Bhule na bhulaye lamhe purane - v/v

by veenavarsha on March 23, 2011, 01:55:19 PM
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 hello2


sunhare sapno ki yade wo mile aur unki bate
wo mann se nikli khawaisho  ki bouchare

wo hasta jhakham, wo mitta sitam
wo sawalo ke safar me katta  waqt

 wo vade, kya mulakate,  dilkash the nazare
 chain lut le eise the preet ke irade

wo kisse kahaniye se lagte sare
 karar  aaye na jo mile bin tumhare

 wo bhi ek lamha tha tum the tab hamare
ye bhi ek pal  ki bhule na bhulaye lamhe purane
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2011, 02:45:36 PM »
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wo unke daaman se lipatna
fir unki baanho me haule se simattna

bhule na bhulaye wo baate
wo mulaakaate
wo mera ruthna unka manana uff
ladkiyan kitna yaad rakhti hain..dimaag ka galat upyog karti hain Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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don mnd
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2011, 03:05:35 PM »
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veena ji yakinan apne ye dil se likha se.........ek request he bura mat maniyega......ise rhyme me lene ki koshish kijiye....is potery ka maja double se bhi kahi jyada ho jayega.........theme is excellent and words r also very supporting ..... keep it up dear
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2011, 03:10:19 PM »
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wo unke daaman se lipatna
fir unki baanho me haule se simattna

bhule na bhulaye wo baate
wo mulaakaate
wo mera ruthna unka manana uff
ladkiyan kitna yaad rakhti hain..dimaag ka galat upyog karti hain Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
““
don mnd


i totally agree with you
ladko ne saraha ladkiyo ne dil lagaya
ladko ne khana khilaya ,ladkiyo ne gana gaya
ladko ne uphaar dhilaya, ladkiyo ne gale se lagaya
 sach kaha tumne dil ka  hi nahi
dimag ka bhi galat upyog karaya
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2011, 03:18:54 PM »
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veena ji yakinan apne ye dil se likha se.........ek request he bura mat maniyega......ise rhyme me lene ki koshish kijiye....is potery ka maja double se bhi kahi jyada ho jayega.........theme is excellent and words r also very supporting ..... keep it up dear
wo jo man me aata hai lik dete hai
 sudhar kar nahi pate
 koshish karenge
aur jo aapne itni tarif ki hai
 uske liye

 sukriya na kahe to beadabi hogi
  sukriya ji  bahut bahut
 
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2011, 03:19:06 PM »
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hmm aapke khubsurat ehsaason ka humne mazak udaya
dhanya hain aap jinhone meri bato ko dil se nai lagaya
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aapki poem meethe ehsaaso se bhari hai …
daad dil sd
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ANAAM
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2011, 05:59:48 PM »
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Sunder ehsaas...jaise ho aap beeti kahaani....good poem Varsha..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo un dino ki romaantic pyaar bhari baatein
Chhup-chhup kar hoti thee wo mulaaquatein

Yaad ban kar reh gaye hain wo sab haseen lamhe
Sach hai bhule naa bhulaaye jaayein wo lamhe




hello2


sunhare sapno ki yade wo mile aur unki bate
wo mann se nikli khawaisho  ki bouchare

wo hasta jhakham, wo mitta sitam
wo sawalo ke safar me katta  waqt

 wo vade, kya mulakate,  dilkash the nazare
 chain lut le eise the preet ke irade

wo kisse kahaniye se lagte sare
 karar  aaye na jo mile bin tumhare

 wo bhi ek lamha tha tum the tab hamare
ye bhi ek pal  ki bhul na bhulaye lamhe purane

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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2011, 07:00:40 PM »
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Bahut umda veena varsha ji....
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veenavarsha
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2011, 05:08:29 AM »
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Sunder ehsaas...jaise ho aap beeti kahaani....good poem Varsha..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo un dino ki romaantic pyaar bhari baatein
Chhup-chhup kar hoti thee wo mulaaquatein

Yaad ban kar reh gaye hain wo sab haseen lamhe
Sach hai bhule naa bhulaaye jaayein wo lamhe





kuch lamhe apno ne jeete
 kuch lamhe khud ne hare
 jete ki hare kisse ho gaye purane
yade hi jinko bhule na bhulaye
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veenavarsha
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2011, 05:10:16 AM »
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Bahut umda veena varsha ji....
thanks
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2011, 04:02:22 PM »
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Sach hai jeet-haar ka kya hisaab lagaayein
Kisse jo ho gaye he puraane kyu dohraayein

Waqt ka marhum jin ghavoon ko bhar gaya
Yaadon mai bhi hum unko bhule na bhulay


kuch lamhe apno ne jeete
 kuch lamhe khud ne hare
 jete ki hare kisse ho gaye purane
yade hi jinko bhule na bhulaye
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 11:26:14 AM »
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veena ji yakinan apne ye dil se likha se.........ek request he bura mat maniyega......ise rhyme me lene ki koshish kijiye....is potery ka maja double se bhi kahi jyada ho jayega.........theme is excellent and words r also very supporting ..... keep it up dear

sukriya
koshish karenge agar kar paye to
aapki sakaratamak prernadayak sarahana  ka ati ati dhanywad
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2012, 11:35:19 AM »
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Sach hai jeet-haar ka kya hisaab lagaayein
Kisse jo ho gaye he puraane kyu dohraayein

Waqt ka marhum jin ghavoon ko bhar gaya
Yaadon mai bhi hum unko bhule na bhulay



lik kar yu hi khush ho lete hai
umda pad kar kuch kah dete hai
bhul kar jaye bhi kaha
yado k panne palatte rahte hai
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