Bite din ka nazrana...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 06, 2011, 07:13:28 PM
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Leherate hue kadmo se terra kamre mein aana,
nigahe jhuka k muskurate hue terra vo sharmana,

apna kaam karne ko terra kuch pal door jana,
phir pani pioge puchne k liye terre vo awaz lagana,

mujhe merri jaan na paani ki pyas thi na terri mezbani ki,
bus mujhe chahiye hamesha terri inhi adao ka khazana,

haya k parde ko kuch waqt bhul k terra merre paas akar baithna,
kaise ho puchte hue terra merre chehre se apni nigah na hatana,

hamare milan k us khushnasib pal mein merre lab khamosh ho gye,
ek lafz nhi nikal paya bus jawab mein sir haan mein hilana,

na na kehte hue tum mujhse khane ki zidd karne lage,
merre na khane pe apne hatho se ufff vo terra itna pyar se khilana,

gharwalo se thodi fursat paake hum dekhte rahe use barsat ko,
phir mausam ki nazakat aur vo aur kareeb aane ka bahana,

milan ki tadap dil mein per gharwalo k aane ka khauf bhi,
kuch lamho k liye vo likhna labo pe apni mhbt ka fasana,

laut jane ki ghadi jab kareeb aayi dil udas hone laga,
per tanha nhi tha pyar hamara ankho mein tha bite din ka khubsurat nazrana.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2011, 07:58:18 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2011, 11:17:58 AM »
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Wow vry romantic,kya baat hai Geet ji,bahu hi koobsurt peshkash,keep it up,has off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2011, 03:22:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya madhu ji n priya ji..
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2011, 01:56:21 PM »
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Wow geet its beautiful mujhe romantic poetries hi zyada pasand hain islie inhi par comment karti hu..i really loved these lines good work geet ji take care
Diya
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 05:01:00 PM »
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Quote from: rooh-e-ibadat on March 10, 2011, 01:56:21 PM
Wow geet its beautiful mujhe romantic poetries hi zyada pasand hain islie inhi par comment karti hu..i really loved these lines good work geet ji take care
Diya
Thnx alot diya ji i knw u didnt like much tht poem which i wrote for u n fahim ji but u can surely use my other poems if u think they smehow suits ur story...thnx alot for ur support.take care..
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 05:51:08 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Brokenbyluv Ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2011, 05:52:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya humdum ji..
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2011, 08:56:07 PM »
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Geet ji badi he romaantic poem likhi hai aapne.....Ek pati-patni ke din ki poori dincharyaa ka mast varnan hai ji
dil padh kar Garden-garden ho gayaa ji....Aur ess pic ne tou armaan jagaa diye ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Par Geetji aysa laga k pehli 10 lines pati /premi keh rahaa hai aur aakhari 8 lines patni /premikaa keh rahi hai.....kamaal hai aap dono ki feelings likh leti hain.....



Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 06, 2011, 07:13:28 PM


Leherate hue kadmo se terra kamre mein aana,
nigahe jhuka k muskurate hue terra vo sharmana,

apna kaam karne ko terra kuch pal door jana,
phir pani pioge puchne k liye terre vo awaz lagana,

mujhe merri jaan na paani ki pyas thi na terri mezbani ki,
bus mujhe chahiye hamesha terri inhi adao ka khazana,

haya k parde ko kuch waqt bhul k terra merre paas akar baithna,
kaise ho puchte hue terra merre chehre se apni nigah na hatana,

hamare milan k us khushnasib pal mein merre lab khamosh ho gye,
ek lafz nhi nikal paya bus jawab mein sir haan mein hilana,

na na kehte hue tum mujhse khane ki zidd karne lage,
merre na khane pe apne hatho se ufff vo terra itna pyar se khilana,

gharwalo se thodi fursat paake hum dekhte rahe use barsat ko,
phir mausam ki nazakat aur vo aur kareeb aane ka bahana,

milan ki tadap dil mein per gharwalo k aane ka khauf bhi,
kuch lamho k liye vo likhna labo pe apni mhbt ka fasana,

laut jane ki ghadi jab kareeb aayi dil udas hone laga,
per tanha nhi tha pyar hamara ankho mein tha bite din ka khubsurat nazrana.........
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2011, 02:18:41 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on March 10, 2011, 08:56:07 PM
Geet ji badi he romaantic poem likhi hai aapne.....Ek pati-patni ke din ki poori dincharyaa ka mast varnan hai ji
dil padh kar Garden-garden ho gayaa ji....Aur ess pic ne tou armaan jagaa diye ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Par Geetji aysa laga k pehli 10 lines pati /premi keh rahaa hai aur aakhari 8 lines patni /premikaa keh rahi hai.....kamaal hai aap dono ki feelings likh leti hain.....



Kya baat hai anaam ji maine gaur nhi kiya per ho sakta hai padhne mein apko aesa laga ho khair aur kya kahu main shukriya merri kavita ko itni baariki se padhne aur use pasand karne k liye..Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2011, 06:39:50 PM »
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Geet ji aap likhti he itna badhiya hain k har lafz padhnaa padta hai ji...... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Aap bhi padhengi tou baar baar padhti he rahengi.....aysa mast likhti hain aap....
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«Reply #11 on: March 11, 2011, 06:53:21 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 06, 2011, 07:13:28 PM

Leherate hue kadmo se terra kamre mein aana,
nigahe jhuka k muskurate hue terra vo sharmana,

apna kaam karne ko terra kuch pal door jana,
phir pani pioge puchne k liye terre vo awaz lagana,

mujhe merri jaan na paani ki pyas thi na terri mezbani ki,
bus mujhe chahiye hamesha terri inhi adao ka khazana,

haya k parde ko kuch waqt bhul k terra merre paas akar baithna,
kaise ho puchte hue terra merre chehre se apni nigah na hatana,

hamare milan k us khushnasib pal mein merre lab khamosh ho gye,
ek lafz nhi nikal paya bus jawab mein sir haan mein hilana,

na na kehte hue tum mujhse khane ki zidd karne lage,
merre na khane pe apne hatho se ufff vo terra itna pyar se khilana,

gharwalo se thodi fursat paake hum dekhte rahe use barsat ko,
phir mausam ki nazakat aur vo aur kareeb aane ka bahana,

milan ki tadap dil mein per gharwalo k aane ka khauf bhi,
kuch lamho k liye vo likhna labo pe apni mhbt ka fasana,

laut jane ki ghadi jab kareeb aayi dil udas hone laga,
per tanha nhi tha pyar hamara ankho mein tha bite din ka khubsurat nazrana.........


Very Romantic ... Very Touching ...... Broken Ji !
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2011, 03:00:45 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya anaam ji aur naresh ji.
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