nahi hai.........


very nice ..................

kabhi judta ya phir toot jata ho jhat se
meri nazar mein shayad wo pyar he nahi hai.
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2005, 04:39:35 AM »
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thank you tanha dil ji for replying and liking it and thank you tosha sis
thanx for ur support....................aur apne bhi  acha likha hai tanha dil ji..............
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