Bohat Dard Hai Dil Ke Paas Aaj..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on June 03, 2013, 05:31:12 PM
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Bohat Dard Hai Dil Ke Paas Aaj,
Jazbaat HaiN Bohat Udaas Aaj..!!

Kayi Rishte HaiN Saath Phir Bhi,
Bohat Tanhaa Hai Ehsaas Aaj..!!

Nahi Bhujhti Hai AshqoN Se Bhi,
Kaisi Hai LaboN Par Pyaas Aaj..!!

Naa Din Guzare, Naa Raat Dhale,
Ho Rahi UmeedieN Be-Aas Aaj..!!

Be-Mazaa Har Khushi Tere Bin,
Kho Gayi Zindagi Ki Mithaas Aaj..!!

Pukaare Tum Ko Mohabbat Meri,
Aa Jaao Kisi Tarah Se Paas Aaj..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2013, 05:32:32 PM »
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bohat umdaa bohat khoob shirin ji ,..........bohat c daad,.....
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2013, 05:48:39 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Shireenji bahut khoobsurati se likha hai aapne.....dil ko choo gaye aapke bikhere jasbaat....
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2013, 05:55:01 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Shireeji,
Bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dil mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2013, 06:23:34 PM »
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Bohat Dard Hai Dil Ke Paas Aaj,
Jazbaat HaiN Bohat Udaas Aaj..!!

Kayi Rishte HaiN Saath Phir Bhi,
Bohat Tanhaa Hai Ehsaas Aaj..!!

Nahi Bhujhti Hai AshqoN Se Bhi,
Kaisi Hai LaboN Par Pyaas Aaj..!!

Naa Din Guzare, Naa Raat Dhale,
Ho Rahi UmeedieN Be-Aas Aaj..!!

Be-Mazaa Har Khushi Tere Bin,
Kho Gayi Zindagi Ki Mithaas Aaj..!!

Pukaare Tum Ko Mohabbat Meri,
Aa Jaao Kisi Tarah Se Paas Aaj..!!

Shireen Hakani


bahut khoob.......!
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2013, 06:44:40 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2013, 07:17:45 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2013, 07:29:23 PM »
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bahut khoob shireenji. badi achchi ghazal rahi aapki. achche khayalon se saji hai. dili daad qubool ho.
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2013, 07:44:19 PM »
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khoobasurat gazal hai shireen jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2013, 08:03:06 PM »
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nice ghazal.congrats.
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«Reply #10 on: June 04, 2013, 12:45:52 PM »
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Bahut umdaa!

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«Reply #11 on: June 04, 2013, 02:22:37 PM »
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bahut sunder aaj aapkee shayree ko pankh lag gaye hain aap aur oonchee parwaaz par jaayen esee meree duaa hai
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«Reply #12 on: June 04, 2013, 02:28:19 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #13 on: June 04, 2013, 03:03:12 PM »
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just superb creation shireen ji...hazaron daad aur mubarkbaad qabul farmayein.... with one rau...


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«Reply #14 on: June 04, 2013, 08:04:20 PM »
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Bohat Dard Hai Dil Ke Paas Aaj,
Jazbaat HaiN Bohat Udaas Aaj..!!

bohut khoob kaha hai ,,lajawaab shireen ji
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